VN - Ren'Py - Hero [v0.1 The awakening] [A Mob]

Well as netori fan and likes the idea of taking some else love interest
I definitely like this VN but this one kind of scratched that itch in me

mc always on top both sex and combat with no drama
i like how the character going and I hope it stays that way and hopes he goes even further.

The understanding I get from the story and characters was a build for two asshole fighting for what they want.

mc is a asshole who only thinks about himself and his desires and emperor is a attention whore dares to mock the gods of the world

I waiting for this VN to have more updates.

render-3 (lot of inconsistency some are great like top some are mud)

writing - 2.5 (he has soul of the game and to convey he using some puns but not working but it is readable the people who are complaining they are out of there minds )

story and plot - 3.5 dude actually has clean cut vision of how to go further

overall -3 trust me it is worth your read

The dialogue and pacing of the story need a lot of work. It feels like it was either written by AI or poorly translated.The story just doesn’t make sense, and half the time, I have no clue what's going on.

There are scenes with "content some people won't like," and they’re just shoved in with the excuse that they’re important to the plot, but there's no real reason for them to be there.

Normally I'd say the game could get better in future updates, but from what I've seen, it doesn’t seem likely this time around

Now this is the type of games you won't see everyday. Liked the approach damn, that emperor is total evil. This one is short prologue but I like the story this one's gonna be adventurous. In this prologue some renders are half baked and animation too. But dev said if everything goes well it's quality will increase later. I don't mind Gore and NTR ( cause it's netori). If everything goes well this one gonna be quite adventurous game filled with blood. For now 3 star cause it's shorter will change the rating in future updates according to it.

Good points.

+ Story

Neutral

* Renders ( some are half baked)
* Writing

Bad points

- Animation ( gonna improve later)
- for plot sake other male gonna have sex with queen in the future she is a future LI of MC (This one's surely not everyone's cup of tea cause they think this one's all about harem and netori. For more clarity check his itch.io page)