Ren'Py - Abandoned - Heavy Five [Ch.2RS] [Nottravis]

First review on this website so hope I don't ramble too much. Only played the first chapter but so far it's awesome.

Under the hood stuff
graphics/modeling: Amazing renders, the characters we've seen to this point look really well made and don't have the "crustiness" that some hentai games have.

Also liking how the characters clothes actually rest/hang on the body rather than have the weird invisible wall separating the clothes from the body.

Ui: Neat little Star Trek decoder thing where you can get lore, tips, background info. I think the only problem I had with the UI was when I first started playing I couldn't figure out where to go or what was clickable but you get used to it real quick once you start playing and seems like it's more like an eye problem on my part.

Writing/Gameplay:
Writing is good, characters react accordingly to dialogue/how the world is set up around them. Basically the writing feels real in the confines of the story.

Main character's dialogue choices seem varied and have appropriate responses/reactions. Also the M.C. can be sweet to people without sounding like a total gilbert, so that's a big plus from me.

Also it seems as though the femdom content will be more gentle femdom/cheeky fun femdom rather that "gloom and doom and things go boom" femdom (not that those are bad, it's just nice to see something pleasent for a change).

Not a whole lot of content so far but the game is early in development and the creator is very active with the community so the project looks very promising.

TLR version: Writing and art is solid, content looks promising, and possible femdom waifus, 10/10.

At the time of writing this only 1 chapter has been released so far, but it has been everything a good introduction to a game / visual novel should be, to the point where I'm almost blown away by the quality.

The amount of options to pick from and explore in conversations is expansive but not overwhelming, giving loads of freedom in regards to how you want the main character to be like. The inner monologue and the conversation options are believable, and even something seemingly small such as how your MC want to be addressed (formally or casually) gives a lot more impact in how the interactions with the NPCs feel than one might expect.

The setting is a typical "early stages of human expansion in the galaxy" style Sci-Fi setting, but there is effort put into it to make it stand out instead of being too generic. There are small lore snippets that you unlock as you play that gives interesting context to the world around you, but are implemented in a way that avoids dumping long expository dialogue on anyone who doesn't care about such things.

Speaking of that, the freedom to choose your experience, and the ability to avoid or seek out the type of kinks you like / dislike has clearly been a large part of the foundation in the creation of the game, which is always appreciated to see in a game.

There is a lot of good things to say about this game, much of it already having been said by other reviewers. While nothing in the world can really be considered flawless, this game sets an example for all other first releases and demos on how to make something that is well crafted both visually and mechanically, efficient in its introduction of main supporting characters and story / sexual themes, and intriguing enough to leave you wanting for more.

TL;DR: It's pretty alright.

Once in a while, there are adult games that intrigue you beyond a simple need for fappage. Where you get invested in the scenario, the characters, and the story. Where you can't predict the entire story arc just by reading the overview. While it might be early days yet, Heavy Five looks like it could be one of those few.

Here, characters have their own motivations, and you don't always get what you want on the first try. Writing is engaging and believable, and there's a good deal of choice that could lead you down some very unique paths in each playthrough. There's a wealth of information stored away, sometimes in plain sight, which promises many plot twists and turns down the road. The graphics aren't very flashy, but in terms of visual design, characters are grounded, their look accentuating their personalities well, and environments also feel like they belong to one cohesive universe. While the first episode doesn't feature any sexy time, you can see the construction of a framework built to accommodate a whole number of kinks, including the crowd favourites.

At times, it seems like it may have bitten off more than it can chew, but I can't fault ambition. There may be a few rough ends with navigation at the moment, but it's not enough to deny it full marks. Definitely one of the best pilot episodes I've played here so far.

Very good writing. Unique. The art is excellent, though too realistic for me. It is still in a very early state, but it holds a lot of promise, and I look forward to seeing more of it and the options it presents.

Story: The plot is interesting, something Sci-Fi, and the fact that you can choose to be the hero or some ignorant dick, i love it. And also there's a woman (or more) for every taste.
Originality: Hadn't noticed a game alike. I mean yes there are several about spaceships , but you are not that free to do what you want.
Sound: It's pretty, if we can add some women voices would nail it, but i know this game is free so even tho, it's amazing by the graphics and the words women use, don't get me wrong.
Performance,Bugs: not a single flaw in my walkthrough.
Animations: small ones,and no explicit content, i'm into femdom and i saw a woman from these 3 , melting me just by her choice of words.
Grammar: ain't no native, but i think it was perfect.
Amount of content : Pretty much, and got my attention for sure!

Review as of Chapter 2.

Only two chapters in and Heavy Five is already my top favourite 3D rendered adult VN that is setting many bars in terms of storytelling and character depth.

THE GOOD:

- Choices and Consequences at its best. Although a visual novel, it is in fact more of a roleplaying game than many others that claim to be one, for in this game you actually can roleplay a character thanks to the sheer amount of choices that do matter along the way. However, there is no repetitive grinding of stats as everything depends on the decisions player makes. Choices themselves have great variety adaptive to each situations. They are not simple bad guy/good guy options. They are logical and reward players who pay attention in regards to what their goals are.

- Writing is superb adding a lot of depth to the game.I'd go even as far as calling it the best written western adult game I've played. It's never boring. I play almost always only one route in visual novels, but the quality of the writing here is so captivating that it would be a bloody shame not to try playing with different character mindsets and goals and see where else it might take me playthrough after playthrough.

- Character Depth. All characters have very well developed and complex personalities. Getting to know them is like getting to know a real person (except more fun...mostly.). They have their own motivations, agendas, fears, secrets as well as virtues, vices and quirks. If you don't fall in love with at least one of the main three heroines, you have no heart. I can tell you that it's very easy to do so with all three though, and more girls are on the way.

- The MC. The player character is great because he is smart. For good or ill. You are not playing a creepy immature idiot in this game. The MC, as I see him, has a keen analytical mind, which is helpful cause he gives his thoughts before the choices, thus making it easier to anticipate consequences, but he's thankfully not perfect, so ultimately it is on player's wit to choose what is best for him.

- Great Renders. Everyone is tired of seeing the same models again and again, right? Well, that doesn't happen here. Every character looks very different from any that I've seen before. And they are gorgeous! (Well, the girls are, I'm biased in that). Beautiful faces with stunning eyes (honestly, haven't seen any dev that would do eyes better with light reflection) and alluring figures (No ridiculously inflated balloons up or down with super thin waist, thankfully!). What really sets them apart in my opinion, is dev's excellent touch with expressions and body postures that perfectly correlates to the writing. There is also very good usage of close-up renders. Besides the girls, I have to mention another beauty, and that is the small cruiser Vanguard. I do have appreciation for pretty starships.

- Background Details. Little things, but I appreciate them very much. From the interiors of the Vanguard over beer cans and posters to badges and insignias on the uniforms, there is nothing that would feel out of place.

- The Lewd. There is not a lot of lewd stuff yet, but what is there is very well done both in terms of visuals and writing. As getting to know the characters first makes it much more rewarding later, there is a lot to look forward to. There is a large number of great teasing scenes (which is a favourite thing of mine), so there is certainly enough to give the imagination wheels a spin.

- The Lore. I don't think there is another adult game with as extensive background information on the characters, the story and the universe. Thanks to that I can also say I haven't seen as immersive sci-fi setting in an adult game either.

- The Technobabble. As a trekkie, this is one of the important things that define a sci-fi setting. To make the the technical stuff right or at least believable. Again, this is something Heavy Five excels in. I haven't found anything in this area where I would think that it's bullshit. Even things like military hierarchy and rules are worked out to the detail. As an aviation enthusiast, I also greatly appreciate the dev's research that went into flight mechanics, checklist procedures, and ATC communication.

- Patreon Extras. Not really much relevant to me mateys here, but this is something that is worth mentioning. Bored Pilot in-game magazine is a very nice touch. Hillarious interviews with sexy pictures, what can top that?

- VR Games. Very nice addition in Chapter 2. One of the girls is an avid gamer and playing with her promises a lot of crazy fun. One thing, why I always wanted Star Trek to become reality was their holodecks and all the stuff you can do there without risk. This is very much like that.


THE BAD:

- It's extremely difficult to put something here. So I'll just go with one little graphical effect that I don't like very much. Lip gloss of certain characters (namely Trisha, and to some extent Chris in Ch.2). I find it too bright, making the lips look plasticky and unnatural. But I'm also not a fan of "radical" lipstick colors in general, so take this with a grain of salt.


THE UGLY:

- Sorry, "the ugly" fans, I still couldn't find anything.

Great start.
Good renders, good music, good writing.

I look forward to how this will develop, but for an introductory chapter this is right up there, especially considering you constrained the gameplay to two locations (the hangar and the ship).

As this grows I'm sure it'll turn into an intricate tangle of a plot, but I'm rooting for the LGMs myself.

EDIT: POST CHAPTER 3

I called it - an intricate tangle of a plot. There are rumors, and suspicions, and sideways glances from a ship-mate who should know better. There's the question of whether the situation is due to willful malice or simple incompetency. Let's not forget that all the characters have their own goals, ambitions, secrets, and agendas. In other words: it's a fully-fleshed story with well-thought-out characters driving it.

As such, the characters all grow more interesting as the story progresses and their personalities deepen and broaden. No one-dimensional types here.

If you're concerned that you're missing something from the Patreon extras:
The bonuses (bonus mini-game and magazines) are just that: not something directly related to the story overall and while you miss out on some good entertainment (under the "Entertainment" button on your in-game PDA) not having them doesn't detract from the game itself. In other words: content directly related to the game is not locked behind a paywall.

This is a review for Chapter 1

Girls In Space!

This newest dev has a great first start for a potential new classic.

Music - Reminds me of classic science fiction.
Story - Science fiction story about a recently appointed engineer to a project that has some mystery surrounding it. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Characters - MC is not a jackass unless you want him to be.
The newest ensign Sarah ready to please her superiors.
The laidback Annie. What will she expect of you?
The dominating Chris. Vasquez 2.0 anyone. (Best Girl)
Many more to come.
Graphics -All the female models looks great. The ui is unique and easy enough to navigate. There is a tutorial at the begin for gaming newbs. Entertaining response for skipping tutorial. The ship though small feels like a realistic vessel.

Choices are meaningful and can lead to different scenes. Keep multiple saves on this one for future chapters.

There is no sex scenes as of chapter 1. Though there is a lot of setup for future interactions with the characters. Plus the story is interesting enough that I have multiple reason to keep checking on this.

Keep an eye out on this one.

Excelsior

This game is off to a great start! The renders are absolutely top notch, I love the choice of music and the characters are very well defined. There is also a lot of background story being built up. Not just with the characters, but with some good old fashioned Sci-Fi mystery.

For this reviewer, the setting and music draw up fond memories of Wing Commander, Star Trek and Starship Troopers.

While there is no sex yet, all the necessary tension is there and I don't think it will take long for this tiny shuttle to explode. This game has a very strong opening and I played through it three times before felt like I saw most of what was there.

While certain choices provide more instantaneous rewards, I never got the feeling there were any "wrong" choices. There were of course dialogue options that let you shut down a character's romance, but they felt very clearly marked.

I'm excited to see where this story goes.