VN Ren'Py From Wife to Wench [Ch.5] [ForeverLosing]

[manu_4]

Hey dev, first of all, great NTS game! The way it's written as slowburn but actually has intense, exciting scenes is A+. You're a hell of a writer to me, personally, since I've seen few NTS games with a story as good as this.

Second of all, is the femininization/sissification tied to the masochistic part of the NTS route, or is that an entirely different part? Would be great to know, since I like maso/humilliation NTS, but not the sissy parts. Again, great game!

 

[SilverDog11]

Hey Dev, just a quick question. Which tier level in Patreon gives Chapter 5 tomorrow?

 

[Oriandu]

Main woman has serious pinhead syndrome going on. She's got a disproportionately small head.

 

[ForeverLosing]

Hey Dev, just a quick question. Which tier level in Patreon gives Chapter 5 tomorrow?

Adventurers

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Thank you so much for the amazing feedback! Feminization is its own substory and entirely optional, entirely decoupled from masochism and humiliation. Just don't transform into a femmeC when given the opportunity, and seek out the Debased trait! You'll love it.

Question: Can you shape the MC personality?

Sort of; you can either be dominant or submissive, can choose which relationships you pursue (for both yourself and your wife), and can choose whether to go down the feminization path or not.

As for insecurity/etc, early on in the story the MC is naturally unsure of himself and insecure, but over time he gains confidence in himself regardless of what path you're on. I tried to make it feel natural for a peasant farmboy thrust into a setting with adventurers and such.

 

[ForeverLosing]

Main woman has serious pinhead syndrome going on. She's got a disproportionately small head.

Yeah I'm finally getting new standing art drawn up for her for Ch6 lol. Hers was some of the first art I ever drew in my life, so the proportions were uh... interesting

 

[mrlucymaru2112]

Where is chapter 5

 

[ForeverLosing]

Where is chapter 5

On my hard drive 98% finished... we're getting there.

 

[Pachirisu]

First of all, thank you so much for your in-depth and enthusiastic review!

A degenerate I take counsel with was thinking about a cowgirl outfit being Victor's unique outfit for Cassandra. You know, short jean skirt, tied top, cowgirl boots. I was thinking an actual cowprint bikini would fit somewhere on Danton's route, as part of his humiliation of Cass (I actually have something small planned for this for Chapter 6 -- making her wear a cowbell while she works if a certain parameter is met in Chapter 5).

The cumbath is a fantastic idea, however. I need to see where I can work that in.

You're welcome, in regard to the review. This is definitely the game I am most excited about, and enjoy talking about how it is playing out with a friend of mine, who only gets more interested with each update. I figure that much feedback helps with motivation and whatnot.

As for the rest, I support all this! Cowgirl style outfit, cow print or not, totally fits the vibe of Cassandra milking Victor in the stable. Her wearing cow bell and cow print for Danton sounds fantastic too! Especially if he milks her once she starts lactating

Cumbath was just a funny thought I had once I saw how much it affected the MC, and was like "Now what would happen if the centaur that already shoots gallons took this?" I eagerly await the results lol

 

[Brave Armadillo]

Sorry about not being as degenerate as I should be, but is there a route where I (as the husband) allow the bar patrons to molest and strip my wife, but it is *I* who "takes care of her" after she gets all hot and bothered? Sort of a "you can look, you can touch, but she is MINE" situation/ending, where she can perform "services", but only does the "deed" with me? I don't mind if they watch though. A voyeur(me)/exhibitionist(her) route.

For that matter, if sissification on the table, can we turn the elf into a full girl then? I kinda want to get HER all hot and bothered too. If that NTR Ranger can get all the girls to make ahegao faces, why can't I? You can't say my character doesn't have the motivation to step up to the plate to save his marriage AND get a side chick for his troubles. Heck, let's train the elf to be one who becomes the drooling slut while the wife and I watch.

My deepest apologies to all the NTR lovers out there, but I believe for every NTR path there should be a just-as-naughty way out, preferably involving sexy cosplay outifts and even sexier lingerie.

My wife wants to become sluttier? That's fine, now put on this maid brim and call me "master".

 

[ForeverLosing]

Sorry about not being as degenerate as I should be, but is there a route where I (as the husband) allow the bar patrons to molest and strip my wife, but it is *I* who "takes care of her" after she gets all hot and bothered? Sort of a "you can look, you can touch, but she is MINE" situation/ending, where she can perform "services", but only does the "deed" with me? I don't mind if they watch though. A voyeur(me)/exhibitionist(her) route.

If by "deed" you mean vaginal/anal sex, then yeah the husband can opt out of all of that even on the netorase routes.

If you mean all sexual conduct, technically you can do this by rivaling all of the suitors, but you'd be missing out on around 80% of the game's content so this might not be the game for you.

And no, the elf won't be losing her penis. She's quite fond of it.

 

[xLordByronx]

Our wonderful dev ForeverLosing, I would like to query with the utmost eloquence and restraint, quite satisfied with the teasing until now, how far are we from seeing our wife getting plowed into oblivion and bred like a rabbit? A few or a lot of updates in the future? I am very intrigued by the presumed later appearance of the horny goddess, since she promised to treat our wife tenderly when doing the deed.

Thank you kindly for your most excellent, and nasty, work. Hopefully we will see more fetishes and kinks too (I recommend the paraphilia list in Wikipedia )

 

[Touché Pussy Cat]

been a while since ive seen a ntr game with similar art. All I see these days are AI arts

 

[Cat_On_Fire]

Any chance of an android port?

 

[rosh3n]

Danton and Kai so far are my favorites beside the wife and husband's interactions.

Two bros you occasionally gang up with on her.

Any possibility for events they both join in the future?

Haven't tried the rival path yet.

 

[TheInevitableMrE]

Are there any actual sex scenes outside the husband yet, or is it all just hand and thigh still?

 

[asaness]

Are there any actual sex scenes outside the husband yet, or is it all just hand and thigh still?

If i red the preview right for chapter 5 she is going start sucking dick of the other characters now? since so far she only sucked MC and the centuar iirc

 

[ForeverLosing]

Danton and Kai so far are my favorites beside the wife and husband's interactions.

Two bros you occasionally gang up with on her.

Any possibility for events they both join in the future?

Haven't tried the rival path yet.

I have a few ideas, but I'm trying to limit the amount of cross-suitor events due to narrative bloat. I want her to get in a Zarathan blowbang, and then a proper DP when she's fully slutted up (with MC taking her mouth/hands, seeing the lust in her eyes).

If the player is only on one of their routes (say, Cassandra is fooling around with Danton but not Kai), then that suitor would invite one of their "friends" to take up the second position in that scene.

 

[Kyios]

I'm aware of the disclaimer in the OP, but as someone who mainly plays these games for the corruption and exhibitionism aspects, I'm very grateful for the opt outs and narrative choice. I see the variables you're juggling behind the scenes, and it certainly does look like a lot of work and writing. Are you planning to make any of the future unavoidable scenes (like the Kai sunstone scene) go beyond looking and touching?

Also, love the concept of the persistent rules like the curtsy and RoE, and how they get potentially broken depending on love and other flags. Good luck and I hope to see more of your work in the future.

 

[ForeverLosing]

Are you planning to make any of the future unavoidable scenes (like the Kai sunstone scene) go beyond looking and touching?

I'm not planning on it, but I can't make any promises. My goal is to have enough choice in the game so players can reach a "happy monogamous ending" at the end of part 1 (chapter 14-15), where Cassandra never had sex with another suitor and she and MC live happily ever after with a big family.

Those particular saves wouldn't be able to go into Part 2 though (which will be pure debauchery).

 

[Yokanzo]

I'm not planning on it, but I can't make any promises. My goal is to have enough choice in the game so players can reach a "happy monogamous ending" at the end of part 1 (chapter 14-15), where Cassandra never had sex with another suitor and she and MC live happily ever after with a big family.

Those particular saves wouldn't be able to go into Part 2 though (which will be pure debauchery).

Are there going to be routes where the wife exclusively bears multiple children from other lovers? Or makes her husband eat her creampies?