Ok, will
keep it short and will be gone. I suck at making things short huh
I didnt like the game. Well for its first chapter (current content+
Positives?
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Seems like a good array of characters, some of them pretty designs. Not a fan of dye in the hair or pink hair, but its minor and it is what it is.
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MCs Attitude, didnt hestiate or to stand up for himself and would even roast the assholes with flinching. Its believable to me he has a personally from a hero. Personally seems good for me
To early to say if he has the ambition I like when he
moves to conquer his girls
Negatives-
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Hated the ingame choices. I mean choosing ignore on a girl shouldnt remove the girl form the game so early. MC doesnt
know her (and thought it as valid choice, Also thinking more opptinuties of interaction would come later anyway). Instead she need proper development so we get to know her, especially if shes a LI. The choice of removing her from the game should come later, tho
doubt I would even pick it. Because im all for harems. This also applies for others like saying the truth and what not. Did nothing but annoy me, and the choices felt pointless, uninteresting and disruptive . So yeah, I didnt like the choices offered. Seems like if you make one bad choice, then the girl pisses off. I dont like that.
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The betrayal in the beginning felt badly executed. I dont know if it was rushed or anything., you I'd recommend showing the MC was clearly the better hero, and he was carrying the girl. Which would give her valid reason to stab him in the back.. Intead it feels like it came out of nowhere. Nor did it seem like she did it for fame. The way it was executed was like she did it on a whim.
Middle ground?
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At first I thought Karen would be the bitch I very much was looking forward to punishing, but her inner dialog least gave us something interesting to work with. But from the MC pov, she was a bitch, but I guess he could start to see she wasnt a total bitch. But by all means I
wasnt going to have the MC pander to her asif he understood her. Part of being a bitch (as tsundere) is you have to take it on the chin when things dont go your way cause you're rude, and when he hangs wth nicer girls, and you feel alone, you need to change your game and show some of that dere. But it seem like it could of been interesting to see progress/development. Kinda why I say middle ground.
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Black soul thing, wasnt annoying, but wasnt that likeable. Could have or do some interesting thing,s but I guess too early to tell. I think that he didnt just possess someone and make them some evil host was a good thing. But in theory, I wouldnt be against if he possessed someone just to have sex with the MC ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
0Maybe a bit more eye candy and "accidental ecchi" scenes around the house? in the beginning ? Maybe more light to start with (in undies) but then get more pervse?
Overall, didnt like the game. But I wont say the potential is not there. Who knows, could come back in a few chapters and hope I liked it better? /shrugs Certainly if some changes were decided on.
But thank you for the effort of making a game to play. Sure others might enjoy it.