VN - Ren'Py - Henry's Adventures [v0.5 Alpha] [Lenovic]

review for v0.5.

was pretty fun, loved the mc, one of ma fav mc's in a while.
girls are cute, gobbo was best.
scenes a bit short, but good.
writing is a bit scuffed, needs some proofreading.
really lookin forward to see where this goes.

A great game with an interesting story. the visuals are not the best out there but it's good enough. the characters are likable, and the writing is decent. There is not much playtime now, but it's updated fairly quickly. A 5/5 game at least give it a try

Games of this genre can only be carried or considered top tier with their plot and story, so I would suggest dev to improve as a writer and definitely this game can be a big one. As for animations and graphics, it's pretty good. Not that top tier.
Overall liked the premise, the MC seems to be a bit too much of a Giga Chad but it's okay. This is Dev's first work so I won't judge much. But will ask the dev to play other games of this genre and pick what's missing because the writing seems a bit Meh in this AVN.

I like the plot.

I don't like the story... or more specifically, I dislike how the story is told. there's a huge difference between illustrating a memory with a few scenes of backstory, standard exposition through relating that memory verbally, and what's done in this VN, which is a half-sentence summary of what happened. so, I don't get to experience the story, I don't get to hear the story, I just have to accept in short, broken English that the story happened when the main character wasn't around to see it.

the characters are mostly great, including the MC.

the renders are good. the posing is not.

I'm hoping to see more of how the plot develops, but honestly, the storytelling needs to improve to even meet "porn game; little to no story" standards. if the next release improves there, I'm probably in for the long haul to see where it goes. if it doesn't, as good as the renders are (with terrible posing), I won't need to play the game to experience decent renders. there are better mediums in which to do so.

I like it, although it is too early to know for sure, it is on a very good path, not much is known about the story yet so they must have a lot of work ahead of them, I like the genre, so I want to continue seeing it in the future. Good job.

Not much by way of plot so far, and it still feels like we're in the "set-up stage". But I like the character dynamics, the overall feel of the game world and general premise. In the right hands, this story can both soar and shine. I'm cautiously optimistic.