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Interesting to know that you are looking deeply at ballsacks while playing these types of games o.o You sure you are playing the right game for you?
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Oh, like that other game people want to see action in, Season's Gone (not the title, obviously lol)
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Hi, guys.
Here are the first teaser images for v0.13. I'll post an update in a few days and let you know what my plans are going forward.
Thanks,
DB
Jenny can't believe it.
The girls get together to talk.
Charlotte makes a call.
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Hi, guys.
Here are the first teaser images for v0.13. I'll post an update in a few days and let you know what my plans are going forward.
Thanks,
DB
Jenny can't believe it.
The girls get together to talk.
Charlotte makes a call.
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Hopefully those are that poor mc is going on a fucking spree to fuck any and every chick in any position imaginable and in any place available.
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Dream on.Hopefully those are that poor mc is going on a fucking spree to fuck any and every chick in any position imaginable and in any place available.
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Charlottes body looks bathed in sweat,have you been having naughty dreams?Unlocked
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Hi, guys.
Here are the first teaser images for v0.13. I'll post an update in a few days and let you know what my plans are going forward.
Thanks,
DB
Jenny can't believe it.
The girls get together to talk.
Charlotte makes a call.
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So the game will not be abandoned as some have saidUnlocked
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Hi, guys.
Here are the first teaser images for v0.13. I'll post an update in a few days and let you know what my plans are going forward.
Thanks,
DB
Jenny can't believe it.
The girls get together to talk.
Charlotte makes a call.
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I must admit that I am surprised. I thought he would have at least (well deserved) a month off, and suddenly he is already started working on the next update
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Dear DB, take it easy, no one would have died here if you take a month or two off. In the long run slow updates but a healthy dev is better than fast updates and dev burns out and throws the project...Take it slowly please, Suzi's future anal ravishing cannot be jeopardized...
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"Now Lucy I know that you were honest with me since day one about how you felt for me. Charli, I know that things were rough at first because of your past and how much you have risked opening up to me. Emma, you will always be like the daughter I never had or fucked. Kayla, you are incredibly beautiful and anybody would lucky to have you. I appreciate you all, but sorry to say Suzi offered me anal so you can all just go fuck yourself!"Dear DB, take it easy, no one would have died here if you take a month or two off. In the long run slow updates but a healthy dev is better than fast updates and dev burns out and throws the project...Take it slowly please, Suzi's future anal ravishing cannot be jeopardized...
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Caption--3rd image of Charlotte: "Yes, MC it was a last minute change to my need-dick list. Those two young, fit, 19 year old gangsta men will be here in a few minutes. When they arrive, quietly lead them up to my room. If Emma asks about the noise in the morning, just tell her it was my Bible studies."
Been away a while (RL issues) so haven't been playing/reading most of the VNs I follow. That said i have a few reactions to the update and the various comments about it.
1: DB - man if you need a break for God's sake take it! I love this story and want you to take as much time as you need to finish it as you choose. Thank you for sharing your creativity with all of us.
2: Charlotte is not a child. She is not naive about her industry or the evil criminal environment that is Hillside. She's experienced it first hand, been assaulted, and lost at least one friend to its corrupt practices. So no matter how upset/traumatized she is from watching the MC protect her daughter and the fall out, there is simply no way it makes ANY sense for her to wonder if she can trust him and tell him to stay away. 100% beyond the suspension of disbelief. Not to mention that the only person who actually knows that the MC decided to kill Carter is the MC. In that hand to hand combat it was over in less than a minute at most 90 seconds. Bare handed against a knife? Shit happens very very quickly. She didn't see him intentionally kill Carter, she saw him fighting for his life, her life, and her daughter's life and Carter lost. A choke hold that in the moment was "a little to strong".
Now that said one of the interesting themes is that DESPITE this notion that she fears the MC, thinks she can't trust him, thinks he shouldn't be around her or her daughter, she absolutely brings the BIGGEST POSSIBLE HAMMER to defend him from the police. She refuses to let them "move" him. She tells them that she can flood them with press on a moments notice and that they will not move him unless SHE KNOWS exactly where and when he'll be moved. All the while having an internal debate as to why she's doing this. Asking herself why is she risking so much to protect him.
There is of course only one answer, that despite the false internal monolog that we have to suffer through, she actually knows that the MC put his life on the line to protect her and her daughter, and is grateful, and has a strong attraction and feelings for the MC. After all she protects him EXACTLY as if he was a beloved member of her family.
At the end of the previous update I made the bet that Charlotte wouldn't abandon the man who saved her and Emily. I didn't expect to much emotion angst, but in the end she came through.
3: Zak being dead by the same knife that Carter used to attack Emily and the MC and finding David(?) in the trunk of Carter's vehicle means that NONE absolutely NONE of the improper conduct at the police station would have occurred. No cop is going to grab a lawyer by the throat in front of multiple witnesses. Period. Because they won't be a cop 60 seconds later. Corrupt or not they're not going to defend another cop who is at a minimum a kidnapper and murderer, before his encounter with Emily. For which any good prosecutor could add another kidnapping charge along with two of attempted murder and various assault charges. The arrival of the lawyer would be enough to shut all that down, even without knowing that the FBI had been on the scene and was en route. The combination of Charlotte, her lawyer, and the knowledge that the FBI was coming to take over would have shut all that BS down. Regardless of Harry's influence.
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All of this is why the "flow" bothers so many of us. But I offer the following observation. The ultimate outcome of all of this, with one exception, is exactly what most of us expected. The MC is in the clear. He won't face murder charges. Carter's killing will be ruled self defense and the police will attempt to deflect as much of Carter's conduct as possible.
The exception is that we spent an entire update watching Charlotte completely toss away all the trust, admiration, and attachment to the MC (at least in her "rational' mind) until the very end where she finally decides that Carter dying is a far better alternative to her, Emily, and the MC's death. (Shocking I know) and then maybe moving the tiniest bit beyond where she was in her feelings for the MC before the "event". Very frustrating for those of us not on the Lucy path.
Okay then. So be it. This update advanced the Lucy path. Other paths will likely move forward. Certainly the MC becoming Charlotte's bodyguard is potentially a big change. We'll just have to wait to see.
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Maybe the last two updates were a bit heavy handed, but DB got us to a new place, and moved at least two existing plot lines forward (probably 3 considering Emily, and maybe even 4 if big sis wakes up), and maybe added another with the addition of our sexy FBI agent.
Writing and balancing competing plot lines is damn difficult. So - thank you DB. Regardless of any commentary above, I truly love your story and deeply and fully respect your work ethic, talent, and dedication to bring this story to us. It is my sincerest hope that once you "recharge" you'll finish this VN that I have come to love so very much.
1: DB - man if you need a break for God's sake take it! I love this story and want you to take as much time as you need to finish it as you choose. Thank you for sharing your creativity with all of us.
2: Charlotte is not a child. She is not naive about her industry or the evil criminal environment that is Hillside. She's experienced it first hand, been assaulted, and lost at least one friend to its corrupt practices. So no matter how upset/traumatized she is from watching the MC protect her daughter and the fall out, there is simply no way it makes ANY sense for her to wonder if she can trust him and tell him to stay away. 100% beyond the suspension of disbelief. Not to mention that the only person who actually knows that the MC decided to kill Carter is the MC. In that hand to hand combat it was over in less than a minute at most 90 seconds. Bare handed against a knife? Shit happens very very quickly. She didn't see him intentionally kill Carter, she saw him fighting for his life, her life, and her daughter's life and Carter lost. A choke hold that in the moment was "a little to strong".
Now that said one of the interesting themes is that DESPITE this notion that she fears the MC, thinks she can't trust him, thinks he shouldn't be around her or her daughter, she absolutely brings the BIGGEST POSSIBLE HAMMER to defend him from the police. She refuses to let them "move" him. She tells them that she can flood them with press on a moments notice and that they will not move him unless SHE KNOWS exactly where and when he'll be moved. All the while having an internal debate as to why she's doing this. Asking herself why is she risking so much to protect him.
There is of course only one answer, that despite the false internal monolog that we have to suffer through, she actually knows that the MC put his life on the line to protect her and her daughter, and is grateful, and has a strong attraction and feelings for the MC. After all she protects him EXACTLY as if he was a beloved member of her family.
At the end of the previous update I made the bet that Charlotte wouldn't abandon the man who saved her and Emily. I didn't expect to much emotion angst, but in the end she came through.
3: Zak being dead by the same knife that Carter used to attack Emily and the MC and finding David(?) in the trunk of Carter's vehicle means that NONE absolutely NONE of the improper conduct at the police station would have occurred. No cop is going to grab a lawyer by the throat in front of multiple witnesses. Period. Because they won't be a cop 60 seconds later. Corrupt or not they're not going to defend another cop who is at a minimum a kidnapper and murderer, before his encounter with Emily. For which any good prosecutor could add another kidnapping charge along with two of attempted murder and various assault charges. The arrival of the lawyer would be enough to shut all that down, even without knowing that the FBI had been on the scene and was en route. The combination of Charlotte, her lawyer, and the knowledge that the FBI was coming to take over would have shut all that BS down. Regardless of Harry's influence.
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All of this is why the "flow" bothers so many of us. But I offer the following observation. The ultimate outcome of all of this, with one exception, is exactly what most of us expected. The MC is in the clear. He won't face murder charges. Carter's killing will be ruled self defense and the police will attempt to deflect as much of Carter's conduct as possible.
The exception is that we spent an entire update watching Charlotte completely toss away all the trust, admiration, and attachment to the MC (at least in her "rational' mind) until the very end where she finally decides that Carter dying is a far better alternative to her, Emily, and the MC's death. (Shocking I know) and then maybe moving the tiniest bit beyond where she was in her feelings for the MC before the "event". Very frustrating for those of us not on the Lucy path.
Okay then. So be it. This update advanced the Lucy path. Other paths will likely move forward. Certainly the MC becoming Charlotte's bodyguard is potentially a big change. We'll just have to wait to see.
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Maybe the last two updates were a bit heavy handed, but DB got us to a new place, and moved at least two existing plot lines forward (probably 3 considering Emily, and maybe even 4 if big sis wakes up), and maybe added another with the addition of our sexy FBI agent.
Writing and balancing competing plot lines is damn difficult. So - thank you DB. Regardless of any commentary above, I truly love your story and deeply and fully respect your work ethic, talent, and dedication to bring this story to us. It is my sincerest hope that once you "recharge" you'll finish this VN that I have come to love so very much.
Actually, he had said he was going to take a break on Patreon (I don't go often, but I am a supporter there), citing feeling a lack of motivation, so, it is indeed a bit suprising.I must admit that I am surprised. I thought he would have at least (well deserved) a month off, and suddenly he is already started working on the next update
Hopefully, that will not have a negative impact - if he pushes forward the updates only because he feels obliged to do so and "runs on dry", the quality of the story will certainly suffer, and in the end, he may rush things just to finish it.
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I wonder when that post was posted. Hmm, was the post behind a paywall? or was it public? this answer will show me if the Dev is all about ze money or all about his game and his fans.
Welp, if he is lacking in motivation, it will show through his work. If the next update shows you anything negative, speak up. Then, I would think of finding someone new to support.