Ren'Py - Completed - Her Fallen: A Netori Story [v0.31 BETA] [Warrior Novels]

Her Fallen: A Netori Story is a fantasy VN centered around waifu stealing, whether through seduction or corruption.

Unfortunately, it's pretty hard to appreciate a story centric game that's utterly unintelligible. I wish I could give it a scrap of credit, but that's really all I can say about it. I could parse that you could play a good guy or bad guy in your wife stealing, but that's about it. I just couldn't understand what was going on, much less appreciate the scenes.

A complete game, only complaint is its a short game and only 3 endings, not counting failure as an ending, anyways game has a ending with mc and lady but also one more with two girls, it is a netori game (not same as netore), netori which means you do take the girl from someone who liked her, but they weren't together just friends, characters are pretty likable and scenes are decent if a bit short, Story is good, game is easy to play, only maybe 10-15 options. Good game.

Excellent game, There are 3 main routes that are all interesting in their own way, my favorite of course is threesome, The girls are gorgeous, and a little funny, but you are surprised by the “magic of clothes” how she hides Fumio’s gorgeous body, the game fully met my expectations. This is the type of play I like, Lustful with passion, but not completely kinky in a dirty way.

V0.31BETA

Completed the game with both routes, really enjoyed the Love route rather than the lust one but that's just my opinion. Really good game with a cute LI.

My only regret in this game is that it was too short, completed both routes in less that 2 hours in a sitting. Wish it would have been a bit longer than that but it was a quality game and time well spent.

Also keeping an eye on the DEV's current game which is much more story oriented than this and loving it.

Best of luck for all the future games DEV.

Story is kinda good. I enjoy the love route.

Translation a bit rough but you still know what's happening 95% of the time.

Graphic seem ok.

Animation, standard illusion animation.

Love route has a bit of romance with a happy ending.
Corruption route is your standard ntr with corruption, mind break and cuckolding.

It is a bit rough but i have to admit i enjoyed my time with this one, even went for both i guess we can call them love and corruption routes(which i usually don't do)
While the art and animation is subpar i oddly enough found the theme and the writing enjoyable and what kept me going even if the english translation also is rough.

Overall the package is rough and i can see most be put off by it.
For me however i guess the best way to describe it is that this tapped into a kink i wasn't fully aware of and made me realise that for me i almost never see a game focus on netori.
If i encounter it in a game it is usually just a one time thing or as side character not the main focus.

That i think is unfortunate because i have zero interest in the netorare (if i remeber the spelling and words correctly) be very popular and alot of games that seemed to be interesting often turned out to have that definition.
Personally i have no interest in being cuckolded or playing a game from that point of view. Netori on the other hand i find very appealing.

So all in all if you are starved for netori games give this one a go but be prepared it is very rough. But i found it good probably since there is so little of this focus out there that i have seen or come into contact with.

I give this an enjoyable experience out of welcome suprise

This is an interesting and cute little game, with clear passion put into it.








Tlr- if you're just in the mood to fuck another guy's girl you could do a lot worse than this short and sweet game that has much more passion put into it than can be seen at first glance, knows exactly what it wants to do, does it, and ends the story before it overstays its welcome. Just be sure to stick to the corruption path. In a sea of alpha v.01's that just exist to get a patreon base to milk for the next 5 years, this game just feels so genuine.

To start things off, i will say that this game has great potential and the story has a solid foundation for what it wants to do (netori).

With the good part out of the way, let's get to the bad. the renders are ugly for koikatsu, they looked good for a second on the first part of the boob grope scene and then they went downhill fast straight to hell when it got to the masturbation scene, this could be improved with future updates.

Also the english is not very good, it didn't exactly bother me but it was very noticeable on some dialogues, nothing i couldn't understand tho, still, this could be improved on.

The story is so-so, typical manhwa trope of monster invasion, i kinda like how they get their powers tho, it isn't some "game system" bullshit, so that's a plus.

I would say keep an eye out for this one, maybe it'll get better with updates if the dev really commit to improving his work. For now it's a 3 stars game, i'll raise to 4 or 5 if deserved.

As someone who enjoys visual novels, I have to say that Her Fallen: A Netori Story is a promising addition to the genre. Although it is still in its early stages, the game's story has already captured my attention with its intriguing characters and well-crafted narrative.

One thing I particularly appreciate about this visual novel is its attention to detail. The artwork is beautifully rendered, and the music and sound effects add to the immersive atmosphere. The writing is also well done, with believable dialogue and engaging descriptions that pull the reader in.

The game's characters are another standout feature. Each one has their own distinct personality, quirks, and backstory that make them feel like real people rather than mere archetypes. I found myself genuinely invested in their individual stories and eager to learn more about them as the game progresses.

Of course, as with any visual novel, player choices play a key role in shaping the narrative. So far, the choices presented have been meaningful and impactful, leading to different outcomes that make me excited to play through the game multiple times to see all the possible paths.

Overall, I believe that Her Fallen: A Netori Story has the potential to become a beloved addition to the visual novel genre. With its strong start and talented team behind it, I eagerly anticipate seeing how the game develops in the future.

I'll write this as I'm playing, so it might be a bit chaotic, sorry. But I'll forget thoughts otherwise.

Overall: Has potential, but isn't anything exceptional currently. Recommend because I like this kind of simple-minded story, but has a lot of room for improvement. Might be kinda hot if the positioning is improved over time.

English is like, 2/5. Definitely needs improvement. Not quite a turnoff yet though. Notably: Typos, an vs and, "found a sit" instead of "found a seat".. I assume English isn't your first language. It's better than any second language of mine, at least. But I'd advise using tools to improve it, like grammarly or something, if you want to bump this up. Fortunately, the plot, as I perceive it, is laughably unserious, so this isn't ruining anything.

Writing is like, 3/5 maybe? The story is aggressively average. But, it's very honest about what it is, and I also like this type of generic setting. So that's actually a plus for me.

Plot Devices: 4/5
I like that the monster levels have a ranking scheme based on numbers. Too many people are too creative with it, and it's hard to remember. I don't want to remember things for porn to understand what's going on.

Models: 2/5 (The design is fine, utilization is what's poor)
So far, for the intro scene, the side characters are positioned in bad manner with a classroom background. This makes it hard to tell,f or example, if this girl is attractive. At first glance I thought she had short hair. Would advise improving this, because I don't have much "anticipation" for her when this angle makes her look flat and boyish.
Also, it's incredible to me that the MC has cargo pants and acts this conceited. I like it. It's stupid and I think it's hilarious. If he can fuck your girl when he's in cargo pants, what does that say about you? Damn.
Also, it might just be the setting, but the scene with the teacher and MC is fine thus far. Him being dominant towards the teacher is a plus, but I feel like you can portray the scene a lot better. I'll guess it's your first game and you're still struggling with this kind of thing? Very very common for early scenes to be kinda bad, and later scenes to improve drastically with new devs. So hopeful there.

The combat scenes are...unimpressive, but honestly low on the list of priorities, so no complaints.

Animations: 0/5
Literally a slideshow.

Sex Scene: 1/5 maybe 2?
Model is fine. Positioning could use some work, IMO. I did the corruption route, in this case. At least I didn't notice any clipping. But, I mean, handjobs have never been exciting things.