Ren'Py Furtown: New Beginnings [v0.9] [BisCreates Studio]

[Sorreah]

1) The art is pretty good, I like it
2) There is a bug with the mom, if you choose not to mess with her when she's drunk, you do it anyway which brings me to...
3) can there please be a route with the mom that isn't creepy? Like, I don't mind perving on her when she's drunk and conscious, or masturbating, or peeping or whatever, but like...there is a difference between that and molesting her in her sleep and stuff.
4) didn't find anything that was particularly femdom? It's tagged, and I hate to think this...but you surely didn't tag it that because Alice is just a typical bratty older sister who threatens occasional violence, right?
5) grammar could use a lot of fixing. I've seen way worse, but this still needs a lot of work, also the lines read very mechanically at times and is very unnatural. If you're using a translation tool, I recommend DeepL over google translate.

That's all the feed back I have at the moment. This has some potential, but the content is sparse, at least for me considering I didn't feel like raping the mom in drunk state or sleep so, yeah.

 

[Tobais]

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As others have pointed out in the thread, plot was already kind of shaky, but 0.3 seems to throw it entirely out the window.
The other issues people have brought up could easily have been fixed with minor changes to dialog. I'm personally a fan of the mom getting very slutty when she's drunk and not remembering it though. However... This update goes down a point of no return that no minor dialog change would fix.
Say what you will about incest as a fetish, but, the initial hook is that it's a furry incest game with a human MC due to atavism. 0.3 has a surprise "The MC was adopted all along!" plot twist. This ruins the entire original draw of the game for more than a couple people I'd imagine. You will definitely not find fans in pulling the non-blood related (NBR) twist route. There are countless examples of popular series that have incest undertones completely decimating their audiences as soon as they try that. Even if this was done to skirt Patreon guidelines, you've done so at the cost of alienating potentially a large chunk of your audience. There are countless other ways to skirt that issue. I'd highly request either rethinking that change, or making it optional. I say this not only because I'm not a fan the change, but because it runs counter to the entire premise of the game's intro. Of course this is from random guy complaining on the internet and not someone paying you, so take it for what you will. Wish you the best either way.

 

[Soulpuppet]

Go ahead and remove the incest tag. They removed it. Now he's adopted.

 

[holaje12]

Go ahead and remove the incest tag. They removed it. Now he's adopted.

Isnt stepcest also banned on patreon?
Also choices dont seem to matter much in this game, you planning to fix that, dev? Or is it just going to be kinetic

 

[God of Debauchery]

Holy shit, a furry game that doesn't have the gay tag and doesn't feature massively buff dudes that look like over inflated balloon animals?!

 

[harem.king]

Isnt stepcest also banned on patreon?

it is indeed banned

 

[novatitan21]

is a nything animated or just still images?

 

[Daddums]

it is indeed banned

Honestly, the way Patreon is reaping anything NSFW right now, the dev really should have just put this on Substar or something.

 

[harem.king]

> I am Bi-fur highschool student. My name is...
> Bi-fur

ok this is so silly it is funny.
I think it is meant to be "half furry" maybe?

I am a bit confused on how a wolf mom has managed to produce a human child, a wolf child, and a cow child.
unless there are 3 different fathers involved. is mom the town bicycle?

edit:
ok I think what is happening is that you have 2 different furry parents. a wolf mom, a bull dad.
hence the "bi-fur". like bi-racial when both races are furries.
there is talk on maybe possibly activating your wolf gene late and transforming from human to wolf. As sometimes it happens during teen years instead of at birth.
so... its really more like some sort of were-creatures in this universe.

edit2:
nevermind. it does clarify right back.

So I have no idea what is going on genetically speaking

 

[harem.king]

Our artist who hand-drew the whole thing will be bloody offended to read this comment

... can someone please explain what is happening with the hands here:

her right hand has a thumb and an index finger.

her left hand has a super long thumb that flops over the index finger.
then the index finger has 2 "layers". one of which is doing some weird optical illusion thing where inner and outer lines are inverted.
then the remaining 3 fingers look normal.

that said.. I guess it is entirely possible to mess up hands even as a human drawing things by hand.

 

[harem.king]

View attachment 3596304
> I am Bi-fur highschool student. My name is...
> Bi-fur

ok this is so silly it is funny.
I think it is meant to be "half furry" maybe?

I am a bit confused on how a wolf mom has managed to produce a human child, a wolf child, and a cow child.
unless there are 3 different fathers involved. is mom the town bicycle?

edit:
ok I think what is happening is that you have 2 different furry parents. a wolf mom, a bull dad.
hence the "bi-fur". like bi-racial when both races are furries.
there is talk on maybe possibly activating your wolf gene late and transforming from human to wolf. As sometimes it happens during teen years instead of at birth.
so... its really more like some sort of were-creatures in this universe.

edit2:
nevermind. it does clarify right back.
View attachment 3596425
So I have no idea what is going on genetically speaking

Ok so... it all became clear at the end

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[harem.king]

Ok so. finished playing and this is actually pretty good.
Am waiting eagerly for more.
5 stars thus far.
but it is very early in development. So I am waiting a bit before actually rating it.

 

[bakemongamer]

Furry game and not gay. I'm in!

 

[jajjajjajaa]

Also guys I want to emphasise, there will never be a gay tag in the game, also no NTR, no futa, all this we do not plan and it will never happen

Yay
Aww
Yay

 

[Cornfield]

Not a "deep" story, but interesting and enjoyable.
PLEASE can the dialog box be smaller, or clearer. It blocks out about 25% of the screen.
My "H" key is getting worn out.

 

[ben-san123]

Wil all the FMC only love the MC or will they love other people also. Please let only the MC fuck them and they all should only love him. pls make it also actual incest rather than that he is adopted pls dev respond. Just make it that the mom was lying she had a boyfriend when in reality she is alone and make it so that that we can do all the heroine routes in one run

 

[XWhirlX]

Looking good so far. Instant watch list

 

[freshi85]

I really liked the game so far especially the chemestry between you and your sister, that is until the OF part.
I'll will watch this further but for the moment I don't like any of the characters besides the mother, in her only in a non sexual way.

 

[Tuperr0]

Niceee

 

[tobaday]

supposedly the 0.4v is out?