VN - Ren'Py - Healslut [v0.96d] [Davie Zwei]

Not a ton here in the current version (0.1e) but what there is so far is fantastic!

• Great renders (including a few animated portraits that made me think I was seeing things for a moment)
• Fantastic writing - both frequently hilarious and very... "self-aware?" "trope-conscious?" not sure what word I'm looking for here, but it plays off the MMO setting really well
• Immediately likable characters (other than Kayden, who seems like he's secretly a shitbag based on his treatment of Lel)
• A very promising range of content - just among your party you've got a femboy, a futa orc, a half?-demongirl, a shy flat-chested green-eyed redhead qt that just instantly makes you want to protect her, and a completely shameless male goblin - and I get the feeling all will have their own routes. Something here for just about everyone.

Going to be watching this one very closely!

Nice visuals and poses, nice dialogues.
This novel have good potential and its a original plot of sorts.
Really needs to work on the fetish details and the progression of the character. I felt it bland and not interesting.
Keep it up.

Good panels, as in good visuals.
Story is okay – in the end, it's all in service of the "plot", so it's not expected for an h-game to have a good story
Compelling and diverse characters, which is pretty important. All the tagged fetishes seem to be shaping up. Also occasionally wholesome.
Writing is competent. There's next to no spelling or grammar mistakes, dialogue is mostly bearable, scene transitions happen naturally.

Really Cringy text scheme aswell as occasional sound effects. Such as someone calling you stinkyfeet. In general a weird game. I feel as if im playing as a character that is turning gay. There is nothing wrong with that however its not my fancy. The story line is alright it has a decent flow to it. It is easy to comprehend and picture which is a good vibe when it comes to these kind of games.

The game is a long way from being finished and probably not worth playing yet. But I really like the plot and writing style so far.

Story:
Good plot and well-written. The writing style is funny and light-hearted while sexy at the same time.
Despite the name and starting sequence the heroine does not need to be a slut and you can make choices to avoid it

Gameplay:
Just pressing spaces with some occasional choices.
The choices are basically "choose if you want to be a slut or not", not very deep. I would personally prefer if the choices were harder and more subtle but that's me.

H-content:
Basically nothing at this time.
However it's suggestive and quite sexy even though there's no scene.


There's almost nothing in the game right now but I can feel this will become a great game.