Welp, I just caught up with the latest update. Generally pretty positive, though I think that I agree with a lot of the opinions that I've read here about how the direct side-by-side between Rose and Cyanna both falling at the exact same time took away some of the impact, and caused both of the scenes to feel like they couldn't really build their own momentum. Neither of them were that long or heavy with prose/dialogue, but having them conjoined like that made the whole scene feel a lot longer than it actually was. I can 100% appreciate the attempt at getting creative with the framing, though! I just don't think it quite landed this time.
But more importantly than my unsolicited opinion:
N_taii, I just wanted to point out that I noticed a minor visual glitch during Cyanna's loss of virginity scene! It's a little vertical black line behind Ulrod (visible in the second image), where it only pops up between frames — so I think it is just something on the edge of the sprite sheet that might not have been very visible without the background there?
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I even closed out the game entirely after I reached the end of Update 8's content and viewed it again through the gallery, to make sure that it wasn't a one-time issue of RPG Maker just being weird, but it's consistently there and it's so specific that I can't imagine it would be some kind of error with the download on my end. Maybe someone else can corroborate.
Not like it's a huge issue either way. Just figured I would mention it because I'm sure these things can be hard to catch if you don't have much reason to go over "old" content once you start working on the next chunk of story.