The renders are pretty nice, and I like the gurl designs, but the writing is just... Well, it's childish. And it's not that English is not the dev's native language (although they did seem to put some effort here, it's not perfect, but at least it's not Engrish), it's the writing itself. A lot of lines are repeated, motivations are one-sided, and the characters themselves feel bland. The premise is good, but the way things are handled is awful.
I get that it's a demo (hence why I gave it 2 stars instead of 1), but given that the writing isn't compelling, that there are no animations in the sex scenes, and no real content, I really don't see the point in supporting this project monetarily (not that I would have supported an actually good project either, but that's a different topic). The game has 5+ romanceable gurls, but they're all locked behind a paywall, even the first one, which has the most content here.
Geez, I miss the days before Patreon when people made stuff because they wanted to make stuff and not to get a quick buck.