At the beginning of the story I felt as I'm the MC. Maybe because I also went through MC's life difficulties. The game is very immersive, with exelent writing and decent visuals. Sex scenes are very kinky and BDSM/dom/sub fetish options for all of them. It seems a bit text-heavy at times, but that is needed for it to be highly immersive. Keep in mind that the many subtle choiced really DO matter! This offers you the added value of replayability.
What can be improved: Add Sound, or atleast background music. Translation. While most of the text is in excellent English, there are some figures of speech or words which are not even in English. Like "docent". Another was calling MC's dick "numbers" (I suspect author is from Eastern Europe). Anyway, that can easily be fixed.
Third thing is: MC's clothes are atrocious! Sweaters in the summer or in the bar? That certainly breaks the immersion.
Keep up the good work!
What can be improved: Add Sound, or atleast background music. Translation. While most of the text is in excellent English, there are some figures of speech or words which are not even in English. Like "docent". Another was calling MC's dick "numbers" (I suspect author is from Eastern Europe). Anyway, that can easily be fixed.
Third thing is: MC's clothes are atrocious! Sweaters in the summer or in the bar? That certainly breaks the immersion.
Keep up the good work!