Edit: with a bit of time to think about it and talking to the developer of the game i have come to the conclusion that some points in my review have been slightly too harsh. I am keeping the orginal review below so people get additional information, but you can ignore my part about the website opening randomly. If you are willing to open a random exe from a forum you have other things to worry about than websites opening.
While the other points are still valid, they should not discourage you from trying out the game. While it is random in a lot of places it has a certain B-Movie charm to it, and the potential for further groth is very high with this one! Moving up my rating to 4 stars for now, if the other issues are worked on and the game get's a bit more content under its belt it can easily become a 5 star.
old review for version 0.48.5
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Can't really give much more stars than 3 even though i would like to for the supposed freedom of choice. Simply the fact that the maker allows for rather dark content (comedic rape) is commendable. And art is very good too for koikatsu base, though it sometimes has issues with backgrounds looking very awful/not fitting together in tone.
But there are just some glaring issues that hold back the game.
The biggest one is the writing. The amount of grammar and typo errors is simply unacceptable. I get not having english as a first language, it is not my first one either. But do you see 5 missing A or The in my text?
And even if you have problems, there are so many free/cheap writing checking tools online that could easily fix these things. Hell we have chatgpt now that could rewrite any sentence with less issues than the game has.
Which means the designer either didn't care, bad at his job, or way too lazy. Either option is not reflecting well on the game! Each error is pulling the player out of the game, and with such an easy fix, it really is not toleratable (and yeah i know there are worse offenders, but 2 wrongs don't make a write!)
Then there is the characterization. This game clearly is not taking itself too seriously and the setup is relativly intriguing. But it goes over the top a bit too much a few times, in my opinion. Especially the gigantic random personality shift of the big shop sister is just akward as hell. I mean, i get it, her sister is in danger. But people don't just flip a switch like THAT.
Another big issue is the game framework. If you are touting that you are not using renpy to use a "serious" engine, maybe actually make the framework work as good as renpy atleast? I had to akwardly double click a lot of times because the scene first removed the current speechbubble but did not move on to the next scene right away.
And the fishing mini-game needs a better explanation asap. It only says to hold the key, but you actually have to hold and move the mouse. How can you program that game and not notice how akward it is?
EDIT:
To clarify for everyone worried. This game does NOT activly steal data. My personal point stands that the use of self-opening browser websites is still questionable, but again you are downloading a random exe from a random forum, so all of this is at your own risk anways. The game certainly is worth trying out, so don't be discouraged. But as usual you should keep internet safety in mind (e.g. use a sandbox program for untrusted exe etc.)
(keeping original so everyone can make their own mind up)
Ohh and also fuck off with trying to get data from me? Extra stories with the demand for giving away player data? Heeeell no. You are already encroching the line of beeing shady when you randomly open up a website in the browser for a joke. Sure it was kinda funny, but that can easily be misused for anything, and not a good idea if you want to keep players trusting you.
So the designer has to heavily rethink how he should look at privacy standards for his games!