Pretty broken English. It feels like it was written in another language first and then poorly translated.
I don't even know where to start with this. Also, what's with using ellipses every other sentence? That and some other quirks make me feel like I could guess the original language but it doesn't mean shit if it's not in the script.
I think the only way I could play this is if I just proofread it myself, forgot about it for a while, then tried it again.
It feels like 9 times out of 10, I find shitty grammar like this. It makes me less incentivized to ever try anything new. The game seems interesting enough. It's just ... wow, that grammar is bad. Stuff like this is probably why some of the top devs can afford to be arrogant fucks. They know they're safe if this is the competition. Very few devs are competent enough in everything to really bring it all together and turn it into something people would actually pay for.
I don't even know where to start with this. Also, what's with using ellipses every other sentence? That and some other quirks make me feel like I could guess the original language but it doesn't mean shit if it's not in the script.
I think the only way I could play this is if I just proofread it myself, forgot about it for a while, then tried it again.
It feels like 9 times out of 10, I find shitty grammar like this. It makes me less incentivized to ever try anything new. The game seems interesting enough. It's just ... wow, that grammar is bad. Stuff like this is probably why some of the top devs can afford to be arrogant fucks. They know they're safe if this is the competition. Very few devs are competent enough in everything to really bring it all together and turn it into something people would actually pay for.