VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Getaway with My Sisters [Final] [InkandTease]

I'm a sucker for brother/sister stories but this one was thin.

I appreciate that the models didn't have those god awful over sized boobs and butts so kudos there. The models are fine, faces at times looked a little off with some of the expressions.

The writing however needs some help. The dialog could use some polishing. To my thinking it shows a lack of experience.

The lewd scenes aren't much to speak of. The lack of animation is also a hinderance. Ordinarily I would give a VN like this one 2 stars but I'll go 3 just for the realistic proportions of the girls, something you don't see enough of.

The renders are sub average, very stilted and unnaturally static poses, and they don't show any action, or even appear to move. The models are pretty generic. So a bit disappointing.

The dialogue is dire. Aside from the grammatical errors, like the title not even being correct, as only one girl is his sister. There is one reference early on to her being his sister, and then nothing for the entire rest of the story. If you're going to write an incest story, you should be repeating the relationship to reinforce the connection. Where's the dialogue about it being taboo? Non-existent.

It is an incredibly generic, and poorly written story about three random characters who have a threesome, with one brief exchange at the start suggesting incest, and immediately forgotten.

The writing is also pretty far from being erotic. Just disappointing all around. I wouldn't waste your time.

way too short for a "complete" VN. i mean seriously. i've seen other VN last 5 times longer for the same game size and there's no real sex to speak of. If you want people to take you seriously, the devs really need to step up their game a lot. this almost fel like a commercial for their other games. you don't even get to be put back to the title screen at the end. no you are almost fored to click the link to their otehr games which goes who knows where. any sane person wouldn't click that link as basic precaution for the security of their computer

It's... better than the other one I suppose?

There's two minutes of content where your sister and her friend compete for your attention. There's no effort required, they are both utterly desperate.

In the end there's a shared blowjob, after some cringy dialogue where they both beg for you to put suncream on their tits

The renders are reasonable, models are great

I just struggle to understand the point in a 'game' requiring no input and lasting 2 minutes