Hi
ActonBelle.
I just play your game.
And for a first game, I'm amazed by the work and originality you put in it!
The original art (I have nothing against DAZ, but it's a fresh air to see a game not made with that kind of tool).
The attention to details. Like the jackets they wear over their shoulders during the train trip, but which they then tied around their waists once inside the building.
The scene view with the moving little colorful silhouettes.
The UI, like the settings page you have completely redesigned. And with more options than the default, like the dialog opacity slider. The UI really feel and look like if Sam write/draw it.
Also, I'm a sucker for female MC with a pure lesbian route available game. And for what I understand, it's the case in your game, depending of our choices. So another big plus for me.
I don't mind at all that Sam can have interaction with male characters. As long as it doesn't involve sexual ones. In fact I hope we can have some friendship relation with some of them, like Brian. Perhaps he can introduce Sam to the world of RPGs?
I have some questions
- Is it me, or every polite choices imply Sam is submissive? I find a bit odd that initiate a normal social relation like greeting someone when you meet them mean you are submissive to them. In fact it's the only thing I didn't like in your game. I can't get what dialog choice will increase what attribute. So I generally try each to see. Perhaps it's because English isn't my first language and I don't perceive some subtle hints, but it feel random for me.
- Does the dominant/submissive will have a lot of impact? I know I must be in minority, but I'm not a great fan of dominant/submissive relation. Above all if it's implied harassment, humiliation, sadism, rape and other heavy kinks like that.
- Does the transwoman is pre-op or has she totally transitioned?
- There is no harem tag, so what happen if we pursue more than one LI?
A few suggestions (of course you can do anything you want with them)
- In the NPC list page, could you add the name of the characters we know below there little drawn heads. I know we can get it by clicking on the drawing, but I find it will be more convenient to have them right in the page. By the way I like how you make that notepad.
- Adding a few more saves by save page. Perhaps another row of 3, for a total of 9 saves per page.
- Adding the possibility to name save.
- This one is a highly personal taste, but having the choice for Sam to be unshaven or at least trimmed but not bare shaved. I know pubic hairs aren't so trendy nowadays. And also that it will required more work from you. But in addition to my personal preferences, it seems to me that it fit more for a girl like Sam to keep some pubic hairs.
