Unity - Completed - Harem Island [v1.0a] [Eroniverse]

a nice short game with hot girls.
user friendly UI and a built in "to do list" if you are lost which is a big +.
lots of sexy smooth animation.
no gallery and some scenes arent repeatable so thats a meh.
there are "stats" and "choices" but they dont seem to do anything important.

[Rev @v1.0a]

Art's alright, character models are nice; some animations are bad but some are alright.

Writing is terrible. English is about a half step above machine translation, dialog is hokey. Plot is alright though its pacing is hosed; characterization is a bit weak but present. I take issue with the 'harem' moniker as none of the girls interact with each other in ways that make the group anything more than a meat buffet.

Porn is alright. Reciprocal oral is a plus, but overreliance on anal is a mark down for me.

TLDR: Eh, it's porn.

Started out like a great game...

But in the end it felt just like a rushed money grab

The ending felt rushed with bits of the game still having a under construction sign to it.

The end battle was just a one vs one boss fight while it should have been a massive fight .

Felt like the developer didn't wanna bother anymore and just stuck an sloppy ending to it.

Shame it had so much potential tho that's why just 2 stars

And don't have much faith in his coming games if he handles the games like this.

This is a low budget game that made the brilliant decision to totally embrace the "B" genre.

From the crazy over the top story to the massively over reacting and inappropriate facial expressions the developer fully captures the "B Movie" genre of the eighties.

The animations are still very nice and plentiful. Sure there are translation issues and a shortage of background renders but it just adds to the game rather than detracts.

As long as you don't try take it at all seriously and treat it as it was intended, an over the top homage to shoestring budgets and wild stories you should have a blast.

I do feel a little of a killjoy dropping a point for the little technical issues because it really adds to the "b movie" feel.

I didn't expect anything from this but man this was great the only weakness i can see is that the plot is too shallow and some error in translation but that's it everything else is great, I really liked that you can get a scene with every girl in the game and the renders and animation are smooth and the models look great. really a great game for a quick fap and i need more of this.

My first impression over glancing this game were, nah... skip it, particularly due to not the best set of screenshots in OP. But updates page did not show many of my most anticipated games for a while, while this one were returning on search including all tags I was looking for, reading trough review were encouraging , so I gave a shot, and... I am glad I did!

I believe the most weak feature would be plot that mixes ordinary with fantasy, also some of dialogues can use more colloquial translation than pullout of rarely used words form dictionary. But, it does not kill much of impression.
The features to praise though, are a lot, great renders and lighting, full FPS animations, most of animations in renpy games feature transitions between 2-3 screens and look really pathetic, so this game is level up, another praise goes for quest tracking feature. I believe entire league of renpy games just suck there, nothing close to it (hello FOTM, you should learn here). So It just gets double thumbs up from me for that.
I Like variety of MILF characters, Carol is my favorite, I hope game gets more scenes with her and will get more naughty in future
I read trough thread and heard that dev considers moving to renpy, which seem logical as game uses static 3D renders anyway, but if it somehow kills functionality of quests dashboard, or dynamics of sex scenes, then please stay away from that.
So I wish artist to keep up great work and large patreon crowd.

The only upside are kinda well animated characters.

The major downside to me is that the scenes don't really make any sense and some of the porn plots seem complicated and fancy compared to this game.

Even though chars arent bad and some of the scenes are looking hot the randomness of this game bugs me out.

Playing this game is really enjoyable. The girls are hot, the animations are great and yes, it leads really quick to sexscenes.
Still the development of the different characters is good.

Especially the outfits and the sexscenes are fantastic. No bugs so far either.

One of the best games for me!

its a good game... for what it is. which is straight up porn game. its not about story, eroticism or even teasing.
renders are decent, but there are fluid animations which makes it better overall.
you have to click around and do quests, but thankfully its well done. no stupid grinding for stats, or absurd requirements to trigger quests/scenes.
intro is heavy in satire but it dissapears after that. writing during the sex scenes is not bad which is way im rating it this high (or maybe i was too horny while playing, who knows)

Graphics are a bit below the par, but animations are better than usual to compensate. Backgrounds are as a rule hideous, and the interface is clunky and I had at least three occasions on which it stopped working and I had to restart the game. Including the first time I tried the game, which didn't really give a stellar example.

However, the setup is pretty good. Only man as a option believes to sell the ridiculous amount of sex adult games offer, and the potential non-human females is pretty tantalising idea.

That said, the models are mostly stock models and there's bound to be one or more that you've seen before.

Finally, the game is also a bit fickle on the triggers on events. It doesn't really always make sense when things happen, and sometimes things don't happen when you expect them to. I assume there is some level of randomization in the event triggers, which causes this. Unfortunately it's not clear from the get go, so it feels a bit whimsical.

Not sure if it really adds anything to the game, but maybe it does. I haven't played it without it.

That said, it isn't bad game as a porn game. But it's 4 stars only because the bar is pretty low in the genre. Basically, you want sex? Yah, we've got some. Nonsensical plot? Also here.

this is easily one of the most faptastic games i have ever played. except the script, which is less than faultless (though i understood everything and sometimes the mistakes were even funny or cute), this game is firing on all cylinders. the women are very sexy, they all have distinguishable characters, the renders are high quality and the animations (sex scenes going from slower to faster always makes sense and helps with the immersion) aren't bad either. realistic looking cum is hard to get by even in high quality adult games and this one has nailed it there too. the grinding is kept to a very acceptable level and there are clear clues as to what you can or supposed to do next. there is a lot of untouched potential with this game (despite a lot of content already being available) and i hope the dev will keep on delivering. pink and caroline are two characters i especially would like to see receive more love in the near future.

Half baked core mechanisms.
Harem: The MC is more of a fuck toy for the girls than in an Harem…
Island: If it was not in the title of the game you probably would not realize it's happening in an island ^^

The renders are pretty nice, if you like to see floating characters having sex.
Save yourself time and just download the CGRip

This is another game with a lot of unrealized potential. The animations are fluid and top notch, the character designs are varied and above average, the premise is interesting, but it couples that with poor writing and storytelling, below average spelling and grammar, questionable and very underused gameplay mechanics, some odd facial expressions, a buggy save system, and a truly obnoxious UI.

I'll go into more detail below, but TLDR I'd give it a 2.5 if I could, if it gets polished and completed it could be a 4.5/5 star game, but as is I would definitely wait until it develops before picking it up.

OK, starting from the start of the game. You open on banging your nameless girlfriend. Thats a good way to start the game, it shows off the animation and a kind of sex battle mechanic that works alright, and you think is going to be the core gameplay mechanic. But it isnt. You use it two other times from memory, both are near impossible to lose, and doing very well seems to have no benefit to the player.

Then you leave to go on a trip to... somewhere, for... some reason, with your best friend who is a girl you havent seen in two years who has a sign that says "future sexual partner" hovering 6 inches over her head. Literally as you leave the house your unnamed girlfriend breaks up with you in a text so youre free to bang whomever you like on your trip to... wherever.

You get on the plane and in the space of about 5 minutes are introduced to every character in the game in the most rushed, incomprehensible intro I've ever read. Everyone of them are VIPs for some reason, most of them are multigenerational families, magic is revealed to be real and that bothers no one, and of course all but one of the characters are female (besides one gross dude) and pretty much all of them want your dick immediately. Each character in the space of like 5 lines of text introduces themselves, their one discernible character trait, and that they want your dick. It's extremely hard to read and follow, and throws any buildup or tension out the window.

Then suddenly demons invade the plane, and they kill all the males with sex in order to steal their energy, but not you because you were the first person to be able to make them cum in all of history, and then the plane crashes on a magical island, and then good fantasy beings help you set up a camp with the fully intact plane as your base, and then you need to fight the bad rapey fantasy things, and all of that is done in about 5 minutes.

Then you can navigate around the plane and ask 0-3 things of each passenger, 1 of which is always youre hot. Then you sleep and an android saves you from a witch that teleported in to rape you. And now there are androids everywhere. And on day two all the women become immediately sexually frustrated and need your dick like a dehydrated person needs water in a desert. Which is just really poor writing. There is no relationship building or getting to know people, the first event with almost every girl is you doing a sex thing, usually cunnilingus, and sometimes getting raped.

After getting a few girls to join your army you can then go hunting (an unlimited number of times a day for some reason). I was thinking given the premise and synopsis here that this would involve the sex battle mechanic. IT DOESNT. Its just you click hunt and get stuff. No risk. Can do it as many times as you want.

The game goes on from there. On to some general issues:

1. The UI and saving:
The UI has multiple button presses to get through the plane, many of them unnecessary. It also breaks the body of the plane into two hallways with some shared options and some different ones, for no discernible reason. It is clunky and confusing. You are unable to save or load during arbitrary actiony bits, sometimes... maybe. Also the save sometimes deletes your focus resource used in battle. Lastly I couldnt find any way to quit the game from within the game.

2. Sequence of events. A lot of stuff in this game can be accessed totally out of order. I had multiple events take place with a captured prisoner happen before the event to capture them even unlocked. The evening events in the lounge are the biggest culprit, many of them delay crucial plot developing events that take place at night and throw the quest page for a loop. Also many of the characters you can interact with at the evening events (where you will always lick a pussy) will talk in plot events about not having any sexytimes with you even though you have.

3. The sex battle thing. Obviously the main point is that you only use it 3 times by version 0.7, that it is impossible to lose, and that there are no rewards for doing well, but the other issue is that it is totally arbitrary. All the actions produce results with HEAVY rng, and you have no way of knowing what something will do without trial and error. Theyre also very short, your orgasm bar will fill up within 3-4 actions, regardless of the actions taken, so strategy and action choice is pretty meaningless, definitely less meaningful than the RNG. It needs a lot of work. It has the potential to be a core gameplay mechanic, but the RNG needs to be tightened, you need to know what the options will do, make the bars longer so strategy matters, maybe add some cooldowns or something? Its just arbitrary and boring right now.

4. The army mechanic:
To hunt you need an army, which gets bigger when you hunt. But it has no impact on anything atm, and can be made infinite on day one by just clicking lots of times. It feels like it could be useful and interesting, and it seems to be related to adding named characters to it. But given you can make it infinite so easily, there is no way of losing stuff or risking anything, and no reward for having a bigger army its just a waste of time right now.

So in conclusion:

- Make the intro a bit longer and a lot more coherent, maybe make it have some effect on the game, definitely cut down some of the character intros and sprinkle them into the first few days of play.
- Fix your core mechanics and add the sex battle thing to the hunting so that there is a reason for it to be there.
- Structure your events better so that you cant sequence break everything immediately
- Dont have every character want your dick from day 1, focus on developing relationships, have the characters you know, like your best friend and her family be the first ones you have sexytimes with and build from there at a slower pace.
- Simplify the UI and fix saves.
- Hire an english speaking editor to do a pass of your script

If all of that is done itd be a great game, until its done its a confusing mess that lacks both buildup and pay off for every single element.

The really bad:
*Dialogue in non-glish is atrocious.
The scenes themselves are good and would be much better if translated to proper English.

Just bad:
*Facial expressions for some girls. The girlfriend character looks like inflated fool. Some others are kinda "loony".

The good:
Everything else. From ludicrous scenario itself to sex mini games.

4/5 from me at this state.

I gave my review in the comment's section
fun game
nice character designs
very fluid animation (very rare)
just on the animation alone it'd get a 5/5
and i would rate it much higher
the only sad thing is that update .1.1 only has the download files of the previous update

Review for the version 0.1
The story is quite a mess, i don't know the NPC's at all, more than 10 characters i really don't like this game at all.
From the start you are greeted by everyone and everyone tries to fuck you or to name you pervert =))).
Animations are grainy as fuck in some cases and the whole story is confusing as FUCK. I spent 10 minutes of clicking for nothing, just to see the patreon link at the end of the 10 minutes of clicks for nothing.
Avoid it, the v0.1 does not has any type of quality.
Story is rather plain nothing to surprise me at all.
If the developer could put 1000 characters he would do it =))))), i must remind him / her that not the number counts... the quality of the dialogue and other aspects.
Good luck on the future.