HTML Abandoned Guarding Galaxies [v0.02] [Gandulf's Games]

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Overview:
You play the young rookie cop Aliyah Morrison whom has just graduated from the Gallian Empire's Imperial Police Academy. The game takes place at her new assignment in the Raak System an outer rim system known for being a crime ridden cesspool.

The Game will include may different choices and option with many branching paths with will lead to many different endings.​

Thread Updated: 2019-11-29
Release Date: 2019-11-29
Developer: Gandulf's Games

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Version: 0.2
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[JK3]

Decided to give this a quick look
Can tell this gonna be good when you spell "Interactive" wrong on the first page
>To the left of the bed there is a Bench sitting on it
What?
Sit down next to human male or Kitsune Woman, keep your capitalization consistent
Sitting down next to human male, you get conversation but there's no "punctuation" yet choosing to talk more gives you "punctuation"
>i hate long rift drifting trips always make me fell groggy
"I hate long rift drifting trips, they always make me feel groggy"

I know this seems harsh, this is feed back that will hopefully make it better. I'd read through and give more suggestions but I've got things to do.
Good luck man, proof reading is hard.

 

[PeteCB]

I am Groot?

 

[Gandulf_HD]

Decided to give this a quick look
Can tell this gonna be good when you spell "Interactive" wrong on the first page
>To the left of the bed there is a Bench sitting on it
What?
Sit down next to human male or Kitsune Woman, keep your capitalization consistent
Sitting down next to human male, you get conversation but there's no "punctuation" yet choosing to talk more gives you "punctuation"
>i hate long rift drifting trips always make me fell groggy
"I hate long rift drifting trips, they always make me feel groggy"

I know this seems harsh, this is feed back that will hopefully make it better. I'd read through and give more suggestions but I've got things to do.
Good luck man, proof reading is hard.

Thank you for the feed back!

In my defense it was about 2-4am when i did this hahaha.

I will be sure to go back through it before the next release and fix up those mistakes and make sure there are no similar mistakes in the new content!.

 

[ᴏᴄᴛᴏ]

>text based
>no sexual content
Why is it here then?

 

[EmilIrving]

>text based
>no sexual content
Why is it here then?

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Because this site is a piracy site, not just for porn. Even though there's a shit ton of porn than anything else.

 

[Johntheloner]

Because this site is a piracy site, not just for porn. Even though there's a shit ton of porn than anything else.

Wrong, it's an adult forum site. That covers themes and other such things beyond just sex. If it was a general piracy site, it would be flooded with other stuff, and likely would have been shut down long ago.

That said, I see nothing about this that would place it as being in condition to even attempt to cover suitable themes for being on this site. Misspelling/grammar everywhere, no proofreading, etc.

 

[EmilIrving]

Wrong, it's an adult forum site. That covers themes and other such things beyond just sex. If it was a general piracy site, it would be flooded with other stuff, and likely would have been shut down long ago.

Except this site hosts products, be it games, videos, and comics that are not handed out for free to the public and are sold on storefronts like Nutaku, affect3D, etc being available to download here. That said, many of the devs that have been willing to gain exposure use this site, avoiding the piracy issue. Of course the pirated content is mainly erotic and English only, and thus not really garner as much income within select regions. Not enough for a team to consider the expenses that will come out of their pocket just to shut this site down.

That said, we have to be prepared for a time when that changes, thanks to the potential success of Subverse (which may or may not happen thanks to their idea of cancelling Early Access and that growing controversy). Where a team can potentially have the money to get at least an investigation going.

 

[Johntheloner]

Except this site hosts products, be it games, videos, and comics that are not handed out for free to the public and are sold on storefronts like Nutaku, affect3D, etc being available to download here. That said, many of the devs that have been willing to gain exposure use this site, avoiding the piracy issue. Of course the pirated content is mainly erotic and English only, and thus not really garner as much income within select regions. Not enough for a team to consider the expenses that will come out of their pocket just to shut this site down.

That said, we have to be prepared for a time when that changes, thanks to the potential success of Subverse (which may or may not happen thanks to their idea of cancelling Early Access and that growing controversy). Where a team can potentially have the money to get at least an investigation going.

Never said it wasn't a pirate site. Maybe you need to re-read. I said it had a specific FOCUS. One that means it is unlikely to get shut down in the foreseeable future.
I doubt the likes of Subverse's devs (FOW) are going to be willing to go after their core customerbase in such a manner. Too small a pond to be pissing off any of it's residents.

Porn games aren't mainstream, even in Japan where they are more popular, nukige and things like what Illusion and KISS put out aren't considered mainstream. It's why you have literally 2 big names in that category and little indies.

Same is true with the comics and such. Most of those are fetish to the point where the sites that sell them have to pricehike pretty hard to make any money.


Realistically, I don't see it ever being worth the money to go after F95 over piracy. I think moral panics and grey laws are more likely to get it shut down.

 

[EmilIrving]

Never said it wasn't a pirate site. Maybe you need to re-read. I said it had a specific FOCUS. One that means it is unlikely to get shut down in the foreseeable future.
I doubt the likes of Subverse's devs (FOW) are going to be willing to go after their core customerbase in such a manner. Too small a pond to be pissing off any of it's residents.

Porn games aren't mainstream, even in Japan where they are more popular, nukige and things like what Illusion and KISS put out aren't considered mainstream. It's why you have literally 2 big names in that category and little indies.

Same is true with the comics and such. Most of those are fetish to the point where the sites that sell them have to pricehike pretty hard to make any money.


Realistically, I don't see it ever being worth the money to go after F95 over piracy. I think moral panics and grey laws are more likely to get it shut down.

You never did say that, but you did say I was wrong. So I was left with thinking that my entire statement was wrong.

True.

True.

And true. Though I rather be cautiously optimistic about the future, though funny thing is that I have doubts that the reach from moral panics and grey laws will have any effect on this site.

 

[UncleVT]

And this is a thread to discuss about the game, not the nature of this site. Please keep on topic.

 

[FreshRevenge]

Wow those pictures really got me excited to play this game.....NOT!

I mean Visual Novel means you are going to see something, not read a book!

 

[Deleted member 791157]

Now while it's clearly in its extremely early stages, very little content, I actually really like the direction its going in! Would like to see more choices leading to possible sexual content.

 

[Gandulf_HD]

Wow those pictures really got me excited to play this game.....NOT!

I mean Visual Novel means you are going to see something, not read a book!

It's still very early stages, i'm currently working on getting actual art done but i currently have a budget of $0.00 at the moment. But the plan is to have plenty of images and maybe animations when i get a PC that can run a Daz for more than 3 seconds without overheating.

 

[Gandulf_HD]

Now while it's clearly in its extremely early stages, very little content, I actually really like the direction its going in! Would like to see more choices leading to possible sexual content.

So far as planned there will be a lot of Sexual choices but they will mostly be later on. However i'm making sure to sprinkle it in here and there throughout.

 

[Eggtree McGee]

is this still being updated or is this dead?