music and sounds: needs a LOT of work on it
story: sometimes is hard to follow...and the plot-holes are not making easier.
scenes (action scenes): ok, they are like REALLY cool .
draws (cg): they are nice.
characters: all stolen but mostly ok.
conclussion: this STORY...you can feel the passion, the...love for videogames
but you can also, can see that needs plenty of work on how to TELL that story, wich
elements use to complement it. like the music, or sounds effects, even the
time-line and places where all this happen
(sometimes i find it really hard to follow the transitions). and many MANY others things
that this modest internet citizen can see.
but i was amused the entire time while follow it, and i dont feel in any moment
the story insult the characters or the reader, there is a story, and
hit or miss, this is the way of the DEV to tell it.
this story deserve your time and money.
psdt: i higly recomend, to read it relaxed with an open imagination, and just enjoy the ride.
story: sometimes is hard to follow...and the plot-holes are not making easier.
scenes (action scenes): ok, they are like REALLY cool .
draws (cg): they are nice.
characters: all stolen but mostly ok.
conclussion: this STORY...you can feel the passion, the...love for videogames
but you can also, can see that needs plenty of work on how to TELL that story, wich
elements use to complement it. like the music, or sounds effects, even the
time-line and places where all this happen
(sometimes i find it really hard to follow the transitions). and many MANY others things
that this modest internet citizen can see.
but i was amused the entire time while follow it, and i dont feel in any moment
the story insult the characters or the reader, there is a story, and
hit or miss, this is the way of the DEV to tell it.
this story deserve your time and money.
psdt: i higly recomend, to read it relaxed with an open imagination, and just enjoy the ride.