Ren'Py Hermione Trainer [v0.2] [EdgeAI]

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Xill

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If you're going down that path why not make her black or asian. Add some diversity and inclusion.
Well they actually did that with the "sequel" to the books which was a theatre play set 19 years after. Hermione was black. Completely different to her book description.
 

bobvilla123

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We need a new tag called "Polydactyly" for these extra fingers
New fetish unlocked.

- Improve the UI. Small button in the top hand corner to go back was very easy to miss.
This. Just poking around in it and the change from big highlighted door to tiny obscure back button was one of those UI problems that's become common in these games.
 
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RogueKnightUK

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Okay... I just don't get it.
The entire point of making this game is to appeal to fans of Hermione Granger from Harry Potter, right? The young, very petite, small-chested little waif/waifu... So you give her pornstar tits that go completely against the whole appeal of Hermione, and are least likely to resonate with the people who really liked the petite Hermione in the first place? Were you not breastfed as a child or something? Did you not think about the market for this at all?
 

Edgelord69420

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Creatively bankrupt NSFW-gamedevs trying to come up with a game that isn't Avatar:TLA, Teen Titans or Harry Potter View attachment 3946049
I just love Harry potter.
Its one of my favourite fictional worlds.
Dont forget that this is my first game ever in any capacity. I do want to make games with my own world and characters too, but i want to get some experience first.
 

Edgelord69420

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I forgot to put Innocent Witches. Another great game. Is not comparible to this lackluster attempt. Where it is trying to replicate Witches Trainer and failing. Nothing beats drawn. If you're using A.I, make it darker, or funnier, and never cut and dry vanilla with all its presentation on offer, the extent of the training, it needs to unlock by surprise and extreme or humor.
Only reason you can even get a scene at all is because i didn't want to publish a build with absolutely no sexual content. The flirting and scenes wont come as abruptly as they do in this version. The flirt option itself will undergo many changes. Right now its nothing more than a way for the player to get enough affection to even see the scene. Everything is subject to change at this point and the interactions you can have right now are no better than placeholders. There is going to be alot more story and events you need to do before you get to build any sort of relationship with any girls. This is not a final product, this is purely to show off a bit of what im working on. I didnt intend to release it and call it a day when it comes to the state of things and how progress.
 

as22

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Okay... I just don't get it.
The entire point of making this game is to appeal to fans of Hermione Granger from Harry Potter, right? The young, very petite, small-chested little waif/waifu... So you give her pornstar tits that go completely against the whole appeal of Hermione, and are least likely to resonate with the people who really liked the petite Hermione in the first place? Were you not breastfed as a child or something? Did you not think about the market for this at all?
This post hits the point.
Even if you wanted to make a corruption game, you should be starting with her being slimmer with smaller breasts, so you have room to grow them with potions or whatever other creative device you wish to implement.

The fact that the dev didn't even think this far doesn't bode well.
 
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Edgelord69420

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This post hits the point.
Even if you wanted to make a corruption game, you should be starting with her being slimmer with smaller breasts, so you have room to grow them with potions or whatever other creative device you wish to implement.

The fact that the dev didn't even think this far doesn't bode well.
The Hermione design is not finalized. I will work what people want into her final design. The image you see right now is a placeholder. Basically everything is except for snape.
 
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Edgelord69420

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I understand my friend. Except my criticism is Valid. With a trainer you're giving the game away early. No surprise, no fetish, mind control, or punishment. No real humour, pranks. It was very vanilla, and it on an A.I model. It is undressed before you've even corrupted it. It's not drawn, does it have a thatch, does its hole look different, and has it got a dildo in it, are its nipples shaded, or bigger. They're all the same with A.I symmetrical. No surprise there. Nothing extreme or funny. It was like, okay, strip now. Obviously, it was just upto her tits. Yes, done, next the same, done, game over.

Or try to suggest how it is going to be different? Obviously, I have only seen 5 minutes of it?
Well for Snape there wont be a big corruption aspect. She is a grown woman and not at all innocent, although there will be branching paths for her depending on how you treat her. I wont spoil much, but she will change drastically as a person depending on what you do too.

Hermione however, being a young student and all will focus more heavily on corruption. Take everything you see in this version with a grain of salt. Its not representative of what the final product will look like, but rather a way for me to gauge intrest in the project too. Im Spending hours each day coding, writing, editing and drawing to make this game a good game and if no one wants or even likes the idea then i would prefer knowing that as early as possible so i can change the direction or even make an entirely different game.
 
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Korvus

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Hi Edge, I've got some ideas for other characters, this of course being a long term thing.


For some reason WTS seemed to focus on making Cho hermiones rival (they wouldn't have any crossover, Hermiones a book worm, and cho's a jock, they honestly would never meet); But rival wise in this game you could have it be Tracey Davis and Daphne Greengrass for Slytherin; the Patil twins (saves on art, to be honest) for Ravenclaw and Gryffindor; & potentially adding in Lavender Brown whos looking for affection after leaving Ron.

Otherwise you could stick with the good ol' Pansy, who Hermione actively despises, and who she'd eagerly wish to corrupt after you've reached a certain threshold; or feature Fleur the Veela as the 'mind manipulating french tart' (think Jean Grey in Rogue Like Evolution)

(the best thing for those girls, is nobodies really done anything with them, so you can do your own art/designs)

Otherwise there is the old regulars...
Luna's an old favourite but she has been done to death; Susan 'exists' but overall is as neglected as Harry in his cupboard; & tonks... People just get stuck on tonks, don't ask me why.


Alternately, since you've played around with Snape, you could potentially have the rest of the golden trio be genderswapped; or get genderswapped, after they try to confront us when Hermiones reached a certain threshold.

Regardless, best of luck. We will watch your career with great interest!
 
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