Aaron was fun, although the forced route was a bit darker and more serious in tone than the rest of the game. Definitely well written though, you could really feel his despair at the situation he is in. And slightly problematic insofar as if he can actually resist our guy's control, why doesn't he go to the cops and tell them about what we've been doing or something?
Chloe was great, I particularly liked how she embraces being a sex toy. It would be nice to have a darker alternative ending where she is convinced that being his personal sex toy is the best she can hope for and commits to that rather than being a wife. What was disappointing about the ending she has was the exclusivity in it. If the mentions of that were trimmed out it would be a great ending too.
Yeah he gets a lot darker if you reject him, it’s more about “not even gonna let me have that much” thing for him even if he could force for partial initiative, he doesn’t go telling cops because as much as he hates the MC he knows how much that’d upset the people around him. And as for Chloe I can say I had to place her story that way as a setting for her part in the “deluxe” ending as I call it. I know it is a bit weak as an ending but her personality being that way was more important for the long run. One last thing, I noticed that you haven’t mentioned Aaron’s corruption scene and his hotel ending. Could you not corrupt him? Can you check Gou again to see if you still have the corruption mark? Some of the players had their marks removed for whatever reason and Aaron’s corruption and hotel ending (only gou) going unnoticed sounds unfair to me. Again have a good day!
One last thing, I noticed that you haven’t mentioned Aaron’s corruption scene and his hotel ending. Could you not corrupt him? Can you check Gou again to see if you still have the corruption mark? Some of the players had their marks removed for whatever reason and Aaron’s corruption and hotel ending (only gou) going unnoticed sounds unfair to me. Again have a good day!
Ah right, saw that in the changelog but forgot about it. I have two saves one 'good' and one 'bad' and the 'bad' one does corruption and chose the forced route, I'm guessing it requires the freedom route? I'll have to pick up the corruption mark on the 'good' save and try it out.
Ah right, saw that in the changelog but forgot about it. I have two saves one 'good' and one 'bad' and the 'bad' one does corruption and chose the forced route, I'm guessing it requires the freedom route? I'll have to pick up the corruption mark on the 'good' save and try it out.
I can't even figure out what to do with the trio. First time I remember being stuck in this. I'll get the option to see them, I think night, maybe afternoon, they'll have a chat about 'something hard', then it'll just say 'leave these thots'.
The trio think's she's popular because of money, attention, and the coveted roof spot, but it's also meta because I'm trying to take her best girl position.
"I'm not even sure why we're getting the cash, or why we can't just use some that we've already got "
I wanted to give the player a big bump in money. I intended to make it all shippable, but I like the scenes too much
On beating Steph and Zoe, I feel like I definitely straddled the line between reasonable and too stupid to live/too mean for ginger and raven. Still, I feel pretty good about them despite going in a comedic direction, and am glad you think they're amazing!
"Seriously though, I'm pretty sure our destiny is to become a demon lord, and make our own little heaven here on earth."
But if you had a chance to change your fate, would you? Kay believes that you can enjoy angel femboi paradise as well.
"The guidance is interesting, though I notice that the hints don't seem to be limited to their next step, but appear to be for their entire route."
Indeed. Usually only one part gives people trouble, like with Damian and the key phrase.
"Oh god, this one is truly horrific. Why no trigger warning? "
Lmao I actually hardcoded that preview statement manually so that it would serve as a trigger warning
"The artworks are all really sexy, but I'm not really a fan of always nude avatars. Would be nice if more scenes had them react to what the girl is wearing, but always nude doesn't really do it for me."
I was originally going to use Kay for degenerate mode from Anomaly vault, so you'd get random porn images, but cut that for time. Plus I dunno if the idea works as well in university as it did in anomaly.
"I don't know that bringing Gou here is a good idea, he's fine how he is and doesn't need purifying. It's interesting that his immediate reaction was thinking of being purified rather than corrupting Kay though."
I got a few requests to allow for purification in the next version, plus I think it's fun to make a route where Gou is the one having his body messed with.
"If bringing Gou here was a bad idea, that goes tenfold for Meph. Honestly we should be thankful he didn't break more than he did. Fucking him and making Kay watch does sound like a hell of a lot of fun too."
Meph's in kind of a weird spot because he's meant to have this ominous deal with the devil aspect to him, leading to his ending capping that off, but he's also the resident turbopervert.
"I would have been very surprised if she would have come with us, while she is weak to us fucking her, we don't have the control over her that we do Gou and Meph. Yet."
She's actually not present because Kay's a guy, and his reward scenes are difficult to make the player opt into, so she only gets a brief mention. She is however super into fembois, hence the game she plays on her phone.
I'm still kinda stuck on how to do her ending though.
Actually, I notice you didn't mention any of Kay's sex scenes. Did they not unlock for you? When you accept a challenge, make your first donation, listen to the first, sixth, and final sermon, and bring in one of the demons like Gou, Meph, Lily, or Robin post-corruption the next time you speak to kay you should get a lewd scene.
okay, so to begin with, i'll apologize because i didn't make what i meant by "overwritten" clear-enough
when i said "overwritten" it mean two things:
-characters written too complexes for this kind of games
-characters with way too-much text about them
Speaking of Steph,
if you want to beat "Steph" tho', as much as i love them, i don't think the "Delinquent-Trio" will do,
i love them and they're very fun, but that's because they're comical, no-one would choose them seriously.
I think you might want to make a character about "medium-lenght",
not too-short but not too-long, you could very-much also make a "rival" gal, they have a huge appeal,
what you need would be a character with a unique gimmick and personnality that stand-out compared to others.
i was just spitballing there, but you get the idea,
stories with a clear-goal involving characters with two-dimensionnal personnality,
but interesting and unique personality-traits, will always triump over overly-complexe characters with stories that goes nowhere/dosn't have a goal.
Now concerning Chloe,
When i said she's "overwritten" i didn't mean she had too-much text, nah she's fine on that front,
It's just the gap between having "boohoo i'm prostitute, because of my profession i'm unmarriable" and the rest of the game.
I think she would have been fine if in another-game, but she stand-out like a sore-thumb.
which is ironic because prior to that point, when she was just lewd-as-hell she fit well in your game.
Dang, I went too far on comedy. Well, I'll add more to them anyways and keep trying for the top spot, maybe your opinion will change when I add a lot more? And if not, I'll try again with a new character.
Although when you say "not too-short but not too-long, you could very-much also make a "rival" gal, they have a huge appeal,
what you need would be a character with a unique gimmick and personnality that stand-out compared to others."
It reminds me of Lana, who I also wrote. Did you like her? She's the pornstar girl.
"Why not making a character with someone related to the PTSA?"
I went this direction with Abilgail and Daniella
"like some ojou-sama type character, she was studying abroad but she decided to come-back to this university for somes-reasons (anything would be fine really).
Her parent are also abroad, so they don't have that much sway but their daughter is taken seriously because of their reputation,"
Imo this touches on too many of the same notes as Olivia. Fun fact, each character has a codename in the files for various reasons, but Olivia's codename is ojou
Gyaru-ization is a rad idea, but it's a visual transformation in my mind, so it'd be hard to do with preexisting image sets.
I can't even figure out what to do with the trio. First time I remember being stuck in this. I'll get the option to see them, I think night, maybe afternoon, they'll have a chat about 'something hard', then it'll just say 'leave these thots'.
a few problems with Victoria:
I can’t seem to get the ask about her last name option to work
It’s says I’ve not corrupted Charlotte when I’ve done her ending
a few problems with Victoria:
I can’t seem to get the ask about her last name option to work
It’s says I’ve not corrupted Charlotte when I’ve done her ending
The last name option is broken, I'll fix that, but you can ignore it and go to the library to find the relevant book without talking to victoria
For charlotte, getting the ending and then choosing to continue playing undoes the stuff, you gotta do Charlotte again (in a different order if you want) and not choose to do her ending.
On beating Steph and Zoe, I feel like I definitely straddled the line between reasonable and too stupid to live/too mean for ginger and raven. Still, I feel pretty good about them despite going in a comedic direction, and am glad you think they're amazing!
They are pretty extreme, as is Goldie with just how in-your-face she is about being slutty (talking about stuffing her bra/stuffing herself with no provocation whatsoever), but that fits the general tone of the game. And with a Tsundere, like Raven, her being particularly mean makes it tastier when she falls for you.
Not if it means giving up the rest of our girls. Once we're attached to someone, I hate the idea of leaving them. Making someone love you only to then abandon them? Just think about how many hearts we're breaking on any of the endings that involve going exclusive.
I got a few requests to allow for purification in the next version, plus I think it's fun to make a route where Gou is the one having his body messed with.
She's actually not present because Kay's a guy, and his reward scenes are difficult to make the player opt into, so she only gets a brief mention. She is however super into fembois, hence the game she plays on her phone.
I'm still kinda stuck on how to do her ending though.
I still think you're way too strict with that. Ensuring that none of the girls require you to interact with any of the bois to complete them (or vice-versa)? That makes perfect sense, it would be no good making players go through someone they aren't into to progress with someone they are. Refusing to do crossover side scenes that aren't required to complete a character's story though? That's just limiting the game unnecessarily. What exactly would the downside be to having an optional scene where one of the girls meets one of the bois?
Actually, I notice you didn't mention any of Kay's sex scenes. Did they not unlock for you? When you accept a challenge, make your first donation, listen to the first, sixth, and final sermon, and bring in one of the demons like Gou, Meph, Lily, or Robin post-corruption the next time you speak to kay you should get a lewd scene.
They are pretty extreme, as is Goldie with just how in-your-face she is about being slutty (talking about stuffing her bra/stuffing herself with no provocation whatsoever), but that fits the general tone of the game. And with a Tsundere, like Raven, her being particularly mean makes it tastier when she falls for you.
Not if it means giving up the rest of our girls. Once we're attached to someone, I hate the idea of leaving them. Making someone love you only to then abandon them? Just think about how many hearts we're breaking on any of the endings that involve going exclusive.
That does sound fun, especially since we've discovered how much more fun angels are than how Gou described them. He might get a pleasant surprise.
I still think you're way too strict with that. Ensuring that none of the girls require you to interact with any of the bois to complete them (or vice-versa)? That makes perfect sense, it would be no good making players go through someone they aren't into to progress with someone they are. Refusing to do crossover side scenes that aren't required to complete a character's story though? That's just limiting the game unnecessarily. What exactly would the downside be to having an optional scene where one of the girls meets one of the bois?
I noticed them when going through the extra Aaron stuff I missed, I'll comment on them soon.
Well that type of side scenes can be expected in new versions especially with my new group (and the ending I mentioned earlier, including all my characters). Noodle is not a fan of “mixing meats and salads” as the “vegetarian” and “carnivore” players may not like them. Though as a modder I can just put a “includes this and that interactions with those characters” as a note and step aside. My first draft for that ending was so much fun as well (even though 5 out of 10 characters for that don’t even exist atm) I am aware I am promoting my own characters too much
Vegetarian and Carnivore players wouldn't see such scenes, they would be disabled by the codes just like all the plain girl/boi scenes are when the relevant code is active.
Vegetarian and Carnivore players wouldn't see such scenes, they would be disabled by the codes just like all the plain girl/boi scenes are when the relevant code is active.
Glad you liked the finisher content, Theo, Dan and Aaron have more conversations together than that (in the home scene post-blackout, if you have corrupted Dan of course(adding on that post-blackout scene has 4 outcomes in total)) and I love making them interact. I can’t really say “Aaron has a relationship” in that ending since it is still left to the player’s way of viewing it (though I am definitely for it). About the carnivore/vegetarian thing I never meant we can’t do it, it’s just Noodle isn’t a huge fan of interactions like I am
I have completely every content with every other character in the game, in every area, at every period of time, both official and addon. Who specifically do they want me to interact with?
I have completely every content with every other character in the game, in every area, at every period of time, both official and addon. Who specifically do they want me to interact with?
Is it possible to turn off gay/sissy content? I completely respect that you included it so people can enjoy it, but I'd rather not view it. I played it through way back when, but it seems to have skyrocketed in content since. But I'd rather not run into a wall with the kinda cute trap boy again lol.
Is it possible to turn off gay/sissy content? I completely respect that you included it so people can enjoy it, but I'd rather not view it. I played it through way back when, but it seems to have skyrocketed in content since. But I'd rather not run into a wall with the kinda cute trap boy again lol.
I'm glad teddy was able to help. Vegetarian mode has been around for a while, it even has a preview image on the first page, but I only added the option to enable it from the start recently.
Hope you enjoy the rest of the game!