Others - Goodbye Eternity [v0.9.1] [RNGeusEX]

Review for v0.5.9

The quality is certainly high. Really great art, animations, some nice music, good character designs, and not too crazy with grind or convoluted mechanics. The base of a good sandbox is present.

Your enjoyment of this game is going to vary heavily based on what kind of experience you're looking for. This isn't a slow burn. While it's competent enough to not be a complete fuckfest, things certainly aren't moving slow. The first real scene you have with your adoptive mother is a full blown montage of different positions, and it doesn't take long to get there.

What's more, I find some of the characters a bit lacking in... character development. Suddenly the aforementioned adoptive mother doesn't have a single care if her daughter finds us screwing her brains out. A different character turned out to be a yandere, but it came completely out of nowhere. It felt like the dev decided halfway through to change how she acts. The tomboy girl who just got her heart broken is immediately in love with us. Again there's just not a whole lot of real development.

So for me, it's a bit of a bummer since I enjoy more thought out and developed characters/story/dialogue. Everything has a bit of a rushed feel in terms of that.

There's also a fair amount of dark overtones present, and while I'm sure some "dark paths" are going to be added, it does seem like it will all be avoidable. Still, it feels a bit dreary and maybe exhausting sometimes when it seems like you're trying to avoid it with every girl if that makes sense. Most things do not seem to go the MC's way.

But at the end of the day I can sometimes appreciate a more "simple' sandbox game focused on good lewd scenes, and this feels like one of those games. It does feel early though, so hard to tell how things might change. Something I'll be keeping an eye on for sure.

ten out of five
Amazing game, a benching story with different scenes depending on the choices. The game has not been developed that long and we already have two character routes completed. Amazing art and a good believable story. Thank you dev for all the hard work. Animations are really good and smooth, with multiple positions, I wish all routes would include anal, that would make it perfect. Once again if you have not played it you missed out. New update and Mom still had no anal
Still, 5 starts just sad.

The story is interesting, the graphics are generally good, the characters are endearing, I can spend hours on it without getting bored, honestly it's worth a 5/5. I hope you keep it up and I look forward to updates, good luck and thank you.

Now this is a game other developers should take example from!
Reviewed at version 0.5.2
This game plays as if really professional people made it, I've played a lot of adult games and visual novels, and I've reached a point where most of them have a boring writing to me, this game made an exception.
I was invested in the story, it was really amusing to engage in it.

The characters are fresh, lifelike and natural, unlike most adult games where it's just a husk of a character.

The amazingly detailed art style combined with the superb writing makes this an excellent game worthy of a 10 out of 10.

Even in it's unfinished state it's worth playing, I usually don't rate unfinished games, but this proves how good this was.

good story, great characters, realistic breasts that sag slightly, and amazing animations that get the job done. a nice quest system too so you arent always too lost. I highly await another update, specifically for the sister. although, mom is best girl and the way you both come together is a very well written.

I've seen around half of the content in the current update and I will update this review when I finish it, but I have to vent a bit:
+ art is great
+ there is a lot of content
+ there are a few interesting characters
+ decisions matter

- everybody in the game other than a select few characters is a piece of shit or a sociopath and
- absolutely everybody in the game is at least a little mentally challenged and completely emotionally unstable
- story is a bit off, it seems like it would makes sense, but there are massive problems with logic behind them and it only holds itself together due to previous two points
- menus and overall UI is just bad, the dev had a good intention but then he just had to be original and messed everything up and it's not nearly as functional as it should be
- art in porn scenes is a bit off, setting is also meh
- MC has a bit of Marry Sue syndrome, almost everyone in the whole town hates him and almost everything revolves around him in one way or another, if it doesn't he will find a way to make it so

I've really tried to like this game because the art is great and overall setting is interesting, but with every conversation and event it's getting more and more painful to read. I can feel my brain folds getting smoother with every character I meet in this game and it's not a good feeling.

Dark themed story mixed with isekai genre and amazing art and animation
writting is very good
animation very good
story very good (if u like serious themed stories)
every character got its own problems than can be fixed or could go worse depending on choices

the only thing irritating me is different paths to unlock different animations, you cold fix it by just unlocking gallery by finishing story once and please do it instead of looking for hidden money spots, it would be better trust me and it would make many people happy that dont have to be forced to play how they dont like (be mean to certain girls or be nicer to assholes this kinda stuff)
add slapping sound during sex would make Yasuka scenes so much better while her daughter is listening under door

After engine change by dew game crashes and is unplayable

Amazing development speed, and graphics. This game started off as really bare bones, but it surprised me at how fast the devs worked for last 6 months. The plotlines are well written albeit abit quirky, overall it gives high quality feel.

Damn what a great game, Everything about it is beautiful. The UI is clean, the art is great, the animations are superb, and the story is amazing... a bit on the depressing side but we see how the MC overcomes everything after seeing what the outcome would be if he didn't, I really like the premise. 10/10 right now, can't wait to see more updates!

Truly a lovely experience with nicely crafted dialogues, smooth pleasant artstyle and intuitive enough UI with hints on how to progress.

Every quests progresses pretty much organically with little to no grind required to do so. Didn't even have to unlock cheats to ease the progression as it just came naturally.

Story wise I've enjoyed the available paths so far, love, corruption and so on, but am really looking forward to the atm locked paths hinting at what it seems be NTR and maybe the closest paths to what the MC went through in his previous life. Would be quite interesting of an insight to see how things have gone as badly as they did.

Keep up the good work!

I-I don't know what to say. For the first time, I'm kinda speechless, so I'll make it brief.

The game is gorgeous, the sex is fucking hot, the animations are stellar, the music is fine, and the premise is intriguing.

But the story is fucking depressing. The author basically took the last 20 miserable years of my life, and made the MC go through it everyday. The story honestly leaves me feeling hollow, and I have distract myself from the depression by fucking Asami.

You will not regret playing this game, and if you really want to avoid the depressing narrative, you can always hold onto the 'skip' button.

Good Points
+ Art style looks good and we have good-looking animations for sex and non-sex scenes (Like the map having some little animations with moving cars etc)
+ We have tips you can open from options and while they are not detailed enough and they basically show which choices can lead which paths it's still something useful.

Bad Points
- At first, the story seems interesting, MC going back to his teenage self and wanting to change his life, wanting to use this new ''Extra life'' wisely is a kind of interesting concept. But the execution of this concept revolves around annoying/frustrating events and the nearly whole story of the game revolves around nearly everyone treating MC and his loved ones like trash/wimp/loser, causing them problems, and MC trying to fix those problems and fighting aganist them. First of all, it's soo frustrating/annoying. Secondly, it makes zero sense for MC and his loved ones to face these frustrating events constantly. Yeah, we have some good scenes with girls that's true and I really enjoyed scenes with Yasuka but for getting those scenes you literally need to endure all those frustrating/annoying events and it's probably one of the worse writing decisions someone can make... BTW like those bad people causing problems to MC and his loved ones are not enough now we have scary, crazy, blackmailer, stalker yandere wanting MC to become her future husband... I mean... Yeah sure why not? I guess all of those frustrating/annoying things weren't enough...
- While we have some choices about some girl's paths we don't have any choice about some other girls like Sakuya and their content literally forces itself into the main story.
- In this game every story part and grinding part takes too much time and you gonna spend hours without any actual lewd content, but weirdly when it happens it happens nearly without any development like Asami and MC start telling each other ''I love you'' and having sex after knowing each other for just a couple of days. She was in love with another guy, MC and she start having a friendship type of relationship for days and now she and MC love each other and acting all lovely dovely? Yeah makes sense...
- If you are one of the people who hate grinding and use Unren a lot, then you will be disappointed because our game files are locked by our DEV. And the game itself has cheats you can use but for using you need find all money on the different places. First of all, it's boring AF to do that. Secondly, the whole thing makes no sense because you complete annoying grindy money collect puzzles for opening cheats literally contrary to cheat meaning it should be available from the beginning. At least it could be available after we got the quest for grinding 50.000 yen, what's the point of having to cheat if I need to grind money by working for quests and I need to grind money to collect puzzles and complete every one of them? What a big nonsense...
- Until v0.5.2 we only had 10 save pages and with v0.5.2 we got more save pages like other Renpy games but despite we get more save files it's actually not fully working, I mean yeah we have more save pages but when you pass to the next save page you can't see the page number you are on and it need fix.
- This game has one of the most annoying menu styles you can ever see in your life... I presume our DEVs wanted his game menu to look unique and different than all other Renpy games and it's successful! But it's not useful or easy to use at all and being easy to use always comes after style. And one of the biggest letdowns of this unique menu style is changing save slots to something tall and because of that you can't see little pictures showing you what you save, basically, this unique new style kills the whole meaning of small pictures of saves. This style needs to change ASAP...
-The game characters give pretty clear family or step-family vibes while the game says you MC has no family and Yasuka takes MC into her home because of being an old friend of MC's father. This part makes no sense and feels like MC's father run away with some woman and he is staying with his (step) mother but more importantly, MC's father has some depts and dept collectors saying Yasuka is the new owner of his depts makes no sense at all. It just feels like her husband run away and dept collectors say to her she is the new owner of her husband's debt. And because of this every story scene about your father, Yasuka, and Noriko feels off. The game needs customizable titles, so we could name their tittle and identify them as we like. But until we get I Patch or Customizable Tittles you need to bear some details not making good enough sense.
- Noriko's could have been more attractive with a better-looking face and with a little bit bigger tits. And while Yasuka's face looks gorgeous she could have used firmer, more round, and a little bit bigger tits as well. Her tits look ok when you are not having sex but when having sex her tits look shaggy and unattractive, DEV should change her tits and stop animating them with shaggy and ugly way.
- Sex scene animations are not bad but I can't say the same for the scenes themselves... Generally, they do happen without any foreplay and starter sex scene (like BJ, HJ, TJ, etc), they just start from nowhere after some talk and they only have one position/angle which makes sex scenes boring and not worth all that time you spend for getting them. But I should say Yasuka's love path's first sex scene was an exception, it has a lot of different angles/positions with animations, so I guess DEV is improving his job. But still, even her scene didn't have any foreplay or starter sex and they just started having sex with penetration right away again. Which is quite nonsense and mod killer.
- Noriko's path makes no sense at all, like seriously how her act should make any sense at this point? How is she still acting like MC being selfish just because of wants to be treated like a normal human being and being angry/sad for her treating him terribly? And then we learn she was the one hiring thugs to beat MC up and when we confront her and say we will try to forgive her she says ''You can't forgive me, even if you do I can't forgive myself'' Then why keep doing the same thing bruh? In the end, we learn she was bullied by children at school who thought her mother was a prostitute (because of having a good house and her father being absent) and MC got the same treatment after he started living with them and she started hiring thugs for wanting him gain some confidence, want him to beat them and send message to everyone mocked them all those years... Literally, nothing about this route story makes any sense, I doubt writers even spend more than 10 minutes for it... Oh BTW let's not forget how Asami keeps pressing/forcing MC to not give up fixing things with Noriko, how much she acts like Noriko is the victim, saying MC's fault, etc... And like these are not enough MC forgiving her in the end and saying ''Sorry for being such a pathetic big brother'' BRUH...
- Latest scene with Asami and Netoru wasn't pleasant, seems like more trouble awaits and this game story is too exhausting to play...
- When someone hits someone it looks awful and even funny because of how bad it is... Like seriously why there is no render/picture for that scene and instead we see two vectors hitting each other? If there was no dialogue there is no way someone understands what's happening in that scene at all.

For The End
Well... What can I say? This is one of the games that have a 5-star rate great potential but is literally ruined by bad points I told... Currently, it doesn't deserve more stars but I do believe this game could reach 5 stars rate level if DEV fixes the problems I told in bad points. I hope he will...

Extra Life [v0.5.2]
grafics 8/10
history 8/10
erotic scenes 6/10
narration 7/10
duration 3/10
GLOBAL 7/10
Personal opinion
personal global if is finished 9/10
this is my 4th best game if is finished
i like the history the charecters

EN
Let’s talk about this masterpiece, which for me is in my top 10 favorite games.
- The story is out of the ordinary, we have a lot of games that look like 'market' games, with different scenery and characters. On Extra Life, I don’t feel like following the same story. It’s out of the ordinary, it’s a pleasure.
- Engaging and interesting characters, we want to discover some characters despite their behavior.
- A pleasant interface, in addition to being simple to take in hand.
- A visual that I appreciate enormously, and that makes this game 'unique'.
- A French team is behind this game, so the translation is at the small ognion. Plus it’s nice to see French behind a marvel.
- Animation scenes are fluid and enjoyable.

Congratulations to the team, I look forward to the next updates.
Always behind you to support this project.

Extra Life [v0.5.2]

FR
Parlons de ce chef-d'oeuvre, qui pour moi est dans mon top 10 des jeux favoris.
- L'histoire sort de l'ordinaire, nous avons un tas de jeux ressemblant sur le 'marché', avec un décor et des personnages différents. Sur Extra Life, je ne ressens pas cette sensation de suivre la même histoire. Elle sort de l'ordinaire, ça fait plaisir.
- Des personnages attachants et intéressants, nous voulons découvrir certains personnages malgré leur comportement.
- Une interface agréable, en plus d'être simple à prendre en main.
- Un visuel que j'apprecie énormement, et qui rend ce jeu 'unique'.
- Une équipe française est derrière ce jeu, donc la traduction est au petit ognion. De plus ça fait plaisir de voir des français derrière une merveille.
- Les scènes d'animations sont fluides et agréables.

Un grand bravo à l'équipe, j'ai hâte d'avoir les prochaines mises à jours.
Toujours derrière vous pour soutenir ce projet.

Extra Life [v0.5.2]

A pretty good amount of content, maybe 2.5hrs or so. I never thought there could be this much quality and thought put into a game, but i have been proven wrong. The game is phenomenal, awesome story, awesome animation. likeable characters. Cant wait to see whats next.

Not much content, but amazing content for what it has. They recently added animation and man those are really good. I can't wait to see whats next. My only issue is the lack of clarity of some of the hints but other wise pretty straight forward game with a very small amount of grind.

very good story and some of the best scenes i've seen cant wait for more
only thing i disliked is how it seemed their will be a NTR route for the mom (seems optional) but i dont wont this game to go down that route.

Pro - design and animation, fun characters and their story.
Game still under development and i think players need to wait to ending for man story. (development of mc). There even not used stats and map.
Good luck developer.
I jeleous for mc -i want to rewind some events in my life too (especially now when i live during war)

Although the explicit scenes seemed a bit rushed, because there was not a lot of time to let the relationship progress with dates etc, the game itself seems great and has a lot of potential. The character design is great as well

- Good & clean art style
- Nice animations albeit too few for my taste at the moment
- Dark, yet humor-larded story
- Weird proportions only when it helps the character building (no ultra-tits)

Can't wait to see the rest of the story (and animations) unfold