I am reviewing an in progress game, please understand features I reflect on may be different in the build you play.
I am reviewing build 0.12.4
I have some history with adult VN's, but I haven't played the more recent hits.
I am playing on PC.
I used a money cheat early on in my first (only so far) playthrough.
Pros
The writing is well done. I don't necessarily love every story beat for each guest/employee in the hotel, but the personalities of the characters are distinct and interesting. There is character growth in abundance, and the relationships and actions of the characters are noticeably influenced by the player.
Player choice is important, and the results of your choices are seen throughout the game.
The 'Plot' is great, the work the dev puts into the characterization and writing gets the player engaged with the characters, which makes the 'Plot' that much more impactful/effective. There is great diversity in fetishes among the different characters, and the player has a lot of choice in outfits, scenes, and activities.
The game is balanced well between stick and carrot. The player does need to put work in with the game, but rewards are drip fed at a good pace and keep the player engaged with the work and reward. This gives it a 'One More Turn' feeling: some nights I think I went a whole hour over intended quit time just 'One More Day'ing' myself. Addictive, fun gameplay loop that rewards the player at a good pace.
Cons
The backgrounds and things that fill them stand out to me as the biggest weak point to the game thus far. There are some good settings (Dungeon, Kali's room, Kitchen), but many (Ashley's room, Maria's room, PC's room, Maid rooms) are bland, flatly coloured, and uniformly lit. The backgrounds are what keep me from screenshotting my favourite scenes. Some more personality in the room for each guest (streamer stuff in Maria's room, some lived-in ness to the PC's room, make Ashley super messy or something) would really spice it up. This also applies to things like food; stock items from the modelling program make lots of appearances and stick out more than they should (pizza anyone?)
There's a lot of stats, and it seems like at some point the player needs to decide if they're focusing on a couple of guests or going for a general, more shallow playthrough including more of the guests. I had difficulty figuring out how high certain stats need to go, or whether I was wasting my time doing certain activities when I should be optimizing someone/something else.
Some player choice (at this point) seems to be fake. When
. Would be nice if the player action mattered here (and a few other places) but maybe this is in progress (or maybe it did address the choice and I read the dialogue wrong?).
There could be some more diversity to the women themselves. Different body types besides young, skinny and white-ish (are Elves considered white or not? idk. Maria's a little darker as well). A thicker woman (Ellen is closest to this?) or two as well could add some flavour too.
Noteworthies
Time goes by a bit quickly, some activities take all day and unless you're playing optimally (increasing stats) for the characters/scenes you want, you'll miss certain things. Almost a negative, but it gives incentive to replay with strategies in mind and variety in those replays.
I used a money cheat and didn't have to balance my cashflow. Prioritizing cashflow conflicts with time spent doing stats management, and I had enough trouble with that already. Some items seem expensive for how money moves in this game, and the bar (the place to really get money coming in) has not engaged me like the rest of the game. Hopefully there's more to do with the bar/cashflow later.
Game takes forever to boot. I can do a cold PC start to desktop faster than this game wants to load up.
Could do a bit more with Ellen or another (even slightly older than the other guests) woman in the MILF'y/Mommy sort of way that isn't currently on much display (this is personal taste showing).
Music is ok, not bad. Not too much by way of sound effects for a lot of the game. Not a con for me, I'm usually listening to something else. Could be a con for others.
The Slavery storyline seems to be controversial among players. I enjoyed it.
Conclusion
This game has great bones in its body, but the flesh needs some massaging at the hot springs to really perfect the experience. I fully recommend this game. This is a great effort and I'm very excited for the future of this game and Runey's future projects. Great work Runey!