VN - Ren'Py - Henry's Adventures [v0.9.9 Alpha] [Lenovic]

I like the plot.

I don't like the story... or more specifically, I dislike how the story is told. there's a huge difference between illustrating a memory with a few scenes of backstory, standard exposition through relating that memory verbally, and what's done in this VN, which is a half-sentence summary of what happened. so, I don't get to experience the story, I don't get to hear the story, I just have to accept in short, broken English that the story happened when the main character wasn't around to see it.

the characters are mostly great, including the MC.

the renders are good. the posing is not.

I'm hoping to see more of how the plot develops, but honestly, the storytelling needs to improve to even meet "porn game; little to no story" standards. if the next release improves there, I'm probably in for the long haul to see where it goes. if it doesn't, as good as the renders are (with terrible posing), I won't need to play the game to experience decent renders. there are better mediums in which to do so.

I like it, although it is too early to know for sure, it is on a very good path, not much is known about the story yet so they must have a lot of work ahead of them, I like the genre, so I want to continue seeing it in the future. Good job.

Not much by way of plot so far, and it still feels like we're in the "set-up stage". But I like the character dynamics, the overall feel of the game world and general premise. In the right hands, this story can both soar and shine. I'm cautiously optimistic.