VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Haley's Story [v1.1 Pre-Patched] [Viitgames]

This game does exactly what it says on the tin so I don't feel like its spoilers to say you eventually bang the main character.

That said the VN actually doing a halfway decent job of maintaining the illusion you're actually seducing a real sister. It doesn't just have the sister go from nought to railing her brother in the space of one romantic night... It somewhat cleverly sets itself up in such a way you uncover her long standing attraction. So rather than turning your sister to incest she's always halfway been there.

Surprised few games actually use this route... suppose it's harder to write than "girl becomes sociopathic whore overnight."

First lets start with the good, renders are top of the line, animation is well made, and the characters are all gorgeous. The story is a bit of slice of life, may not be very exciting but it’s definitely enjoyable to read.

The thing that makes this game stand out for me from all the others is Haley . I would gladly play this game even if it was set in a barren apocalyptic world with only the MC and Haley. Not to say that there aren’t any other option, there is one other romanceable character (unavoidable) and bunch of flings available, if you so choose. But all the other girls pale in comparison to Haley. Personally, I think Haley’s character is a real gem, even compared to all the other adult games out there. It’s been a long time since I found myself so attached to a game character.

Finally, all I can say to the dev is that I hope Haley and MC get a very happy ending otherwise I’m going to be crying my eyes out. One of my favorite games at the moment, I look forward to getting my fix every month. Keep up the good work


EDIT: The game went off course half-way through. Put unnecessary drama for the sake of drama not to mention the endings just felt rushed, unfulfilling. Still an OK game, but a far cry from what it could/should have been.

Review based on v0.55:

This game is fantastic and I totally adore Haley for both her model and personality. The rest of the game is really good too, story flows nicely and never seem to get lost to long on anything. There are plenty of h scenes but nothing major with Haley before this version launched, that is not to say that the game does not deliver. Oh no, it totally does and even the side characters have their own well established personalities, that really spices up the whole thing.

So I'll leave this review short, the game is fantastic, the story is not the center piece but your relationship with Haley is and the people around you and her, and it evolves nicely throughout. Give it a try I totally recommend it.

Excellent story line with brilliant way to play with player feeling and mind with Haley past story and beautiful graphic. Good story telling. Amazing work. Looking forward to see how they love unfold.

Really wasn't sure how I'd like the game, but I really enjoyed it. Wasn't a huge fan of Sandra, but I quickly came to love Haley. Bit of a slow build up, but ultimately quite satisfying. Looking forward to future installments.

Incest stories are exceptionally difficult to write well since the situation is extremely uncommon and against human nature most of the time. This is the BEST incest story I've read so far. Fluent story progression, deliberate subtle emotional changes of characters, right-in-place relationship depictions, plus the hilarious, skillfully written dialogues involving a LOT of memes, all together result in this enjoyable masterpiece.
There are downsides, though. (The following review is based on version v0.50 of the game.)
1. It claims to be choice-based, but the choices you need to make are 1) binary most of the time, 2) have the "one correct answer" that seems pretty obvious and the other answer totally redundant, and 3) the story is basically linear without branching. So this game doesn't really provide much of an interactive experience. Just a novel.
2. Sex scenes are rare (up to the current version) and not of a very high quality. In other words, not a very "fappable" game in my opinion.
3. No music or any sound effect, a pretty common problem with indie VNs, which damages the experience a lot.
It barely deserves a 4-star as a fappable game, but as a VN this is absolutely beyond 5 stars. This community needs more well-written stories like this.

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There's a lot of good in this game but nothing great.

Most of characters are one or two facets and a disorder and they start to wear on you pretty quickly. The story is almost non existent and totally about developing relationships which mostly are ridiculously slow progress explained away with tired and worn cliches with an occasional random fuck thrown in with no real justification.

The renders are average and the dark bedroom scenes get tiresome fast. There are animations but again nothing that above the norm.

There are funny moments but the relationships are just tedious. The insest two steps forward with desire then three steps back with guilty angst is repetitively tiresome especially as behavior simply doesn't match dialogue and might as well go masturbate with cheese grater. Final point on incest, Why the hell use Daddy endearment? Having a father fixation while fucking your brother....seriously?

Great story... even without that many sex scenes this game is just absolutely fantastic... This is one of the games you play not because of sex or nudity... but rather for it's AMAZING story! So if u are new to Adult games and would like to try some... this game is perfect for you. So my advice is: Download it, play it for some amount of time and if you liked it (ofc you did) go smash that "BECOME A PATREON" button because this game deserves your support... and you should definitely rate it 5/5.

Alright i'm not gonna lie at first I thought Haley wasn't very attractive that was until the first couple of interactions and I fell in love. The writing and game design really play out like a really good movie I was fully immersed in minutes. Well done the characters are truly a pleasure to spend time with and the story is believable and entertaining.

This is, without a doubt, the best VN out there. If you like bro-sis incest this is YOUR game, and even if you just like well written adult games and don't dislike incest you're gonna love this.
The writing is excellent, the story is pretty cool, although reliable, and the characters are written so goddamn fucking well you might forget this is an adult game.
The renders are well done and the characters models are different from the usual adult games (sorry huge tits lovers) but they have some of the most developed personalities I've seen this far. And I played A LOT of adult games so trust me on this one.
There aren't that much of sex scenes as now considering the lenght of the game but this only makes sense to me considering the story and it honestly help creating a sense of reward once you get there.
The game is pretty vanilla when it comes to fetishes, (besides incest of course) but it's a nice change for once also just to enjoy some good old erotic writing.
All in all this game should be tried at least once from everyone to set a standard on how good adult games can be.

The most beautiful incest bro-sis game u ever gonna play
pros:
The plot is amazing and new nothing u heard or play ever
Characters are beautiful and not look a like
Decisions can impact ur future
secnse are hot AF
cons:
nothing to think of or i just love the game 2 much i didn't see anything bad in it
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my opinion you should defiantly play it and then rate 5/5 and thanks the dev for the amazing content xD

Hi
I love this story and models, its has its frustrating part but thats about 10%, the remaining 90% is all good. Atleast for me. the image quality is always top notch and very pleasing to look at.
I always look out for the updates.

My review is based after v0.45

I only tried this game out of curiosity because blood related sex, isn't my thing. I mean i love family-centre theme games, but i prefer if they're step-related or distant relatives. For example, i'd enjoy this game a lot more if the main couple was step-brother/sister or cousins. But twins? it's cringe-worthy to me, but i'm not judging, lol.

Pros:
Great renders and animation
Very well written dialogues with a lot of humor
A lot of content so far

Cons:
Haley is sometimes sweet and other manipulative. I don't think the dev knows yet what character he wants to write.
All the other characters are one-dimensional and seems they're there for no reason. They don't even move the story forward because all the decisions don't really affect the outcome of the game.
Some scenes are kinda dumb like the hospital one.
Too dark in the sleeping scenes.

And most importantly. The relationship between the twins and other romantic partners are written purposedly bad and with no chemistry so it basically forcing the twincest (which we already know it's endgame, so why trying so hard to make all the others bad in comparison?).

Although incomplete currently (version 0.40), Haley's Story is a complex, emotional story with excellent pacing. The premise between brother and sister, in both their living and work arrangement, and their progressing relationship, feels endearing and organic. The sex scenes place emphasis on the situational and personal eroticism, developed through storytelling, rather than on the images and animations of the game engine.

One thing which some people may consider a weakness is that the story is railroaded more than most, including a forced, long term relationship with a woman named Sandra. However, there are options available for scenes and relationships with other women, including Haley--who is, let's be honest, the one we're all here for anyway. Overall this is a great story and I can't wait to see how it ends!

--Update for complete game below--

Some things improved and some things got worse since my last review. The railroading gets a lot better--you're able to break things off with Sandra and never see her again, and you're even able to get a thruple going with her cute friend. In fact there are a lot of romantic options and none of them feel forced.

The weakness in the story, and the reason I removed a star, is that this story starts to meander a lot in the later chapters. You've got this arc with Haley where something dark happened in her past and she's going to therapy for it; it's built up like it's going to be a conflict, but the resolution feels totally flat. You're always just sort of spectating from the side and nudging her to see a therapist as it gets resolved off-screen. Even worse, Haley's not really changed by the resolution at all, totally deflating the substance of this plot line.

There are also well over a hundred lines of dialogue that don't really do anything but establish Haley as quirky or cowardly. Maybe I'd feel differently if they were more entertaining, but once you understand Haley's (very static) character, these lines quickly stop adding substance to the story and just become repetitious and exhausting. Many of the family visitation scenes also fall into this category, I feel. Overall, the story adds a lot of content near the end that doesn't respect a reader's time or attention.

However, I still believe Haley's Story is an above average story on this site. Not a bad story for any patient reader looking for a slice of life love story with a few side options.

What makes this such a great game is all the stuff between the sex scenes. The dialogue, interactions and relationships are funny, heartwarming, and relateable, even with the characters that aren't possible love interests.

Another thing that really stood out to me is the attention given to the girls' hair and hairstyles. Most other games, hair is just an afterthought, or a vehicle for the characters personality, rarely is it treated as an integral part of a characters appeal.

The characters themselves have normal human quirks that are there just to define and add depth to the character. Most of them have no connection to the main character or being attracted to the main character.

Don't let the humor tag fool you. This isn't parody or joke on the player. The comedy comes as friendly banter between the characters, and feels utterly natural.

Graphics wise it's pretty impressive. There's none of the graininess that's been common in recent games. The characters are all quite sexy, even without any fetish (except the milf interest, who looks realistically mature. Very well-maintained, and fit, but definitely past her youth).

The best part of all, is that this game has reached the level of support where the creators have promised to complete the story.

My 5 star goes to Haley. She is so cute, adorable and beautiful.Her face expressions so good.

+Haley is amazing: looks, personality, and chemistry with MC - all perfect. She might be my favorite female character from all the games I've played .
+All characters have their own unique personality and story.
+Slow pace, realistic story
+Good renders
+Good character development


- Unavoidable relationship with Sandra (I like Sandra, but forced relationships are a terrible idea.)


I think I'm in love with Haley ehm uhm. If you like slow paced story, you should play this game.

The story looks really good so far.
There are a few graphical improvements required ( Like that you can see the lamps on the door in the basement office.)
Also the UI sometimes messes up and selects the other reply instead of the on e that you click on.

Nice and well written story, so far. Interesting and good written characters with inner conflicts and thoughts. Very good CG's.
This game has a good balance between story, teasing and sex.
If you're only into fapping this may not the game you want.

Keep up the good work.



I hope i have finally fullfil the 200 character that are needed for the Review.

Wow, this VN has one of the best storyline and character development I have seen so far.
For me it´s a must play. If you are looking for a well developed story, likeable characters,
dialogs witch makes sense and are fun, this is it...

Tested: V40

pros:
interesting story
great storyline
good character development
very good dialogs (especially between brother and sister)
girls are good looking and mostly natural - exapt some hairstyle
outstanding MC and sisters relationship development
good render quality
good animations
...and many more...

neutral:
choices

cons:
Some Graphics are too dark, you can hardly see something
no audio/music

Conclusion:
I rate this 4.5/5