VN - Ren'Py - FreshWomen [S2 Ep.2 Part 3] [OppaiMan]

This is a tough review to write. On one hand, the renders and animations are outstanding. On the other hand, what good is an animation if you can't reach a climax because the scenario is just not believable. I mean, there has to be a small amount of immersion and the writing of this novel gives no immersion. There is really no build up before everyone is naked and the MC has some stupid look on his face. I don't think I have ever disliked a MC as much as the one in this novel (bad writing + weird as fuc$ facial expressions). Just, no. Voice acting is good, but if the dialogue sucks, voicing it does not help. If you are looking for quick release to animations, as good as they are, these animations will never compare to free porn. Such is life.

The character modeling design is very outstanding, and the voice of the female character was updated not long ago, but the disadvantage is that the story is very lack of logic, and the dialogue content is empty, 4/5

Everyone is raving about the graphics and I have to say they are way over rated. I would call them immersion breaking and lazy. The first episode was espcially bad with that "library filled with history books" which was just like 5 books over and over. Also having to hand in paper work at the college, thank god those random math papers got in on time. The graphics should make sense for the scene and show what is described.

When I first played the game I thought the story seemed like it could be interesting trying to find out what happened to your dad surrounded by people lying to you, and then I didn't play it for a while.....It seems the story has fallen apart. The game is more like a kinetic novel where you have the odd choice that says " have sex, yes or no?" Because no choices seem to change anything.

The actual story itself was never perfect with a protagonists only defining quality being dance dance revolution, but some of the earlier episodes were better before we got deeper into the mystery and the MC just started believing and doubting people no matter what choices you make.

The audio is one of the strangest things about this game. The game is fully voice worked and is a great example of why vn's don't need voice work. Thanks for the mute options. And if you have the voices on the background music is so quiet in comparison you can barely hear it.

The graphics are vibrant and colorful, making the experience visually appealing and captivating. In addition, the music and sound effects perfectly complement the atmosphere of the game and its animations improve with each update, you are the best.

Renders are top tier, not absolute peak but just under which is great.

Game feels very polished and professionally handled which you can't say about a lot of the genre. The polish alone elevates it to a must play IMO.

A good game, four stars is probably right around where it belongs.
The visuals are great. Renders and framing are all really well done. The animations are great too.
The characters are all decently written and the game is written by someone with a good command of the English language. That being said the narrative itself is just average. There is some mystery and a bit of drama but it doesn't do enough narratively imo to push this into top tier category.
The sex scenes are very well done and have the added bonus of decent VA to go along with the excellent animations.
Overall a solid college harem game that is recommend for pretty much everyone

Excelent game with a lot of potential. Dev is very active and trying his best to bring the best experience possible to the players. Hope to see more and faster updates, while maintaining the quality of the renders.

Beautiful renders, interesting start to the story. Will play more.
For me personally it has the usual "problem" of having too many women with too big breasts but.. at least it has some cuties with smaller ones too!

The character designs look amazing and original. One of the cleanest and best renders so far. The story is quite catching and interesting. Playing the game right now!
To all the devs keep up the good work! ♥

The story is intesting enough for me, the music is enjoyable and artwork is the most important things the girls art looks so pretty include the animations. I Cant find any bugs in the game and that make it better

Something's off. Dude used to deliver + 1000 renders per update when he didn't have the team he has now. Correct me if I'm wrong, but from what I remember there are about 15 pplz in his team atm. The updates are taking more time because of the 4K obsession and we got + 300 or +400 renders in the last two updates. This isn't a troll, but I feel like I'm missing something. I don't understand. I really like his work, but he's betting too much on quality since several months, if not + 1 year.

Truth be told : I prefer the time when he had only a few pplz and delivered more loaded updates. When you try to get too close to the sun, you end up getting burned.

Decent story (so far...still a bit early on), beautiful LIs, and high quality renders. I usually prefer smaller breasts, but I know most prefer these over a more realistic mix of body types. While I've only seen the dream animations, they look very promising.

Just a wonderful game. I never get bored playing it. It is hillarous and the characters are pretty exciting. I also love the soundtrack, they make really good decisions choosing the artists according to the scenes.

I really liked Chloe and Julia as characters a bit more believable and likeable.
Some sex scenes left smt to be desired but the details and quality makes up for it. I think it's worth to play it was fun.

English: 9/10
User Interface: 5/10
User Experience: 7/10
Art: 9/10
Dialogue: 6/10
Story: 3/10
Opinion: 3/10
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Avg: 6.0/10 [3/5]

This is another "game" I've avoided even playing since I first saw it pop up on this site. From everything I've seen and read in reviews, I guarantee it is just lowest common denominator porn game nothings with a focus on looking good and nothing more. I'll call it now, before starting, a boring 'everyman' MC has a bunch of contrived interactions with the same 12 DAZ models you see all the time and the solution to all their issues end up being his penis. That's boring. Can't wait. And I know I'll probably get flak with things like "You're just jealous they make money." or "You want to tear down something good." To the prior: No. I'm sad that the same thing that happens to real gaming, people saying a game is good because 'iT hAvE gUd gRaFiK" when the story and gameplay are terrible or boring. And to the latter, if it was good I couldn't tear it down, could I? Long-winded rant about the terrible state of consumerism aside, I'm still gonna go through this and say what I think. Immediately, I'm worried it will be a perpetual patreon milker that will never go away, but here's hoping the story has an end. The hilarious truth is this is just another "Corporate Espionage/Mafia" story with the added MC has amnesia trope AND MC goes to college. So... Originality is baked into this, I'm sure.

Basically, you play as MC. He just moved to a new town to go to college, start a new job. Oh! And investigate his shady father's death/disappearance after he got amnesia from a lightning strike. And so the dev knows, Lichtenberg markings only last a few days, sorry to spoil it for you. It'd be cool if they stayed, but don't. Anywho, right away, you meet the lonely and very obviously sexually frustrated landlady. That for ONCE, is actually a landlady. Even if here in the states we call everyone, regardless of gender, landlord. Or soul sucking rent gouger. Either way, MC meets her, he somehow lands the luckiest deal of all time where he lives for free and works less than part time while going to college. Fresh off amnesia. Glad he remembers academics. Then you meet the LI's. Chloe the voyeuristic bookworm, Julia the virgin gamer weeb, Alyssa the dancer/fitness chick, Sue the abrasive "...goth" one, Emily the exhibitionist, and Susan the aunt type that is also his boss. When meeting them or something less than exciting happening, it's chock full of weird dutch angles zooming right up their ass crack. God forbid you get bored looking at cleavage so deep it meets their pelvis.You also meet Dylan. A kid pretending to be Russian... For some reason? He's tired of talking to girls and wants to get MC laid... For some reason? I don't understand why he exists. I guess he's there to be attracted to the DAZ models that would be considered conventionally unattractive. You know, so MC can have all the supermodels to himself. You get your idle pleasantries and stupid introductions out of the way. Every interaction happening in a bubble and feeling like they were written by different people. Seriously. Lily has the typical older woman porn VN writing. Alyssa seems almost personable outside of the daydreaming about her tits. Then Julia has this LOLRANDOM gamer 420 whacky vibe. If it were written well, it'd be a rollercoaster.

MC continues his wet blanket self along, meeting people, yadda yadda. Then Sue picks him up because she has to pick something up for Susan, but Susan is there. There is no universe in the infinite multiverse that THAT ever makes sense. "Hey go to my second home to pick up my suitcase, I'll be there, but you do it." Did anyone read this before putting it together? Yes, I know hundreds of people read and proofread for them, probably paid them to do it too. But did anyone take in the information and evaluate it to say "Hm. That's less than smart." No. And Sue, the lookout, goes off to sunbathe topless? They also reveal that Susan is Sue's aunt by marriage even though they look like mother and daughter and sound and act the same. Their names are even similar. But, you know, don't think too much, just keep rubbin' one out. Then Lily calls MC pretending to want him to work on the sink and gets shocked when MC gets his turbo virgin boner when her dress suddenly becomes transparent. She deliberately called him drunk and naked. Sure, you weren't setting that up. And she goes to change out of wet clothes, but MC's shrivelled up tiktok brain couldn't sit and wait longer than 30 seconds so he pretty much barges into this woman room while she supposedly changing. Followed by the tired ass anime trope of slipping on her and something embarrassing happening. Then they both go through olympic level mental gymnastics to say they're desperately horny for each other. So sex happens, the husband that LITERALLY JUST CALLED TO SAY HE'LL BE OUT OF TOWN FOR ANOTHER WEEK COMES HOME? Wow.

Every situation is pretty much that. MC exists as some nice guy, the girl gives no signal that she likes him, then you get an option for sex/kissing. Alyssa? He helps her clean, they talk about missing dads, they kiss. Julia? They play games, watch a movie, she's never heard of sex before and gets horny. Sue? They get locked in a room, that would lock from the inside? She gets cold, puts her hands on his crotch, and gaslights him to yell at her because that does it for her, sex happens. And they reset a circuit breaker to reset something that is turned off? That's ALSO not how that works. Ending with a cryptic line from Susan. Leading into her heart of gold for charlie? Then more sex with two random girls that locked up Dylan. Then you meet up with Chloe and Alyssa, MC's first thought is Alyssa wouldn't want him to be friends with a girl because they tentatively got together. Never mind the five girls he's been intimate with since saying he wouldn't hurt her. But he also sees it as a threesome opportunity. Cool. Eventually tries to confront Lily about his dad, but the comically evil bad guy (that turns into a red herring due to critique, I'm sure)shows up, suddenly owns the building MC lives in and kicks him out unlawfully. He is worried about it for maybe 10 seconds, you finally see the alyssa sex scene, then you make the first actual choice in the game. "Where to stay." But it just gives you a talking scene with the character of your choice and one updoot toward them. When you FINALLY get to the college part of this college story, Gabby, a new girl, is immediately smitten with MC and have sex with her. There's no real effort happening. Go to place, see girl, talk about plot and leave, or help her and then sex happens. That is every interaction.

Finally, you get to the climax of the season, the "twist" is revealed. The second season opens up, tells the answer to everything. As a surprise to NO ONE, everything you thought happened, happened. There is no reason for the story to go on other than the sex drama. But drama can't exist in stories like these, unless it's between MC and his father. This isn't going to go anywhere interesting. No one will do anything. All the women will suddenly be cuckqueans to facilitate MC for the next infinitum (which Chloe kicks off). It all builds up to MC finally having sex with Susan, I'm sure. And this will be milked forever. My two cents would be: Just make adult animations, at least we don't have to click 40 times in between poses.

Really, this is the first time a game is actually proofread with decent grammar and it still gave me a headache. I think I saw two lines that had weird grammar mistakes and while I'm thankful for it, that doesn't mean the story's any good. The UI/UX is sort of customized, new images and a font or two, but it's still just default renpy with a twist. The art is good. I really don't give a care that "Animations are in 'GLORIOUS' 60fps." Nobody needs that. All of season one, the animations still looked like they we floating in jello. It's all so slow. They speed up a little in s2, but it still looks like it's in slow motion. The dialogue is fine, and inoffensive. Very safe. Very "I'm not too weak, but not too alpha, not too nerdy, but not too Fonzie." See what I mean? And the story is the same "Dad did something when I was a kid, now I have to figure out what." you see everywhere. So like I said, boring. Over-developed, bloated, lowest common denominator nothingness. If this does it for you, by all means, I'm jealous. But if they actually wrote a good story, could you imagine? The visuals are top notch. I just wish they'd hire a writer instead of buy another 4090 to pump out slow motion 4K60 sex scenes.

One of, if not the best, modeled and animated games out there. Add in touches of humor and a moderately likeable MC and you've got a helluva game. Also, the production quality seems to somehow get better each release, so well worth watching.

The selling point of this game is 100% the sex. Good looking models with high quality renders and animations along with plenty of scenes. The LI's are all different from each other but very stereotypical, from the spoiled rebel girl to the nerdy gamer girl or the virgin book club girl.
The plot of the game started off interesting but it lost most of the steam along the way since i found the MC to be pretty boring and the story fails to be engaging with the dialogue feeling like it was written by a 12 yr old, with that being said i've seen worse in AVNs.
However the game knows it's strengths and plays around them well so it's not surprising how popular this game is.

So far, so good. There is something interesting happening story-wise and I want to find out what it is. The character models are high quality and the H scenes are good for what they are. There is a lot of quality, but room for improvement.

Until now I'm liking the game, It would be better if it was something like you you shaping the character based on your choices instead of him having a pre-set personality though. But the textures of the girls is really beautiful, just wish there was more options on the choices of interactions them 2 or 3 and almost all are just perverted (Lol, it's not like this is some kind of full romance though so I understand why, that's just me being annoying so don't care about it). But some times it's just like your choices don't match with the Main Character behavior, and that makes you feel like your choices are there just for show and nothing else.

PS: You may find my grammar quite disturbing, but that's because it is not my main language.

Renders: 5/5, not much to say, this is game’s strongest aspect.
Story: 2/5, i mean there is a story but it is all over the place
Characters: 3/5, they are not bad but a little over the top. Like they are out of a sitcom.
Gameplay: 3/5, i mean this is a VN so the only thing we can count as a gameplay is the outcomes of choices and i can’t say they are very effective.

Now you might wonder why i gave 1 star after my relatively better experience. Let me explain. Normally you expect to receive more renders in shorter time. That is not happening in this game.It came out with 1000ish renders, in 3 months second update came with 700-800 renders and this habit persisted.Last update came out 6 months after the previous one with 300 renders. That is the sign of a game turning into a milking scheme which we saw millions of times.That is why this game deserves a 1 star.