VN Ren'Py Good Girl Phone [Ch.8] [LazyRaccoonStudio]

[StrawberryCheese83]

Okay...i ve downloaded this one, because i was curious since this is one of the usual phone Games but...surprise, surprise...without NTR (Tag). Dialogue errors and mistakes aside....i ve played to the point where FMC had to choose clothes for her bar shit. So far so good....but let me ask a serious question here : Is the FMC intellectual disabled?? I am asking this for a reason, because :


1: You need to know that i m collecting good points as much as possible on my (first) Gamepath. So, shs (FMC) wanted to send nudes to her BF and ended up sending nudes to her teacher instead (so far...so stupid). She was totally embarrassed about this...BUT instead of standing her ground and forcing the teacher to leave her alone and deleting these pictures....she send MORE nude Pics to her Teacher without blackmail or anything else. Teacher just said....send me more pics....and she s like "yeah okay...i m doing it". Seriously? Why? How? For what?? With more than 70 GOOD Points? She wanted to send these pics to her bf....and thats it. WHO, with a SANE MIND, would send MORE NUDE pictures after sending the first one to a WRONG PERSON...without being blackmailed? She could have easily turn it around and threaten her teacher that she would go to the Police, for not deleting her pictures. Nowadays this is a serious thing. So this whole scene was just...dumb...and not in the slightest understandable.

2: After a few days her most irritating teacher reaches out to her again....and told her..that she should take a picture of herself in front of a mirror....She should touch herself at her should or her neck...!! What did she do??? She touched her tits...took a pictures...and after that she stripped down to her bra and took another pic....and send both pics to her TEACHER (with MINUS 4 RLP btw). Thats the point where i had to stop this Game. FMC is seriously brain damaged and doesn t know what she did. So...who knows what she will do next?!?! Hellllooo....DEV....i am on the GOOD GIRL PATH....nothing of this should have ever happened.... I m not sure if i want to play this anymore...but i will hang in there....lets see how much more odd situations are coming up...! Dev..i am not being here to mock...but please....make her brighter...or more reasonable.... Thank you!

 

[L7Bear]

Question: How Broken is this game?

In the first few minutes I've already run into two significant mistakes.
Is it just the early game that's borked, or is it like this throughout the game?

1)
Section where dialogue should have switched characters, but didn't.
(i.e. Dean should have said "Unfortunately, no." and "We recommend..."
2)
Section where Eva things about an option Mom suggested, which Mom didn't suggest (yet?).
The last thing Mom said was that she had an idea and would text later. Nothing about an Aunt Ira.

 

[User11052021]

Question: How Broken is this game?

In the first few minutes I've already run into two significant mistakes.
Is it just the early game that's borked, or is it like this throughout the game?

1) View attachment 4937623
Section where dialogue should have switched characters, but didn't.
(i.e. Dean should have said "Unfortunately, no." and "We recommend..."
2) View attachment 4937626
Section where Eva things about an option Mom suggested, which Mom didn't suggest (yet?).
The last thing Mom said was that she had an idea and would text later. Nothing about an Aunt Ira.
View attachment 4937628

It's currently very broken.
I noticed at least 20+ errors like this.
I have send them to the creator in PM.
Let's hope the next update has these fixed.

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

Friends, thank you so much. I am totally shocked by your feedback, I didn't realize I made so many mistakes. This is totally unacceptable. I will carefully read all the dialogs from the beginning and correct everything you sent and whatever else I find on my own. I deeply apologize for these mistakes and hope for your forgiveness. I care a lot about my game and I am very grateful that you took the time to give me feedback on these bugs!

 

[drh64]

Just played, I like the images, the story is pretty standard but good but please allow me to turn off Chris I can't stand him he's an idiot and pretty scummy as a person or is he gonna get into her pants no matter what she does. Will he basically rape her and force her into sex by blackmailing her with the pictures I really hope not.

 

[Dreamatrix]

When i choose to be upset:

2 box belonging to the Dean, MC saying it.

The same with 3rd option:

Last 2 box should be the Dean but MC saying it.

 

[Contra2000]

Does anyone knows when will he release the chapter 4

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

Does anyone knows when will he release the chapter 4

July 10th, the same day the 5th chapter for white level subscribers will be released.

 

[Emma Nuelle]

When i choose to be upset:
View attachment 4948534
2 box belonging to the Dean, MC saying it.

The same with 3rd option:
View attachment 4948543
Last 2 box should be the Dean but MC saying it.

At least he is consistent in his errors

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

At least he is consistent in his errors

I have already worked on the errors and the new version will have all these crazy stupidities corrected. I deeply apologize for them.

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

Hello everyone, so version 4 is available for free users. Enjoy the game

I completely reworked chapters 1-4, removing a lot of errors and bugs. I also added some IMPORTANT! choices to these chapters, so old saves won't work. In addition, the game now has a full gallery and achievements, so you can complete the game with the first attempt to open all the pictures and all the achievements.

I deeply apologize for the fact that your saves no longer work, but that's the price of progress.

A big thank you to you for supporting the project!

Win / Linux / Mac / Android:

You must be registered to see the links

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You must be registered to see the links

Chapter 4 contains

The new version has a completely redesigned gallery, now you can see which photos have not yet been opened
Achievements have been added
47 photos
3124 code lines
Chapters 1-4 have been completely redesigned, a lot of bugs with displaying photos and lines from the wrong characters have been fixed. New IMPORTANT! selection menus have been added that affect new chapters

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

I also have the 5th chapter of my novella out for white level subscribers.

You must be registered to see the links

It contains:
53 photos
2606 code lines

 

[Mapfap303]

So can you play as lesbian ?
no dick/men ?

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

So can you play as lesbian ?
no dick/men ?

Such a path is planned, but it has not been implemented at this time

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

In general, the game plans about 20 paths and subpaths, with different endings. all of them will be opened gradually, I have great ambitions for this game

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Where there's criticism, there must also be praise! The Dev did a great job with the latest Update—seriously. He fixed (almost) all the bugs from the last version, and if you're on the "Good Girl" path, there are no more "weird and unfitting surprises" waiting for you. Tons of new options have been added, which I personally love. Really. Also, you no longer accidentally send this very disturbing and creepy teacher Mark any photos per "mistake" (yep, that bug is gone too—thank you, dev!). There’s just one small weird moment on the Good Girl route: One evening, weirdo-Mark messages the FMC and asks for a photo in front of the mirror. And, well... instead of taking a photo of her shoulder, Face or arm or something normal—she still goes straight for the boobs. God (or the Dev) knows why....! Doesn’t quite fit the “innocent” path vibe. But hey, can't have it all, right? And Chris—the arrogant jerk? Totally avoidable now if you make the right choices. 5 stars from me for that alone! One more thing though… when FMC works at the bar for the first time, she picks an outfit with Polly. I chose Outfit #1 (the pretty normal one), but Polly insists on Outfit #2, and FMC just agrees. That kinda defeats the purpose of the choice, doesn’t it? Why offer an option if she's going to ignore it anyway? Either tweak the scene or just drop the choice—then nobody gets confused.

But other than that… GREAT JOB, DEV. Keep it up!

 

[Chienrouge]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in script
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_go_mark' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Traceback (most recent call last):
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2162, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1383, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1375, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_go_mark' is not defined

Windows-11-10.0.26100-SP0 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.4.0.25070513
Good Girl Phone 92.89
Fri Jul 11

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Got this at the end of a conversation about Mark, with Nicole (chapter 4).

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in script
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_go_mark' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Traceback (most recent call last):
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2162, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1383, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1375, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_61.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_go_mark' is not defined

Windows-11-10.0.26100-SP0 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.4.0.25070513
Good Girl Phone 92.89
Fri Jul 11

---------------------

Got this at the end of a conversation about Mark, with Nicole (chapter 4).

Thank you for your bug report, I will study the problem tomorrow and write about its solution

 

[Angelmyster]

```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in script
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_result_bar' is not defined. Did you mean: 'choice_result'?

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Traceback (most recent call last):
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2162, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1383, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1375, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_result_bar' is not defined. Did you mean: 'choice_result'?

Windows-11-10.0.22631-SP0 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.4.0.25070513
Good Girl Phone 92.89
Thu Jul 10 15:25:07 2025
```

 

[LazyRaccoonStudio]

```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in script
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_result_bar' is not defined. Did you mean: 'choice_result'?

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Traceback (most recent call last):
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 2162, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1383, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "renpy/python.py", line 1375, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
~~~~^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
File "game/code/scenario/chapter_4/plot_68.rpy", line 87, in <module>
NameError: name 'choice_result_bar' is not defined. Did you mean: 'choice_result'?

Windows-11-10.0.22631-SP0 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.4.0.25070513
Good Girl Phone 92.89
Thu Jul 10 15:25:07 2025
```

Damn, sorry, it's my mistake, I tried to make the code better and I probably didn't replace the variables everywhere. I'll test everything again tomorrow morning and fix it.