Review of Version 0.0.5 first release.
Pro: Decent opening segment with some good characterization for the main character and pretty well written dialogue.
Serious Con: The character models are all over the shop, I get not wanting to make every character a super model but half of the characters look like Madame Tussauds wax models that have been partially melted. The best friend character Aida looks like she cut off someone else's face, shaved off it's eyebrows and is wearing it over her own face like a Michael Myers mask. There has to be a better middle ground for these designs.
Regardless the game is worth keeping an eye on because the writing and character personality is there and has a solid foundation but I seriously suggest having another go at these model designs.
Pro: Decent opening segment with some good characterization for the main character and pretty well written dialogue.
Serious Con: The character models are all over the shop, I get not wanting to make every character a super model but half of the characters look like Madame Tussauds wax models that have been partially melted. The best friend character Aida looks like she cut off someone else's face, shaved off it's eyebrows and is wearing it over her own face like a Michael Myers mask. There has to be a better middle ground for these designs.
Regardless the game is worth keeping an eye on because the writing and character personality is there and has a solid foundation but I seriously suggest having another go at these model designs.