VN - Unity - Completed - Girls! Girls! Girls!? [Rebirth + DLC] [Myosuki]

Non enjoyable characters and non realistic, breaking immersion by just talking about real world stuff and mostly venting their frustration as developers through their characters which had no place in the story.
The story was ok for the most part if this was the developers first ever game.
The owner and the debt issue did not make to much sense to me. The owner should have been more involved and the reason for the debt and how it got there rather then just make him the villain that just shows up once or twice two deliver the bad news.
The art was good nothing unique but very well done. The movement of the characters might have caused the art to look weird which happened when you would load the game and find that there is no face on the character or there are no arms and other body parts, something to work on for the next game.

90% text, 5% bullying, 5% H-scenes, this game has some of the most unlikeable characters i have ever seen. You come to this failing business, are forced to cut peoples hours, then they spend at least 400 lines of texting bitching at you for being a shitty manager, including having one of the characters sisters come in and publicly humiliate you. It's not even in a hot way like a femdom kind of thing, they're just needlessly hostile in the first 15 minutes of gameplay. If you make the characters unlikeable out of the gate, and make me grovel at their feet for approval, I'm not going to end up liking them.

Did not finish as the game takes years to get to anything remotely juicy, and the previous interactions make you resent the characters in a way i have never experienced in a VN before. The only reason i didn't rate it one star is i never finished it, so maybe they become top tier waifus who are supportive and kind, but if i had an interaction with these people, i would not want to get to know them better in the first place.

Perhaps earlier versions were better, but playing this 'Final' version, the game was a complete mess.

I didn't use any walkthrough, simply making logical choices as the story was presented, mostly simply trying to make good management decisions and not show too much favouritism to any one character while leaning toward appeasing the silver haired 'girl' the more.

Yet, somehow, and without any discernable reason, soon found myself surprisingly locked into some nonsensical romance path with what had been my least favourite choice of 'girl',(the pink/lilac haired one) with the story referring repeatedly to 'earlier' events that hadn't happened.

Just to be clear, there were no cheats used, no save file edits, no messing of any kind. The game's internal logic is simply completely broken when making pretty safe-seeming choices, and I have literally no clue at all how it could possibly have lead to a romance with the least favourite 'girl' in the story.

The artwork is very nice (so long as you like the anime style, of course). There's no voice acting, but personally I don't mind that at all, and actually prefer it sometimes when we get to imaging their voices for ourselves.

The story itself wasn't very special, but who knows how broken the route was and what might have been in the scenes that never happened that the playthrough somehow assumes (and states) were being counted.

However, while I can give one extra star for the fact there might be a CG rip aspect of appeal, with the script so utterly broken and the game making no narrative sense that way, I really can't justify giving this anything but a default one-star beneath that generous bonus.

Short but has great potential. The character designs are well done, and it's very well written.
It's rare to see a game about femboys that's supportive, and isn't all about mindbreaking the protagonist (Though it is implied that the MC might be able to try their hand at crossdressing).

There will also be adult content in the final game, as long as it's funded, so support the devs!

Edit: Also the first stretch goal adds a head-pat animations. It can't get lewder than that.

This game is "Nekopara with traps", even if the demo is short the game let you feel all the charm of the "girls" in the game, they are lovable characters, the story so far is pretty good and the art is also good (it uses 2d live so the "sprites" are animated), you should give it a try if you like traps or want to play a VN similar to nekopara.

As for the game itself is still on development (at the time of making this review), it is on kickstarter (if you want to support the developer).