Ren'Py - Goodbye Eternity [v0.8.1] [RNGeusEX]

I absolutely love this game!!!! I have been playing this game since it got released, I always wait about two updates to start a new game and get into it. I'm going to list a few key points from my experience so you can see for yourself if this game is for you.

First off I love the art it's amazingly unique and aesthetically pleasing to the eyes. If you been on this site long as I have you will notice good majority of games especially renpy games tend to use same kinda models, backgrounds, generic flow you are use to seeing. Nothing wrong with it it's just good to see other Creator styles.

Storyline itself is truly intriguing, has I'm a sucker for time slip storylines or life redo. To change different parts of your life for the better very interesting to me. The beginning hooked me instantly, no matter how many times I replay this game I always fall right back into it.

Next is dialogue, the dialogue pace is perfect, in my opinion the Creator definitely knows how long a scene should go on for, enough words to build the scene without all that useless dialogue that just keeps going.

Gotta talk about the choices, I love choices in games. I want to feel like I am in control of my own character and that the choices I make have meaning, and this game does not disappoint in the regard. But if a game has to many choices you can get overwhelmed, this game has the perfect amount of meaningful choices. The choices you make determine what path you want to take with your Love Interests. I love when a game gives you definitive choices to put you on whatever path you are looking for, so much easier then some games that have meaningless choices just to bulk a game up to make you feel like it has more content then it actually has.

Next are the Love interests themselves, some of them are cute others are down right gorgeous (Yasuka) the relationship build up is just the right amount. It does tease you a bit but I see it as a medium burn, yeah you work a bit at it but the pay off is well worth it.

Now the scenes, for this game to only be at update v0.8.1 it has a lot of great scenes. The scenes are extremely erotic and some have alternative scenes depending on the choices you make , love to see that in a game. Can't wait to see future updates.

This next point not on the game itself but the Creator. Always giving updates, answering questions, puts up with a lot of criticism. Extremely reliable doesn't ghost his supporters like some other Creators. Probably shouldn't even put this in here since it really has nothing to do with the game itself just something I wanted to add. I apologize If I kinda got off topic

All in all this is definitely in my top 10, definitely recommend the Creator has done a phenomenal job and just keeps getting better after every update. Wish nothing but the best for this Creator and their project, can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm a big fan of the art style and I liked the scenes available in the game but this still feels lacking in both story and gameplay.

The gameplay is a deceptively linear sandbox where 90% of the locations are irrelevant outside of one or two moments. Not a deal-breaker to me but also not ideal.

The story meanwhile gets the job done but is struggling along. It's trying to do character focused routes but you have to do it in the exact order the game wants. These routes are okay on their own but are short and generic at times. The main characters personal story which sets up the whole game hasn't progressed much either in my opinion.

Overall I'd recommend giving it a shot if you like the art style as it was a nice way to spend a night and there's a worthwhile amount of content.

3/5, I'll keep following for further updates

This and Mist are among the best game's I've played thus far. Simply outstanding, nearly 100% it in a single day. I genuinely got invested in the characters and story, can't wait to see it fully realized.

Has a good amount of polish, the designs are good and even things like backgrounds look really nice.

How the game plays however is the worst thing I have ever seen in such a game. It pretends to be an open world game in which you can go where you want, but it really isn't. You can go exactly where the game tells you to go and nowhere else. You get to meet like five people on day one and it pretends as if you can advance in all their stories at in any order you want to, but you can't. You have to do what it tells you when it tells you. Especially in the beginning, this is very confusing. You start your day with visiting four different places and you have to repeat an activity a couple of times (without the game telling you to) to just stumble upon something that drags the plot forward. They tell you that you can start working at place X and when you get there, you are told that you will be able to start "in a couple of days", while the amount of days has nothing to do with it. It is triggered by an utterly unrelated event.
Not to mention the bizzare idea that you have "secret stashes" in each screen in which you click random things to get money. In the beginning, these stashes are just highlighted and you just spend an extra two minutes per screen on just clicking things to collect money. (Which you also never really use for anything?) When other games do this, they have maybe one of these locations per screen and reward you with additional art or the like.

The sex scenes are another thing. They are alright, but for a game of this polish, they are really underwhelming.

This game would be instantly ranked one star higher if it just dropped the pretense of being an open world game and was instead the VN it clearly is.

Version 0.8.1

What the fuck was that... I have roamed around this website for a few years now, and I do not know why it took me so long to discover this game. This is a masterpiece, for sure in the top 3 of the games I tried, if not the best. Keep it up this is really great work.

A few suggestions, which are just opinions dictated by my personal taste.

1) I prefer games that avoid different paths, say love/corruption. It slows development down and it is cumberson to have to replay the game to get the other scenes. I would prefer all paths to sort of converge to the same scenes with slight variations. A good portion of players, even the most affectionate ones, are not willing to restart the game from scratch to get new scenes. I find lil sis path good in this sense, mom's path is too divided for my taste.

2) I find it very cool that the focus, for now, has been a lot on mom and lil sis, I would prefer to see their story develop more deeply and for longer instead of branching off with side many characters.

3) I would love to see pregnancy for mom and sis in the future, and also some development during the pregnancy not just "they got pregant, end of game".

That said bravo to the dev, this is amazing keep it up

Version 0.8.1

A pretty well-polished and intense VN. Still rough around the edges for some parts, but overall the package is solid. Its presentation is really engaging, with beautiful character designs, and some of the cleanest user interfaces I've seen in a porn game. The adult scenes, for what little there is of them, are surprisingly really well-animated, even being able at times to fake 3D even though we're just looking at 2D images.

The actual content of the sex scenes though, is sadly very tame and safe (the "bible in the hand" kind of sex), are over in the blink of an eye, and come into existence a bit too quickly after you first meet the characters, I would say. Given what happens in the story down the road, I expected it to devolve into something a bit more raunchy and daring, but at least what's there is alright.

The games goes for a traditional Japanese-style VN in both its setting and its presentation, with a story unfolding in a kinda stereotyped Japan with its mafia and its archetypal characters, and while I'm not a fan of that at all, it at least manages to convey its story well enough to stay engaging to the end.


The "gameplay" in this VN, quite frankly, could be easily cut out. The game wants to be a sandbox-style VN, and quite similarly to what you'd expect in that kind of game, you go from place to place talking to different people, some of them having events at different periods of the day, and you start to make a schedule to meet as many of them as possible and increasing your stats, raising money, etc... And none of that matters, at all. This game being heavily story-focused, you'll be railroaded constantly from one specific event to the other with barely anything you can do to change the course. You get up, you train with some NPC, you work, you get a special event from time to time, rince and repeat. Added to that a hefty amount of backtracking each time you need to go back and forth between NPCs, and you just end up clicking the same two buttons over and over again when it could just be a short and smooth dialogue sequence from one event to another.

You can get money by working or picking it up from the ground, but it's never used and all your earnings are stolen roughly towards the middle-end of the story, so all your efforts were for nothing. And in the same way, raising your stats is never used in any way. I think strength is used at one specific event, but that's it. Just all in all, some very superficial stuff that isn't the end of the world, but some stuff that doesn't need to be there and brings nothing of value in terms of gameplay.


About the story itself, the first thing I have to say is... Boy howdy, does the MC live in a fucking ghetto. From the first 5 minutes of the story, you learn your sister hates your very existence and tried to conspire with some shady dudes to get back at you, you have thugs down the street who directly work for a crime lord, there's the fucking yakuzas involved, and everyone is trying to kill you... Fucking hell, the MC lives in a nice neighbourhood, but if I were him, I would just say fuck it and get the hell out of there. Especially with the even more shady stuff going down the line.

Now, the premice sounds interesting, and many side characters are pretty likable, but I think this story falls flat on a number of points:

First of all, as I said earlier, this game wants to be a sandbox game, but is very railroaded by its story structure and the way its presented to us. The dialogues often offer you branching paths to dictate how the overall story will play out, but apart from the very beginning of the game, where you can choose to blackmail your sister, many of those choices barely impact the specific dialogue they're presented in, some being just variants of some lines of dialogues boiling down to the same outcome, while others are just there to fake the illusion of choice.

For example, there are a few romantic interests you can get thoughout the story, but the game never lets you choose if you even want to start these relationships to begin with. I mean, sure, it's a porn game, but
Another example of this illusion of choice is towards the end of the story,
Apart from the dodgy story structure, another problem with this game's story is just that, in general, it doesn't really have anything to say. It doesn't really have any theme it follows, no message it wants to convey, and it seldom offers character development that doesn't translate in anything meaningful to us as the player. We learn that the MC regrets his past and tries to change it, and it's nice to see him standing up for himself and telling others to fuck off (when the doesn't take control away from you to completely negate that effect, that is), and it's nice to see him using his past to solve his issues, but overall, no one really experiences any character conflict that makes them grow. No much conflict between the love interests, nothing to spice up their intimate times together, nothing.

The character personalities are nice and convincing enough, but the story never uses them to tell anything. Overall, it's still a nice story with a lot of twists and turns, but a sandbox game it is not, and a thoughtful story neither. It somewhat tries to have a theme about teamwork and trusting others to help you solve your issues, but it also falls flat because you don't know why would some NPCs, in their context, go out of their way to help you in such a dangerous situation. But whatever.

Overall, it's still a fine package. The gameplay part is a bit of a chore, but never difficult or to the point of being annoying, so you can get used to it pretty quickly. I woudl still recommend this game, just don't come in expecting a great story, lower your expectations and you might still be pleasantly surprised.

Great game, great design, literally the best I've seen. A rather banal plot, linear, but I think it will be corrected over time. Game 7 out of 10, deducting a point for the plot and 2 for being so short

Well, what can I say... Great game, I guess ?

It has been a long time that a game has been stuck in my head (last one has been Once in a Lifetime). It's hard to explain, but it actually made me emotionally invested in this little world and the characters, and after finishing it up to the latest update (v0.8.1), it kinda left me feeling missing something.

Like that weird feeling of emptiness after finishing an anime, and you have to leave this world behind because the story has been told, and there's nothing waiting for you anymore.

I know it's not over yet and there will be some more updates after this review that will continue the story/World/Characters, so that can wait...

1. Story/World

The Story is nothing new, I have played at least 4 games with a similar premise (Guy's a loser, no family/Friends left, dies, gets another chance, you get it...), but even tho the concept is old, the execution is done pretty well. The more I've played, the more it felt like I have to use this second chance and make the right choices, because the consequence would hurt the people I care for the most. I was actually invested.

And the World is just... beautiful, the warm colors, the vibe... with so many little details, like these sceneries are made with so much love and care, it's just nice to see

2. Renders/Animations

The Characters just look absolutely gorgeous, like high quality, nice proportions, not so much cookie cutter bullshit like some of the other games on this site, I mean even tho I usually don't like milfs (blasphemy !!!!), in this game even the older lady's looked sexy too me, noriko is still my favorite (small boobs for the win).

The animations are also superb, I mean perfectly smooth, no PNG loop, different poses/stages, actual creampies and no bullshit white flash (only once, and I'm still mad).

Nice.

3. Characters

I liked the characters I'm supposed to like, and hated the characters I'm supposed to hate, so that worked great

The background stories of most characters are simple but interesting nonetheless, the dialogue is good, i mean it's still an erotic game i don't expect any Shakespeare stuff.

The "Quest system" is easy to understand, no need for an external walkthrough, which I always appreciate.

Why no 5 Stars ?

Even after praising this game so much, it's still not perfect, maybe it's just my own expectations/fetishes interfering, but I think even tho the sexscenes themselves are great, the way we achieve them fells a bit rushed or almost "unearned".

For example, after fixing our relationship with our mom, and we start to show more than platonic affection to her, 20 minutes later, and we are fucking her in all positions imaginable. It just felt a bit rushed for me.

Another example and the most annoying (for me at least) is the slow (but perfect) process of repairing the relationship with our sister and fixing the mistakes of our past (future?) self. Just as we start to understand what went wrong, just as the ice starts to melt, all of a sudden she dares us to fuck her and the first time with her is just a quickie pressing her against the closet

In my opinion, the first time would have fit much better after the cute scene at the bus station where she opens up herself to us, and we reconcile, but maybe I'm just too romantic IDK


Last words...

One of the best games in the last few years for me, gorgeous girls, beautiful scenes with a good attention to detail, healthy amount of humor, a bunch of Happy moments, sad moment's, hot sex scenes, and some good friends

maybe the points I have criticized will be fixed with some magical update in the future, and if that happens, I will happily give this game 5 stars.

The best of luck and health to the dev/devs

Retrox.

I played v0.8.1

Art was quite good, but the story and gameplay were repetitive and boring for me. I can see how others rate it quite well, but it just didn't do much for me, personally. Overall, I just found it somewhat unremarkable.

Giving this game a rating was a bit weird for me.

On one hand the designs of the cast, the art and the animations are great and are worth it for this alone.
On the other hand there's everything else.

Like many games on this site the writer has no knowledge of how to write sex scenes and rely pretty much entirely on the art to make them satisfying. There's very little attempt to describe anything that's happening in a sexy way - or in any way for that matter - and so they are often over before you know it. Words are sexy, people! If I wanted to just watch sexy art I'd go to rule34!

As for the rest of the writing, it really does feel like something an edgy teen would write. Sort of a depressing revenge plot that makes no sense with people dedicating far too much effort to ruin the life of a single loser. Although unlike other stories of this kind it never really gives you this satisfying moment where you win against the bad guys and stop being a loser. It's more like your girlfriends and chad friend do it for you. So you're still a loser, but the girls find it endearing.. I guess.

Lastly the "gameplay". There's no reason this game needs to be a sandbox experience. It offers nothing. All missions happen in an order, you can't do multiple paths of multiple LI's at the same time. Both the stats and money are there for specific points in the story and since there's only one quest at any given time, once you reach a roadblock there's nothing to do beside grinding what ever it is you need. This game would have been massively improved as a simple visual novel experience. At least it would reduce the amount of unneccesary clicking around.

Side note: The sister. Saying her story makes 0 sense is a massive understatment. She abuses us to an insane degree, but it's all for our sake? She wishes you were dead because you contribute nothing financially to your hurting mother, but she wastes thousands of Yen in order to have you beaten up? I was seriously dying to know what it was that our character did to make her hate us so much and how we would redeem ourselves, it was the only interesting part of the game for me. And if there was no reason, how are we gonna punish her for all this abuse. But the payoff is so insanely lame it made the whole game feel like a bigger waste of time then it already was.

Gameplay: 3/5, standard VN/Sandbox gameplay with a clean package. Only issue lies with the classic-sandbox pitfall of too many intertwined paths leading to some feeling short during development. One issue is that characters don't disappear from there spots when doing story quests, not huge but mildly annoying.

Story: 4/5, genuinely intriguing story with a basic premise that words. However, the biggest issue is how under-fleshed certain routes feel while some are extremely long.

Art: 5/5, phenomal art with live2d(?) animation in some scenes.

Overall: 3/5, interesting, but it does seem to fall into some sandbox classic issues, like underused stats that are only used for unlocks and not checks, railroading certain paths and so forth. Not bad, but definitely check the gallery in advance to see what path is more fulfilling for you.

dunno, im feeling like leaving my review in the forum also, just to leave some positive vibes.

wanted to write a small love letter to this game. I nearly finished the game in one sitting (Ooooh, just how much i love the mother/milf characters. Im really excited to see Asamis and Sakuyas mothers...)
But many bad reviews here just took my motivation to do so, so... it will be shorter one:

I love the art. It is so beautiful and unique i absolutely fell is love with it. while playing i constantly wished: "i hope there is going to be tons of content and that i will be able to keep playing." Its amazing.
Characters.. i mean.. storytelling is hard if you dont have experience and time to think about fleshing them out (i imagine the dev draws most of the stuff himself. where do you find the time to think about great story plots while keeping up with release schedules). So using cliches are absolutely fine in my opinion. Sure some things felt rushed storywise (Sakuyas and sisters sex scenes)the build was there, just didnt feel satisfying, but bruh.. its totally ok.
In the end its just supposed to be a +18 game. yo can feel in the art that the dev cares a lot for the game. most of the pictures are so beautiful and probably took a loooot of time, work and love (i read in his discord that he draws himself) so im totally grateful for the dev creating this game and his efforts.

and also i dont care for the stats and money. im also the type of player who likes to minmax but if the dev doesnt see any function so far, who am i to lower the review stars because of random stats? (still i would love my stolen money back, i collected all "treasures" and wasted time on it) its cool that they got implemented. they will surely have some function later on...

i was thinking of putting this games signature banner in my signatures but i couldnt find any banners unfortunately.

also.. ppl may hate me for saying that but i sincerely wished that this game had netori scenes (avoidable/with warnings of course).. like that scene in the hotel with the 3rd dosis or the blackmail scene in your own room.. it was so close.. so close that i could already envision it.. but looks like dev doesnt like ntr or the community would react negatively on it.. which is a huge shame honestly.. anywayssss

on a final note... the mothers here all look so goddamn hawt.. wow.. i really need some content for them.. so, so hawt..
the time elapse scene in ***'s bedroom was just.. pure perfection.. absolutely loved it, thank you for that dev...

Review of version 0.8.1

Overall the game is really good but there are a few things that I think hold it back. First the art and animations are really good and is the biggest boon of this game. Second the characters are are interesting and well written, apart from the antagonists though they haven't been fleshed out too much yet. The few issues I have; money and skills having no use, a lot of the days are coasted through (event-> skip time -> next day-> repeat), and a few of the events are a bit disjointed. These can all be attributed to a currently unfinished game so I wont be too critical of those issues. Lastly at some point you lose all your money and although you get a huge sum of money back. it being a fixed sum makes getting all that money in the first place a complete waste of time and a waste of all the secrets found. Though money has no use yet and it doesn't really matter it really doesn't feel good.

Great art but below average story. The routes are like fetch quests. Especially the maledom routes. The mc acts and feels the same in the different routes. The mc mostly acts as a passive presence instead of a active one.

Fantastic game plot and conversations. They feel natural compared to similar +18 games. The meaningful choices provided are very limited, but the fact that they integrated them at all is already insane. Nice Job

My Love/Hate review

Visuals

I have much to say about this game. It is beautiful. I really like the animations. The UI is smooth and very appealing.

But that's where the good things end...

Gameplay

Despite the great looks this game doesn't have much to offer. Not only from a storylines, but from a gameplay too. I do not understand why add money and stats if you don't use this mechanics. If it's just to be like everyone else than why add them in a first place. It would be so much better if we could utilize the stats to make different choices e.g. choosing a maledom path with Noriko using confidence or strength, or charisma for a corruption path with Asami.

Sitting there and trying to find all the places with money is an interesting idea, but why? Only place where money is used is in the beginning when you can give ALL of it to Yasuka. And you don't have a choice, the MC just does that.

Much like with stats money could be a very promising mechanic. But both of them are, for the lack of different words, useless.

Characters

Characters are a handful of cliches that are beautiful, but cannot offer meaningful interactions. They are created only as a playtoy for MC (not a player). They have stupid reasons for acting like they do and most of the time they don't even have a consistent personality. It is best shown in the latest updates (0.7 and 0.8).

I will briefly say that MC is boring not only because of his cliche backstory but also his looks. He is plain as boiled cabbage. And his yellow eyes don't make a difference. He isn't likable, he isn't interesting, he doesn't offer much and his personality shifts so much in scenes. I would be much happier playing any other male character from this game. Akira and Minato, despite being antagonists, are much more likable and interesting, though their reasoning for acting the way they do is questionable. And by the way what is the problem of showing MC's sprite naked? It is just very otherworldly seeing a naked girl near a guy in trunks.

I played this game two times: firstly, I played choosing Love path for both Asami and Yasuka, and they offered a unique playthrough, than, I played their corruption path (by the way paths are chosen by clicking one button, but i will talk about this later) and it was as unique as Love paths and i liked it. But then a Sakuya and Noriko storyline came.

Your previous choices lead up to the same things. Both Asmai and Yasuka (and Noriko in the Sakuya story) act the same way and say the same stuff. For some reason Yasuka doesn't act like an obsessed [over MC] lunatic and takes her previous personality of a caring mother. And Asami finds a middle ground between being her past self and rejecting her new self DESPITE of the path. The way she calls MC "My love" while she is in her tomboy phase is just lazy.

Noriko's storyline is stupid. Well maybe not the storyline, but the reasoning behind her actions. Acting like a brat, making stupid decisions, that made a boy who you fell for miserable is just not the reasoning I was hoping for. It sounds more like a lazy excuse just not to think hard enough. And with a teaser of continuation of femdom path one can only wonder how they will give this reasoning for different Noriko.

I won't say anything about Sakuya. People before me made really good points about her and the storyline. I will only add one thing. When her storyline begins the prompt is written "Sakuya restricts your movement" but, unfortunately it was done from the beginning.

Story

One of the reviewers [@Simp Cattu] said a really good thing " ...it's like a badly written powerplay fantasy of a teenage boy ..." And I couldn't say it more perfectly myself. There is no good storytelling in this game. Things just happen, most actions don't have consequences. And if they have it is quickly solved by Makumba and/or the gang of fangirls.

Setting

In my opinion setting, chosen for this game, other than naming some things like in manga or anime, or visuals isn't used as well. This story could have taken place in every part of the world. Saying "konbini" instead of "convenience store" doesn't make the setting more japanese. It's just make it derogatory.

Choices

When you create such a game and you offer people an option of choosing an action or line of dialogs, most of them are supposed to be somewhat meaningful. Even if it changes one line of dialog. But here 80%-90% of choices don't do a thing. The best example is Sakuya's storyline where we have an option not to free Akira, but the game just refuses. You have to play a perfect story as it was intended.

This game gives you an illusion of choice, just to trick you into thinking that you mean something to this world and characters. But actually this game is as straightforward as it can be.

NSFW scenes

I will say it now. I really enjoy sex scenes in this game. They are beautifully animated. I like the slight change in poses. But that's it. Last updates (0.7 and 0.8) added scenes that had great visuals but that lacked meaning e.g. Sakuya on a springs (the second one of the floor) just strats out of nowhere. It feels rushed. And by the way, she said she is a virgin and then just went on full length in all of her holes. Why?

Noriko's scenes just start the same way. MC rushes to talk to her and is so distracted by naked Noriko and of losing his dominant position that he just starts having sex with her. No teasing, no preludes and absolutely no meaning beside just giving you sex scene.

Future

This is just my speculation

I don't remember who it was, but some user on this site made a great statement "most games just try to be just like another popular game with mother/daughter harem" and i believe that this is what is happening with Goodbye Eternity. Adding Asami's Mother and Mentioning Sakyua's Mother that "soon will be released from prison" just solidifies this claims. This game just tries to create a mother/daughter harem for MC.

Conclusion

I have a Love/Hate relationship with this game. Despite not liking a lot of things about this game I still wait for new updates just to be disappointed about the story. I try to justify many, many things about lacking sides of this game. I will be playing this game in the future and wait that at some point it will be better. This game had so much potential. So much it could be. But unfortunately we got what we got.

I have came back to the game when the game was in its early stages and it was like 0.1 or smth, and tbh, the story was kinda refreshing including the sex scene lmao. That ending though why leave a cliff hanger like that. Though I wouldn't spoil the story, I like to say the game is well design and the story is really good. I'll be looking forward to this game in the future!

Absolutely incredible game. The art is amazing. The animated sex scenes are very hot. The story is interesting and just the right amount of dialogue. The pace of the story is great and I can't wait to see what comes next! Highly recommended.

A quite average, or below average game with excellent graphics.

- Art: 5/5
- Story: 1/5
- Characters: 2/5
- Writing: 4/5
- UI: 5/5
- Mechanics: 2/5
- Pr0n: 3/5

The worst part is clearly the bad story and the dumb, boring characters, the writing is actually pretty much okay. Which is a real shame because if the writing was worse then I could have dropped this shit earlier, wouldn't spent so much time playing it. But this is a tricky one, it deceives you with the beautiful art and decent writing.

Despite the great artwork its not even good for mindless fapping, there're too much grind and pointless dialogs for too little erotic content. And although it's a sandbox game it's mostly linear, there're some meaningful(?) choices but otherwise you progress linearly with the story and the love interests.

Very good game. It's best strength is the art, and it doesn't drag on at all. Decent amount of sex scenes with a variety of very fleshed out girls. My only gripe is more of them should be POV. The story might seem a bit convoluted and even like some girls have no content, but oftentimes to get to some girl's next content you first have to progress in another girl's quest line.

Story is a bit repetitive, the author seems to have only 1 method of creating tension and drama, but the individual relationship progression with each girl is good. I was surprised by how good they were - Sakuya, Yasuka, Asami, Noriko all had satisfying development with the mc in terms of getting closer and more intimate, with complementary scenes. Also very much looking forward to getting to know Asami's mom and Sakuya's mom in future updates.