VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Heart Problems [v0.9] [Xenorav]

I played version 0.4 with the cheat/walkthrough mod.

This game is pretty good, but I can't call it great. On the (big) plus side, I think the visuals, particularly of the main three girls, are fantastic. I think they're all very attractive, but they are all quite different and sexy in different ways.

On the downside though, I wasn't crazy about the writing. The overall story is fine, although I found it a little boring at times - e.g. a lot of the interactions with Amelie (sp?) where he was just being supportive and not really advancing the physical romance. The dialog seemed pretty stiff too - I ended up skipping a lot of it.

There were also some issues with the relationship refernces in the dailog - I tried to go with my own values, but that created some awkward statements (e.g. referring to "stepdad Davie" - looks like it would have worked with "uncle"). Not knocking the dev much for this because I know this would be really hard to get right for all possibilities, but I noticed these kinds of issues several times throughout. Maybe just going with a traditional incest patch would work better?

9/10 has a good story and great renders. I love the whole concept and I can't wait to see where this game goes, and to get some more fap material I am definitely thinking about dropping some cash on the patreon!

My favorite thing about this game is the believability of the characters. They seem like real people, even with their extremes. Very few characters make me think of them as people.

Not to oversell it. There are flaws with all of them, some frustratingly so. I'm not saying they're perfect, just that they feel real.

Anyway,

Story: 3/5
Nothing original really. Not that it has to be. It is very much a day in the life kind of story though, which is prone to slow updates and likely fizzling out story.

Characters: 4/5
Not to confuse this with what I already said: The characters are good. Not perfect.

Writing: 4/5
The dialogue is wonderful. Not every writer knows how to make believable dialogue.

Sex stuff: 3/5
So, this is because there isn't much actual sex stuff. So far it's been a massive tease fest with a bit of side action that kind felt cheap story wise.
But that tease is done well. Annoyingly well at some points.

Overall, if you like incest and teasing, give it a try.
Be warned, fi you don't like them young, you'll probably dislike it after a certain point.

I have been watching this game since v.01. It started quite promising, even though the story was generic. Then the dev started to look for cheap ways to extend the gameplay apparently. Cause currently, it has unbelievable amount of unnecessary scenes and texts. Amelie's storyline, for example, goes well and gathers some pace in the first two chapters of the game, and then it suddenly slows down. And the dev uses romance and irrelevant conversations and scenes to do this. It is such a turn off for me. Also, this kind of fluctuations ruin the natural essence of the story. I wish all the devs here complete the story first, then turn it into a game. I won't comment on the art and other stuff, because they don't really matter much to me if the storyline is not well-developed.

The overall premise of the game of course is not original, but it's not to bad. It does suffer from an overall feeling of being cheap.

Renders 5/10 : Average renders, the characters are ok, the environment is rather cheap though.

Story 4/10 : Suffers from context problems, as well as being unimaginative and bland. Changing the relation to the characters also causes problems, it is not properly thought out.

Animations 1/10 : Cheap and poor animated 2 second loops, along with no feeling of actually having realistic sex. Of course this is so common with these story/games. Since the story is bland and the animations cheap, this story/game is not memorable. More effort into improving both would change that.

Playability 8/10 : Since there is no grind in the game to earn things, the playabilty is high.

Content 5/10 : Chapters are not really short, nor are they long so for the amount of time it has been out there is an ok amount of content.


Overall : Although not likely, a redo of the whole thing with much better and imaginative story, As well as improving the animations. Would make this a better story/game.
As it is, it is not something that grabs the players attention or is memorable. One playthrough and there is no real desire for more.

It would be an interesting incest game if it weren't for the unbearable little girl who makes you want to play it anymore. As soon as you start chapter 3 you lose all interest.

It has good graphics, it's not about a sister/mother and it's about a cousin/aunt along with a friend and her mother which within non-logic is the most logical thing .

Simple plot & simple animation. But very focused on HOT main characters. Incest and NTR? amazing combination.
Also quite interesting character: Stephanie
She's pure, crazy, childish, slutty, and loli all together. I'd definitely play her route if developer adds more contents for her.

Damn it's good.This is amazing incest game like ICSTOR.
i like the story and the models are great..
I like kissing scene very erotic and fucking hot.
Renders are great.
The animation are good
All girls are desirable.
More power to Dev..

I played it till the end and I have to admit that the story plot is nice. The author made the younger secondary character really annoying, in my opinion hitting the target to get some variation. I’m also eager to see how the plot develops with the other co-protagonists. The renders of the girls are stunning!

Damn its good. There are many games with good renders and even better renders. But main parts of enjoyment - dialogues and plot. Yeah, they are still very amature but Im really can feel that chemistry. Im afraid only one thing - not beign able to live that long untill this game will be finished.

When I saw this I really had hearth-problems....


It has everything you will want from amazing Incest game!

• Hot mother and daughters
• Interesting dialogs, moments and some story
• Corruption and good pacing

But where this shines is.... Insanely beautiful models and Superb quality renders!!!

This game is very hot, albeit still early in development. But it's so damn good and i can't wait to see the future.

The characters are really good looking. The game is definitely above average in the looks department. Some of the models look beautiful. Honestly the main girls are some of the most beautiful models i have ever seen.

The situations and sexual content is really good. The buildup is really good. Even though there is little to no sexual situations with the main characters and right now it is buildup, it's still really good. The buildup is so good, the characterization of the girls is so good, i can't wait for it to build up to the sexual content with them.

Good game with an interesting story, this game has potential. I think the developer should pay more attention to this game . I am enjoying the story of this love triangle between the MC and the thirteen beautiful cats that live with him. I want to see how he will keep relationships hidden from each of the girls .

A great game!
The renders are great and the girls beautiful. At first I fell in love with the eldest cousin as she is just so beautiful, but the aunt and younger cousin are great as well.
The game has no sandbox element and so no grind, you go throug hthe story enjoying the events.
There are regular choices to make but i haven't been convinced with the results as it seems we pretty much go through the same stuff, at the exception of some naughty scenes that get skipped. But that also mean you don't have to worry too much, just choose whatever you want when a choice comes up without worrying hwo it would affect others girls.
Anyways, great game and can't wait to see more

There was no story, but you want to play the game somehow. The process is actually very slow, but the game does not bother you. Because scenes are always great sexually. I mean, the slow process is turning you on.

Renders 9/10 : As I said. Views are nice but not the best. Sex scenes of course include sex sounds and animations. This is a good thing.

Story 7/10 There was no story in this game. You play a normal incest game like the others. Don't set your expectations high for the story. But at least you should know that the game story makes sense. No bullshits.

Writing 10/10 I am fucking love the writting. Dev has written in simple language. You can easily understand. If your native language is not English like me, this game is for you.

Female characters: Each has a different personality. And they're all sexy. Especially my favorite is Stephine. Because Dev made him a real teenager.

I'm looking forward to see more of it.

A very decent game. It has potential to become a big one. Although it's kinda cliche, the dev knows how to stand out with the dialogue. Good models and good ASSets (maybe Mia and her mom wasn't that good models, but it's okay; variety is good). Well-written scenes, although the most memorables were Stephanie's ones for me.

Obviously, the game has flaws (PLOT TWIST: every game has) but it's a really good choice in general. It already outstands at its 0.3, can't wait to see how the game progresses in the future.

Good luck to the dev!

Overall the game isn't bad. The renders are good. The storyline is typical of an incest game but I like it. The characters you can romance with fit most of the people's fetishes. The only complaint is that whoever wrote the dialog for English need to proofread or hire someone to do so. Some of the dialogs are worded strangely.

(revisited the game after nearly 2 years, previous rating was 3 stars)

+Amelie
+Amelie's big juicy booty
+Amelie's smile
+Everything about Amelie
+animations (they get muuuuch better after chapter 5)
+nice renders (also get better)
+here and there good sound effects

-MC is still ugly as ever, he looks like a 10 year old in a body of 22 year old trenbolone enjoyer
- story (every chapter is exactly the same)
- music got slightly better, but its still really bad
-dialog (its bad, but you get used to itt)

To keep it a buck I still think this game is 3 stars in terms of overall quality, but I like Amelie too much, also the animations got much better, also there is so much booty in this game I have to give it 4 stars. Props to the dev, hes gotten better.

Even though its very early I have to give this game 5 star, all the characters looks beautiful, the milf got a bit exaggerated body proportions but it somehow compliments her motherly personality. My initial thought while playing this game was that all the girls in the game will be bimbo and dumb asf especially judging by their body definition but i was caught off guard by the awesome writing and pacing, each character feels real and believable i mean the sexual tension and all the build up is portrayed gracefully. I can only imagine what a masterpiece this game will turn out to be in a year or so.

Really nice renders and animation. Especially since the game is only a couple of hundred mb. The story is also pretty cool. Its pretty much the same as all others but i guess thats just my thing
Also music and sound are on point.