VN - Ren'Py - Going Over [v0.8] [Delinquent Productions]

Version 0.3

The renders are really good (good lighting !), the premise is excellent.

The main problem I have with the game is it's pacing, it feels rushed, you don't really feel like you're living the protagonist's life because whenever an activity is mentionned, it happens right away.
One way you could fix this issue is by just putting side content in between the story events (even if it's a bit meaningless, actually meaningless is good to flesh out a world and make it believable) because at the moment it really feels more like a summary than a real story

As of reviewing the game is on 0.2.

This game has that spark of quality. The renders are all well thought out and good looking. The characters are distinct and personable. And it's got wrestling futas.

The writing is very good. Since it's in the early stages things are being set up clearly, and characters are introduced with their quirks and strong personalities. The relationships both new and old are being developed and explored, and the mc is becoming more comfortable with her perverted situation and inner desires.

Everything so far has been done really well.

As for complaints I really don't have any. However if I had to pick a few things to complain about it would be the lack of lengthy sex scenes, and also the overall shortness of this game. I hope that as the game progresses, it builds up to some more complex and involved scenes.

But overall I thoroughly enjoyed the game and I'm looking forward to playing more of it.

v0.2
So far so good. Interesting story, feels original in my eyes.
The renders are of solid quality, feels natural and well made.
I absolutely love the way this author is keeping it interesting by having us follow the protagonist but at the same time not show us every single fucking meal, I don't need to see the character brush their teeth etc.

Thank goodness this author focuses our experience of the VN on the important parts. The parts worth my time and your time. This keeps the story moving instead of slugging along a story like Day 1... Day 2... Day 7.. (With 2-3 years of development) Instead there's time skips that keeps our eyes fresh and the character living their life.

I have yet to see a game with this idea in mind of a wrestling theme etc. So that's a big plus!

The updates no matter of their current size do not feel like something you can swish through in a couple of minutes if you are actually interested in the story.

[v0.2]
Pretty average, but h-scenes are good.

But there are only 3... Or 4 of them.

-Story, Originality
Somewhat funny and tragic.
Overall good.

-Renders
Nice 3D models, look not too realistic or too cartoonish.
Nice.

-Sound
No sound or music.

-Playability
Can play it once in 1 hour.No replayability.

-Performance
Runs like an average Ren'Py game.

-Bugs
Didn't see any.

-Animations
There are only still images.

-Voice Acting
No voices.

-Grammar
Didn't see any mistakes.

-Amount of content
Many words and big amount of plot, but "no boobs, only eyes" (like in the meme [Not many h-scenes, I mean]).

0.2

well. there is no real animation. as motion there are 2 frames, i think maybe sometimes 3. but imo the porn part is hot. the english is perfect(some mistakes like some text is contributed to a different character than who actually says it). the story is interesting and unique. great game. models are relatively hot.

the only problem with it is that animations being just a couple of frames. but imo still fappable so far. if you are a fan of "ultimate surrender" then you will like this.

main protag is futa as well.

This is really good so far. Nice beautiful colorful models, interesting characters, story and setting. Looking forward to more. Nothing negative to say, just gotta wait for more content. Can't get enough dickgirls

This VN fits into my tastes perfectly. As someone who loves women with muscles and women with dicks, this one has both and I love it. I like the overall premise too - setting it around a sexy wrestling match is a great idea.

As for the technical aspects, there are no language issues and the renders look great. The women look unique & attractive and the lighting is excellent. I'm looking forward to future updates.

Really solid intro to what could be a nice futa protag game. The set-up is pretty novel and interesting for a porn game and the writing and narrative are both decent too. The MC is decently written and engaging.
The visuals are decent. The models are attractive and the renders look pretty good overall though the skin is a bit bumpy on the closeups and the animations are really just a couple frames. Overall definitely something anyone who is a fan of futa content should check out