I would love to give you a 2.5, instead of a 2, i think that technically you are one of the best on this page, your renders are great, the designs of the female characters are fantastic, but the plot of this VN is cliche, boring cliche, and it is very disorganized.
I explain my self:
-The MC has no development, all women want to fuck with him (Hot
beautiful women), despite the fact that physically he is average, and half stupid and no personality.
-The cliche and unreal monster cock (boring).
-The fetish of the enormous breasts , dude, pls, you destroy the harmony of many of your designs by placing those mega tits, they are not necessary, personal opinion.
-The lack of personality of a vast majority of characters, makes reading this VN boring and uninteresting.
-I know I'm repetitive, but there are many cliches, bad cliches, the personality of several characters translates into very simple cliches, the Geek and sexy girl, the sexy streamer, the sexy bad girl, etc, and of course they all want to fuck with you, because yes.
-Lack of decision making, the decision making in this game are quite irrelevant, they don't impact, they don't change, they don't affect anything in the plot, they are only as something aesthetic.
-And lastly, the story, it's hard to get hooked or interested in the story, when the MC is so mundane and stupid, a main character has to have progression, personality, character, etc.
Sorry for being so "harsh", i think that technically you are very good, your designs, your lighting level, angles, etc, but the narrative level you need to practice more, or find someone to do that for you, to get the most out of your visual skills, greetings.
P.D: Sorry for my "engrish".