VN - Ren'Py - Heart Problems [v0.10] [Xenorav]

(revisited the game after nearly 2 years, previous rating was 3 stars)

+Amelie
+Amelie's big juicy booty
+Amelie's smile
+Everything about Amelie
+animations (they get muuuuch better after chapter 5)
+nice renders (also get better)
+here and there good sound effects

-MC is still ugly as ever, he looks like a 10 year old in a body of 22 year old trenbolone enjoyer
- story (every chapter is exactly the same)
- music got slightly better, but its still really bad
-dialog (its bad, but you get used to itt)

To keep it a buck I still think this game is 3 stars in terms of overall quality, but I like Amelie too much, also the animations got much better, also there is so much booty in this game I have to give it 4 stars. Props to the dev, hes gotten better.

Even though its very early I have to give this game 5 star, all the characters looks beautiful, the milf got a bit exaggerated body proportions but it somehow compliments her motherly personality. My initial thought while playing this game was that all the girls in the game will be bimbo and dumb asf especially judging by their body definition but i was caught off guard by the awesome writing and pacing, each character feels real and believable i mean the sexual tension and all the build up is portrayed gracefully. I can only imagine what a masterpiece this game will turn out to be in a year or so.

Really nice renders and animation. Especially since the game is only a couple of hundred mb. The story is also pretty cool. Its pretty much the same as all others but i guess thats just my thing
Also music and sound are on point.

This best game and very unique ,renders secene are best quality , well written realistic story and good dialogue, game play is amazing it put you really in the drama family , yeah very the best five star good job !! i love aunt xoxo

v0.3

There are certain things in this game that i definitelly like. Character models is just one of them. Story is somewhat generic but interesting nevertheless. What i totally dislike is that this game seams to be choice based however as of v0.3 choices doesn't matter. Like there's unavoidable scene with Lauren (fat lady) and no matter what you chose in the end you always end up with her. I don't like the case where the game pretends to give you an option while in reality there's no option at all. For now i'm giving this game 3/5.

Damn i love the aunt and cousins. bombastic bodies and very sexual situations.
Everytime this game updates i immediately get excited
The aunt is so fucking sexy
The game is mostly touching and rubbing but with girls like these that is good enough. Can't wait for more.
Easily one of my favorite VNs

Review of v0.3
OVERALL HOTNESS/EROTICISM: 9.7/10

SOUND 8.5/10 - music adds to the experience without being distracting and fits the style/mood of the game. kinda like a relaxed cool jazz version of porn music. SFX are sexy and add to the experience also

ANIMATIONS 7.8/10 - they're decent and add to the experience, nothing distracting or especially bad

OUTFITS 8.5/10 - this is a nice detail and adds to the immersion. most of the fabric looks really good too except the yoga pants which doesn't look attractive and also looks poor render quality (maybe doing a solid colour and just doing a yoga pants texture would be better) and some of the tank tops on amelie have this common immersion break where the cloth meets inbetween her breasts and crash thru each other

DESIGNS 9/10 - designs of the girls are fantastic overall and very attractive. if you like really satisfyingly large breasts that look really good, the look is really nailed with the design of amelia. mia/lauren could be improved while still not outshine the main cast and fit their niche imo. they look more like they belong in a different game as is. think mia could be more attractive while still be alternative/punk-ish and lauren could also be more like a slightly chunkier sofia vergara or something too. the designs of the main cast are all fantastic. the biggest critique i'd have is the haircut on stephanie looks pretty bad, like an accident or like she got gum in her hair and had to chop it off abruptly. if she's going to have short hair, maybe at least more like natalie portman in that stripper role she did or something, like sleek/simple short hair but something that looks like it's an intentional haircut

OVERALL WRITING 8.8/10

-SCENE CONCEPTS/SETUP/STORY 9/10 really good, feels inspired and erotic, the direction seems really deliberate and how characters are moved in the story works well. the only critique i have here is while i seem to get why the content/character rotation is so frequent, it seems a touch too frequent even if it's the intention. i wouldn't mind some longer stretches of developing a particular character's progression for awhile. it doesn't have to be a complete direction shift in the game, just maybe an arc or two in the game where we stay with one character for a few scenes, like a chapter consisting of like 55% amelia, maybe with an interluding scene with kylee that'd be 5% of the chapter and then another 20% with kylee and last 20% with stephanie for an example.

-CHARACTERS 9.8/10 each character feels like she has a distinct identity and their character profiles add to the eroticism

-DIALOGUE 6.5/10 the substance of the dialogue itself is almost always really good but the details are sometimes lackluster. there's some typos and funny grammar sometimes. i'd also like to say there are so many other games where the MC is such a flaming douchebag or so ridiculously pornographic, it's actually either not good or breaks immersion. this game is far better than most in that regard but still sometimes has a moment here and there i think could be better like the kissing amelie scene where the MC says "i plan on doing it a lot more", i think would be better as something like "i like being close to you" responded with "i like it very much too", or the scene where the MC tells amelie she's sexy and she says "sexy?" and he responds with "yea that's what i said". it breaks immersion imo to say something that feels more like he's trying to court or seduce her like a regular date. instead i think something like "sexy? i'm too old for anyone to find me sexy" responded with "but you are" doesn't break immersion as much.

FINAL NOTES: this is really the ideal of how to do the erotic VN format. the bells and whistles of the music, SFX and animated content scenes really go a long way even though it's not nearly as CPU intensive to run or develop as a fully animated game like paralogue. an important point about this game, it feels inspired. it feels like some horny teenager's fantasy and even though it's a VN, it's really up there with Lust Epidemic in terms of it feeling inspired. kinda a slow burn but seems like it's paced okay. look forward to it picking up steam and future updates.

im still goin thru this but man this needs more viewership and rightly deserved praises. i cant go at full detail but whoever the dev or devs are they are hitting on all gears so far. im looking forward to keeping an eye on the patreon and seeing where this goes .

the story so far is great, the girls are cute, and the scenes are hot. Im a little late to the game this being the 3rd version of the game but im loving it, i dont support to many projects but this one i will be. hope to see more of the game, and cant wait for 4th version of the game to come out.

Version: 0.2

Well that was fucking hot. Decent size content for just two chapters. I love the fucking tease and the tension.

Only PROS

• story - flows so naturally and continuous. i appreciate the realistic conflicts
• beautiful character renders
• nice variety of female characters - all hot in their own way but none compare to the aunt
• ogling - i love that the MC stares very often at the women. because that's what i would also like to do in that situation
• erotic scenes - i enjoy the teasing nature of each scene. a lot of content as well

Version 0.5 - Rating 4,4/5

The game manages to enchant with every update. Now, I can easily say that this game is one of the best 3d game here!

Characters- Let's start with the characters. There is almost no character model in the game that I can call bad, the are all fascinating. If we evaluate the main characters, it is difficult to choose between them. If I had to choose, I would say the youngest sister is the one I prefer. (5/5)

Scenes- There are a lot of different scenes. It's not a grinder. ( What is a good thing) There are many quality scenes in the game that will drive you crazy. (4/5)

Animations- Animations are very successful, they certainly do not look artificial. (4.5/5)

Places- Place designs are very successful. The atmosphere in the house is good, but it could be better. I'm sure it will improve further. (4/5)

Personal Likes- I was happy to see that immediate sex with mother and both sister wasn't done. I like the teasers and the little accidents and that comes back in this game.

These are my general evaluations of the game. The front of this game is very bright, I have no doubt that it will be successful. This game definitely deserves the best. I would like to thank everyone who contributed to the production and wish you success. I will be following the development of the game with interest.

~Proxsz~

Art: 5/5 - Very beautiful art. I really like the detail they put into the game
Story: 4/5 - Not so excellent but enough fun to walk through the story. Some situations are not very convincing. Many things come suddenly with a little explanation
Music: 4/5 - Chill music
Sound: 3/5 - Not much sound effects
Gameplay: 5/5 - You don't have to grind for some hot scenes

The art is the star of the game in my opinion. Waiting for more update from the developers

This game has huge potential, the build up is nice but i think it should be a bit slower but not like a wife and a mother slow. The renders are quite good and the story is starting to get interesting after that dream.

good game, nice character design (beautiful mom), nice story so far (without abusive father or sisters), although without protagonist introductionin beginning or prologue so we can't know the relationship between family, can't wait to next update

Easily one of the best new games I've played, Excellent renders , plenty of content for the size and some different paths to explore hopefully in the future,
While I gave it 5 stars there are some things that needs work, mainly minor grammatical errors and 1 hilarious bug(I think it's a bug).
That's about it tho , solid game otherwise and looking forward to any future update, great job Dev!

Overall, this one of my favourite games and the storyline so far is quite entertaining. The characters are nicely rendered and the female characters are to die for.

Improvements:
- More dialogues and relationship building with main female character
- Relationship with two main characters to be built naturally and both parties as they progress face the question of "is this normal" and thus lead to "doesn't matter as I need what I need"
- Some additional choices within the story to delay or make the journey a bit more spicier
- Animations

Great game, I’m really hooked on this one. I know it’s early, but this is now one of my favorite games to look forward to.

Gameplay:

It started off a bit rough, I like sandbox games, but the previous version was a bit of a grind. The scenes were difficult to trigger and ultimately I was ready to give up. However, I decided to stick around and I’m glad I did because this new version is perfect, it has grammar issues, but that’s nothing that can’t be worked out. But I love the newer story versus the last one.

Characters:

Amelie is stunning, just flat out beautiful. Some games are great because of iconic characters that stand out and no one would forget and she is that.

Kaylee is another great character, she seems fun to be around and just an all around cool chick.

Stephanie can come off to some as annoying, but I love her character, I just think she’s misunderstood.

Mc is great so far, I wish the Dev make him more considerate to Amelie’s situation. For example, asking her to get a divorce and all that was a bit ridiculous to me, like at least show compassion, I know you wanna woo her, but don’t try so hard.

But to sum it up this game is fantastic, and I look forward to more. Great renders, Characters and pretty cool story.

Renders are overall pretty solid, especially for Amelie and Kylee. Lauren is also decent but the dimensions are a bit too exaggerated. Animations are also surprisingly fluid and not choppy like a good deal of games are

One thing though is that the render of Stephanie is actually off-putting to me since it puts a larger mature head on a very juvenile body and it bugs me a little bit. The grammar is also notably off and will require some proofreading.

Although I won't complain about the sexual content so far, it also seems a bit quick in the MC's progression from meeting Amelie to being able to openly rub his dick against her ass and toe the line of a make out session. It's something that could've been brought on more slowly

Overall, I do feel like the game has promise. The renders and animations are solid for the most part and there seems to be a decent amount of sexual content coming in the future

Played version 0 2

This game is currently on my top 5 best games atm. The renders/models are beautiful, the pacing is excellent, and the story too!
I hope the dev will continue to keep up the good work!

Pros:
Renders
Attractive characters
Enjoyable story

Cons:
MC
Questionable dialogue
Grammar

This game started as a grindy, buggy sandbox, but thank God that didn't hold up. This version is much more smooth than the original. Gorgeous models, like Stephanie, Kaylee and of course Amelie is enough to keep your juices flowing. The grammar is bad and the MC can come off ass just another horny insensitive prick sometimes. But those are all the gripes I have. Still an exciting game to play and I hope to see more.