NoodleJacuzzi

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just found out the Thomas code doesn't un-Robotnik you
10/10 code though
Using the "i've come to make an announcement: shadow the hedgehog's a bitch-ass motherfucker" cheat again will disable it. Glad you liked it!

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Every time I use it I get a great new screenshot.
 

Templar Knight

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very interesting proposal and I am very interested in testing the game, I have only three doubts:
1- According to the images, the player can choose whether to be male or female, right?
2- I know you mentioned being sandbox/freeroam, but does the player have some time to finish the game? some games i played said to be freeroam / sandbox but either they had a time to complete the game and if you fail complete till that time it would lead to bad ending or after beating the main quest the game ended.
3- choices can lead to a bad path or bad ending for that character or for the game?
 

SeibaUrufu

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So I played the previous version.

I didn't any expectations for this game, thout I would spent 5-10min on it.

Seems like I was wrong, had a lots of fun on it yesterday, just want to say grats to the team for it.
 

NoodleJacuzzi

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very interesting proposal and I am very interested in testing the game, I have only three doubts:
1- According to the images, the player can choose whether to be male or female, right?
2- I know you mentioned being sandbox/freeroam, but does the player have some time to finish the game? some games i played said to be freeroam / sandbox but either they had a time to complete the game and if you fail complete till that time it would lead to bad ending or after beating the main quest the game ended.
3- choices can lead to a bad path or bad ending for that character or for the game?
1.Not male and female, it's just the player portrait and pronouns you use.
2. Yeah you have as much time as you like, there's no rush. I experimented with a timer for a certain part of the game but it wasn't fun so I dropped the mechanic.
3. Yes, but the game regularly autosaves so you can just refresh the game or load.

what does version22 even mean ? back in my day a game was mostly done with V1 !
I have other games like that, but since this game doesn't have an end point in mind the version nunber is just how many releases I've done.

What are the cheats?
Link on the first page friend

how do you encounter Aaron?
Enable him first in the mod list via the game console

So I played the previous version.

I didn't any expectations for this game, thout I would spent 5-10min on it.

Seems like I was wrong, had a lots of fun on it yesterday, just want to say grats to the team for it.
Glad you liked it!
 

RexHeller

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I could use some advice with completing Eva. I got the scene where you fuck her and she remembers her last name. I went to talk to Victoria Devon, but all I got was a blank screen that I had to reload. Then I found a book in the library about her family. Now what do I do?
 

NoodleJacuzzi

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I could use some advice with completing Eva. I got the scene where you fuck her and she remembers her last name. I went to talk to Victoria Devon, but all I got was a blank screen that I had to reload. Then I found a book in the library about her family. Now what do I do?
I'd like your save if you could send it to me, you could post it here or email it to noodlejacuzzi@gmail.com. It'd help in replicating the blank screen glitch.

But as for what to do, after finding the book Eva should appear in the park.
 

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okay, so i finished the characters made by "Ace",
and i got to say... i didn't like it, it's insanely overwritten and feel jarringly out-of-place

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"Ace" sure know his femboys, but by god it went too far,
they all feel at odd with the tone of the game, and overly complicated, "Chloe" is probably the most tolerable-one.
i think the best type of characters are the ones that has nothing to do with the rest of the game or the "main-plot",

Gekka is great, Robbin-Lee is great, the "Delinquent-Trio" is great, Eva and Sadako are both great,
just write interesting side-characters with their own short contained-stories like them,
ironically your characters will stand-out a lot more and will be a lot more fun to read.
 
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okay, so i finished the characters made by "Ace",
and i got to say... i didn't like it, it's insanely overwritten and feel jarringly out-of-place

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"Ace" sure know his femboys, but by god it went too far,
they all feel at odd with the tone of the game, and overly complicated, "Chloe" is probably the most tolerable-one.
i think the best type of characters are the ones that has nothing to do with the rest of the game or the "main-plot",

Gekka is great, Robbin-Lee is great, the "Delinquent-Trio" is great, Eva and Sadako are both great,
just write interesting side-characters with their own short contained-stories like them,
ironically your characters will stand-out a lot more and will be a lot more fun to read.
Hot dang man I wish I could get feedback this detailed on how to improve my own stuff. I appreciate that you liked my things tho. And no need to apologize for a long essay!

I'll pass the feedback along, but I'm curious on two fronts:
1. Characters written by Cryptogreek (Steph, Nikki, Anna & Lena, Reese, Sienna) are substantially longer than mine. Do you feel they are overwritten? If not, how do you feel crypto avoided this? I'm really curious because I do like writing short chars, but I also do want to attempt longer ones in the future, especially because Steph keeps winning popularity polls over my girls and I want that gold medal!
2. You mention that Chloe still feels overwritten. Could you expand on that, since she's nearly a quarter of the size of Aaron and Dan? Is it just the nature of being a side-character instead of feeling like they're trying to take the spotlight? Does she still have that overly long backstory feeling?
 
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Hot dang man I wish I could get feedback this detailed on how to improve my own stuff. I appreciate that you liked my things tho. And no need to apologize for a long essay!

I'll pass the feedback along, but I'm curious on two fronts:
1. Characters written by Cryptogreek (Steph, Nikki, Anna & Lena, Reese, Sienna) are substantially longer than mine. Do you feel they are overwritten? If not, how do you feel crypto avoided this? I'm really curious because I do like writing short chars, but I also do want to attempt longer ones in the future, especially because Steph keeps winning popularity polls over my girls and I want that gold medal!

2. You mention that Chloe still feels overwritten. Could you expand on that, since she's nearly a quarter of the size of Aaron and Dan? Is it just the nature of being a side-character instead of feeling like they're trying to take the spotlight? Does she still have that overly long backstory feeling?
okay, so to begin with, i'll apologize because i didn't make what i meant by "overwritten" clear-enough
when i said "overwritten" it mean two things:
-characters written too complexes for this kind of games
-characters with way too-much text about them

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Speaking of Steph,
if you want to beat "Steph" tho', as much as i love them, i don't think the "Delinquent-Trio" will do,
i love them and they're very fun, but that's because they're comical, no-one would choose them seriously.
I think you might want to make a character about "medium-lenght",
not too-short but not too-long, you could very-much also make a "rival" gal, they have a huge appeal,
what you need would be a character with a unique gimmick and personnality that stand-out compared to others.

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i was just spitballing there, but you get the idea,
stories with a clear-goal involving characters with two-dimensionnal personnality,
but interesting and unique personality-traits, will always triump over overly-complexe characters with stories that goes nowhere/dosn't have a goal.

Now concerning Chloe,
When i said she's "overwritten" i didn't mean she had too-much text, nah she's fine on that front,
It's just the gap between having "boohoo i'm prostitute, because of my profession i'm unmarriable" and the rest of the game.

I think she would have been fine if in another-game, but she stand-out like a sore-thumb.
which is ironic because prior to that point, when she was just lewd-as-hell she fit well in your game.
 
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Uhhh… does this thing really work? Seems so. Hello! Ace here, finally daring to interact! Very glad to hear that you (apparently) liked the new stuff I added on this version (And sorry you had to read that massive textwall named Aaron)! Aaron took too long to finish but I feel like it was worth it (though I have one extra ending in mind with Aaron which you somewhat foreshadowed, great). His 5 friends (the “full house” he mentioned, namely Ethan, Ashley, Valery, Evan and Skye) are going to be added eventually as well (and ultimately an ending that includes all 9 of my characters + Ash, something big). As for the Anri part you would’ve (or should’ve) seen a different result if you had one certain blond boi corrupted, explaining what happened in more detail. I don’t have much to say about Chloe but glad you enjoyed her too! Since she was a short character (and since she was a she) she was hard to write for. I think I spoke a little too much again and I’m sorry for that. Thank you for your reviews and have a good day!
 

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Aaron took too long to finish but I feel like it was worth it (though I have one extra ending in mind with Aaron which you somewhat foreshadowed, great). His 5 friends (the “full house” he mentioned, namely Ethan, Ashley, Valery, Evan and Skye) are going to be added eventually as well (and ultimately an ending that includes all 9 of my characters + Ash, something big).
Aaron was fun, although the forced route was a bit darker and more serious in tone than the rest of the game. Definitely well written though, you could really feel his despair at the situation he is in. And slightly problematic insofar as if he can actually resist our guy's control, why doesn't he go to the cops and tell them about what we've been doing or something?
I don’t have much to say about Chloe but glad you enjoyed her too! Since she was a short character (and since she was a she) she was hard to write for.
Chloe was great, I particularly liked how she embraces being a sex toy. It would be nice to have a darker alternative ending where she is convinced that being his personal sex toy is the best she can hope for and commits to that rather than being a wife. What was disappointing about the ending she has was the exclusivity in it. If the mentions of that were trimmed out it would be a great ending too.
 
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