Joke all you want, but if this keeps going, it might actually be better to just close GG and focus on Nezumicon instead. For now we only have a terrible writing, but I'd like to you see you joking around if stories become trash.
I understand the mistakes, some lack of polishment, but at this point they prevent you from enjoying the story, like at Maryen's route. A new player might just get confused: "What do you mean WE did? Why is she saying that? Did I miss something?". This cannot be ignored. VN is 50% text. If text is bad - VN is 50% bad.