Amazing game. I'm a big lurker here, but couldn't avoid wanting to post my thoughts on this creation.
I don't have enough words to describe how sucked in I was to the point where I played it overnight without skipping a single scene or minigame, afraid I'd miss out on something, just wanting to see how the heroines would fall even further, and it sure delivered.
I believe it to be a masterpiece in the works, but there's definitely some things I'd like to point out after playing through version 3.0(I'll try the new 3.6 one today).
1. Dungeon Mini-game
Very early on the hero mentions the heroines lacking performance in the dungeon, and eventually Cecille also confronts the hero about not doing that great in the past few days, but it's very hard to notice with the current version being mostly text prompts with the number of demons killed each turn.
I think having a kill count for each floor and being able to clearly see who's at the bottom and top would be great, besides opening the opportunity to have the hero lash out at the heroines placed at the very bottom and decrease their affection, which was another negative for me, as seeing the unwavering 100 affection/love status towards the hero for both heroines made me doubt my progress with them a few times.
2. Curse Breaking
The first curse breaking mechanic also could have had a better explanation, as I was afraid of filling the bar at first, wondering if had a bug and didn't unlock the Goddess shop, or if I should have focused on raising affection more, as I ended up filling the bar while there were still post-training scenes available.
I saved expecting a bad ending after breaking the curse, but the game just kept going, so I got the idea and went back to watch the post-training scenes afterwards, but that still felt a bit awkward and broke a bit of the pacing, which felt better during the second curse progress, as the post-training events happened regardless of the curse bar being full or not.
3. Morning Groping Mini-game
I don't know if there's already plans for this one, but here's my suggestions.
Have Cecille corruption stages affect her current pose and options available, so at first she's sitting neatly with legs closed and Mars is only able to caress her thighs, butt, breasts and lips, but can be refused with her free hand as well.
She can have different moaning intensities and also tell Mars to stop, with the latter greatly raising the hero's attention, making him look back for a while until Cecille reasures him everything is alright.
As the corruption progresses, Mars can order her to open her legs and shows her breasts, allowing fingering, sucking nipples, kissing and etc, which will contribute more noise and raise the hero's attention further, but might be manageable with some special item or skill upgrade from the demon mother or Cecille smooth talk.
For the last corruption stage it would be nice to have Cecille inviting Mars to play with her, like teasing her own nipples, milking her own breasts, having her tongue out asking for a kiss, groping Mars crotch and giving him a sneaky handjob, pissing outdoors right next to the hero and other unimaginable acts she'd never think of doing before being corrupted.
4. Milking Mini-game
This one is pretty good and fits right into my preferences, but like my suggestions above, I would love to have more content to the scenes, like Cecille moaning or painful groans, making cow noises as her corruption progresses, having an orgasm midway, biting her lips to try and hide it or blatantly putting her tongue out making a sloppy face, and so on.
Being fucked from behind while milked and getting bred, then even having a swollen pregnant stomach hanging down as her breasts get squeezed would be an awecome addition as well.
As for her milk itself, it would be nice to see it having a noticeable effect on Mars, be it increasing his stamina during sex scenes, his strength in the dungeon, or more points to be exchnaged at the hero fragment shop.
5. Pregnancy
I know it's just planned content for now, but as it's my main fetish, I'd like to offer my opinion on what most people with the same preferences might be expecting, considering it won't just be a pregnancy CG ending.
- having a scene with an egg being fertilized
- having a fertilized egg shown implanted in the womb during X-ray
- having multiple pregnancy stages with bigger stomachs each time
- a detailed fetus growth according to the belly size
- birth
So far, the greatest game with the impregnation/pregnancy fetish implementation is Violated Heroine, which I base the above standards on, and unfortunately nothing has ever come close to the detailed system in that game imo.
I'm not expecting the focus of this game to be on pregnancy, but just following the first three points would be good enough to warrant a pregnancy tag, as most games with pregnancy and x-ray nowadays will follow one of three paths:
-exclude x-ray during pregnancy
-include x-ray but show only inflated womb exterior
-show x-ray but with a normal womb, completely disregarding the pregnancy element
As long as it's not the third one, you are good, but if the plan is just to go for a pregnancy ending I won't blame you, as adding pregnant sprites to most if not all training scenes would be a lot of work.
Still on this topic, regarding the story itself, it would be interesting to see what kind of effect the curse has on pregnancy, like giving Mars the option to choose what his child is going to be, from a pure human, to a half-demon like him, or a pure demon.
I'd even go one step further and put the choice in the hands of the heroines, with some mechanic that getting a creampie from Mars or drinking his semen will push the baby towards the demonic bloodline as it's fed mana, so the heroines can do their best and abstain from sex during pregnancy to keep their baby as a pure human or fall into depravity and accept a demon's child in exchange for pleasure.
6. Conclusion
Regardless of my feedback, you have already created a great game, with an engaging story and very polished art and animations, so just keep doing your thing and creating the game you want to make.
I for one am amazed at what can be done with Ren'py after experiencing this game, and feel more and more interested in having a go at it just to put a big focus on my favorite fetishes.
I can enjoy NTR if it's done well, but if I were to make my own game with the same characters I would go on the path of the busty priestess pampering the hero's dick and having babymaking sex every night with his short, endless premature ejaculation penis, until he completely ran out of energy in order to ensure pregnancy and leave as many hero descendants as possible, breastfeeding him overnight so he can recover energy to face the dungeon the next morning.
Sera would be an imposing older sister character for ejaculation endurance training, as the hero wants to make girls orgasm as well instead of only having sex to get everyone pregnant, and Mars would be the suspicious older brother teaching the hero bad things like blowjobs, anal sex, titfucks and whatnot, which doesn't follow the righteous path of babymaking, all while allowing him to play with a homunculus with a body that feels better than any human woman but badmouths him for wasting all his precious semen dumping it inside a doll that can't get pregnant.
Regardless of my own delusions, you have already produced something worth remembering and following alongside its development, so I honestly wish you the best, with even more success and popularity as the game moves forward towards completion. Cheers!