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4.10 star(s) 19 Votes

Greily

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why do you want the dev to damage the game they worked hard for?
Personally I wouldn't mind some rivalry.

The only problem is no one wants to write that.

MCs are either mega Chads in a vacuum or wimps who can't hold onto what's theirs. Let alone a hero who can win the hearts (and bodies) of the girls in spite of competition.

Admittedly though, nothing bugs me more then sneaky lesbo NTR. Lesbians are hot. Lesbians stealing my girls are not, just give me a chance to prove these hands are rated E for everyone.
 

Kamaraj

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Hmm good start, I like the hand drawn art. Will wait for a more substantial build to give it a rating
 

bruhdimension

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This looks interesting. But virtually everything but the character design is terrible.

Saying they moved to this town but his teacher had been teaching him for years. On top of that he's supposed to be in high school. Why's he so impressed with his classmate's growth over 6 months to 1 year?

NTR or not a mother is not going to tell her son that her date has a big dick and he's certainly not gonna be so casual about it. least not on the second date...

His sister is getting bullied even after she was transferred. Did her bully's family transfer to the same town? What?

Proof read your writing man. This reads like 5th grade reading comprehension. Smells like teen spirit though, dude doesn't hesitate to mark his territory. Poor laptop.
bro a real gooner
 

BisQDev

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Public version 0.3

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harem.king

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Lol I must say this is confusing, is she telling the Son that the person she was dating is well "endowed" in the sense that he has a big dick? (What mother says that to a son :LUL:)
> son: Hi mom, how was your day
> mom: my new boyfriend has a HUGE FUCKING COCK. like it is absolutely MASSIVE

lol. lmao even.
yea, perfectly normal dialog.
 

Sorreah

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1) The art is pretty good, I like it
2) There is a bug with the mom, if you choose not to mess with her when she's drunk, you do it anyway which brings me to...
3) can there please be a route with the mom that isn't creepy? Like, I don't mind perving on her when she's drunk and conscious, or masturbating, or peeping or whatever, but like...there is a difference between that and molesting her in her sleep and stuff.
4) didn't find anything that was particularly femdom? It's tagged, and I hate to think this...but you surely didn't tag it that because Alice is just a typical bratty older sister who threatens occasional violence, right?
5) grammar could use a lot of fixing. I've seen way worse, but this still needs a lot of work, also the lines read very mechanically at times and is very unnatural. If you're using a translation tool, I recommend DeepL over google translate.

That's all the feed back I have at the moment. This has some potential, but the content is sparse, at least for me considering I didn't feel like raping the mom in drunk state or sleep so, yeah.
 
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