VN Ren'Py Hillside [v0.16.3 rework] [DarkBlue]

[AngelsAfterDark]

Zak as an antagonist suck ass and I hope darkblue get rid of him soon. There are greater threats in the game already.
Zak's plan is porn tier stupid and that's fine in other games but here the author wants a realistic story.
I don't know why he's still around, even Emma (being dumb as a rock) should know Zak isn't interested in her after the party.

Let's face it, Zak is your typical college MC, comes of as the good guy but really just wants to smash. I can name a few VNs with a Zak as the MC lol.
But yeah honestly I'm getting sick of Emma's stupidity, she's 18 I honestly don't know why she's as niave as a 12 year old, and not that I want anything to happen to her but I think the only way she'll get a wakeup call is if Zak does manage to do something because MC won't always be there to protect her, she needs to stop being a love sick puppy and that won't happen unless she she's Zaks true colors.

But I agree, Nobody gives a fuck about the Zak/Emma story when there's a way more intresting and important story at play, but who knows maybe Zak might be part of the bigger picture in the end.

 

[LuciferPrometheus]

Let's face it, Zak is your typical college MC, comes of as the good guy but really just wants to smash. I can name a few VNs with a Zak as the MC lol.
But yeah honestly I'm getting sick of Emma's stupidity, she's 18 I honestly don't know why she's as niave as a 12 year old, and not that I want anything to happen to her but I think the only way she'll get a wakeup call is if Zak does manage to do something because MC won't always be there to protect her, she needs to stop being a love sick puppy and that won't happen unless she she's Zaks true colors.

But I agree, Nobody gives a fuck about the Zak/Emma story when there's a way more intresting and important story at play, but who knows maybe Zak might be part of the bigger picture in the end.

Emma acts like a 12 year old because she was probably written as a school student and then made a "college" student because of patreon and the illegality of the whole thing. As sheltered as she is, surely no 18 year old college goer in 21st century who lives in Hollywood of all places acts like her. I can understand being shy and overtly self conscious. But in the 1st chapter iirc she was watching that poolboy movie or whatever and didn't understand why she felt "weird" down there. Maybe it was written a little differently but this was the point. Like seriously? You want me to believe that an 18 year old woman doesn't know what it means to be turned on? Her and the mc have like a grand total of 2 brain cells.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Emma acts like a 12 year old because she was probably written as a school student and then made a "college" student because of patreon and the illegality of the whole thing. As sheltered as she is, surely no 18 year old college goer in 21st century who lives in Hollywood of all places acts like her. I can understand being shy and overtly self conscious. But in the 1st chapter iirc she was watching that poolboy movie or whatever and didn't understand why she felt "weird" down there. Maybe it was written a little differently but this was the point. Like seriously? You want me to believe that an 18 year old woman doesn't know what it means to be turned on? Her and the mc have like a grand total of 2 brain cells.

I agree, I love this VN honestly I think it's different from most VNs I've played, and the MC is a real man instead of a horndog who's in his 30s but acts like a kid who've never seen tits before, I also like the main story with Charlotte but seriously the whole Emma situation is stupid, either she's a retard or as you said she was meant to be written as a much younger girl but no way does a normal 18 year old act like her. Aside from the fact that she didn't know what that "weird feeling" was lol, there's also the way she acts toward her mom, i Cringed at the one scene where she runs to hug her mom when she got back from work, like what 18 year acts like that, maybe some people find that cute or whatever but I think it's rather alarming.

 

[Ottoeight]

DB, dude. You gotta stop makin' her cry, because I ain't that sure I'm gonna forgive you anymore .

Enough said.

 

[Ottoeight]

I agree, I love this VN honestly I think it's different from most VNs I've played, and the MC is a real man instead of a horndog who's in his 30s but acts like a kid who've never seen tits before, I also like the main story with Charlotte but seriously the whole Emma situation is stupid, either she's a retard or as you said she was meant to be written as a much younger girl but no way does a normal 18 year old act like her. Aside from the fact that she didn't know what that "weird feeling" was lol, there's also the way she acts toward her mom, i Cringed at the one scene where she runs to hug her mom when she got back from work, like what 18 year acts like that, maybe some people find that cute or whatever but I think it's rather alarming.

Well, as Lucifer already pointed out the Author had to change a couple of things because of Patreon rules ( = you can't portray minors involved with sex and adult themes).

As I pointed out a couple of times Emma is 14 turning to 15 and she's attending 2nd year high school, in fact.

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

Well, as Lucifer already pointed out the Author had to change a couple of things because of Patreon rules ( = you can't portray minors involved with sex and adult themes).

As I pointed out a couple of times Emma is 14 turning to 15 and she's attending 2nd year high school, in fact.

Then Zak's scene should be removed. If they're in school with Zak and her friend back then, there's a problem there I recon.
I mean, Zak and her friend "could" be 18, but it'd be a rather big stretch.

If she is that young, it stands to reason that her schoolmates are around the same age, so you know, there could be more than one problem and thing to be changed here.

 

[Turki 10]

If I am collecting all the points correctly, the screenshot you see when you try to exit the game will be in this update, Charlotte is wearing the same dress that she met Zak in, Emma calls her mum Charlotte crying while she's in the car with MC I don't know what will happen next but I hope it doesn't hurt Emma in any way

 

[Ottoeight]

Then Zak's scene should be removed. If they're in school with Zak and her friend back then, there's a problem there I recon.
I mean, Zak and her friend "could" be 18, but it'd be a rather big stretch.

If she is that young, it stands to reason that her schoolmates are around the same age, so you know, there could be more than one problem and thing to be changed here.

You know what a high school is, don't you?

There are first year students who are 14 and last year students who are 18 (19-20 too, if they failed a couple of times) in it.
The girls who are bullying her and Zak's pals are older years (most likely last year) students, of course.

Sometimes I feel I should stop posting. It isn't worthwhile, most times.

 

[Deleted member 2755092]

You know what a high school is, don't you?

There are first year students who are 14 and last year students who are 18 (19-20 too, if they failed a couple of times) in it.
The girls who are bullying her and Zak's pals are older years (most likely last year) students, of course.

Sometimes I feel I should stop posting. It isn't worthwhile, most times.

I'm not arguing that, but, it might be stretching it in my opinion Just my opinion mind you, if Patreon's ok with it, there really isn't a big debate about it.

I'm just disappointed that she is that young, which means we won't get to see fuck all after all. I actually thought she was over 18, just dumb as a brick and over sheltered.

 

[Canto Forte]

You just told us Zak is child molestor. A child rapist. A bully. A stalker. A girl trafficker.

You know what a high school is, don't you?

There are first year students who are 14 and last year students who are 18 (19-20 too, if they failed a couple of times) in it.
The girls who are bullying her and Zak's pals are older years (most likely last year) students, of course.

Sometimes I feel I should stop posting. It isn't worthwhile, most times.

I'm not arguing that, but, it might be stretching it in my opinion Just my opinion mind you, if Patreon's ok with it, there really isn't a big debate about it.

I'm just disappointed that she is that young, which means we won't get to see fuck all after all. I actually thought she was over 18, just dumb as a brick and over sheltered.

This game got so much better with all a y all unsustained insinuations.

 

[Ottoeight]

I'm not arguing that, but, it might be stretching it in my opinion Just my opinion mind you, if Patreon's ok with it, there really isn't a big debate about it.

I'm just disappointed that she is that young, which means we won't get to see fuck all after all. I actually thought she was over 18, just dumb as a brick and over sheltered.

Patreon doesn't agree, dude. That's why The Author MUST tell us Emma is 18 and she's attending college.

As I've already written: I should stop posting. It isn't worthwhile, most times.

 

[J.R.]

Well, to me she is definitely older than 14. Her body (at least what we' ve seen so far) looks way more like 18. Yes, mentally she may not be as advanced as most at that age, but I know 20+ girls who are even more sheltered and acting more like a 12 year old sometimes. And when they then finally meet their adored celebrity too...

 

[Dragon59]

Patreon doesn't agree, dude. That's why The Author MUST tell us Emma is 18 and she's attending college.

As I've already written: I should stop posting. It isn't worthwhile, most times.

This make me consider having teens in one of my project, but they're treated as kids until enough game years have passed that they are over 18. They may still engage in activities with age appropriate individuals, but we won't see it until they are 18. For instance, the daughter goes out on a date, but we are missing any explicit content (pan up to the moon...).

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

As i pointed out a couple of times Emma is 14 turning to 15 and she's attending 2nd year high school, in fact.

It would make more sense if she was 14 yeah, but even then most 14 year olds already know about sex and their own bodies. I know there are some late bloomers but her acting like a kid is still a bit too much, not even 14 year olds act like her tbh.

 

[Canto Forte]

She is sheltered as in - other girls her age are getting it, from Zak, so she is bustling with
anger, anticipation, hope, jealousy that some day, she would mount the knob that raped countless others.

This make me consider having teens in one of my project, but they're treated as kids until enough game years have passed that they are over 18. They may still engage in activities with age appropriate individuals, but we won't see it until they are 18. For instance, the daughter goes out on a date, but we are missing any explicit content (pan up to the moon...).

It would make more sense if she was 14 yeah, but even then most 14 year olds already know about sex and their own bodies. I know there are some late bloomers but her acting like a kid is still a bit too much, not even 14 year olds act like her tbh.

Welcome to the life of anyone not getting any while many others of her peers are.

 

[cxx]

we all have something to give to emma.

 

[Canto Forte]

Love and affection .. yes we do and we wish her a cuddly weekend away from troubles of the heart.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Welcome to the life of anyone not getting any while many others of her peers are.

Lol sex does not make you act mature, in high school I knew alot of girls who acted mature af but were still virgins with no sexual experience. the first girl I had sex with was still a virgin but she acted like she had sex with at least 20 guys lol so it has nothing to do with "getting any" . I also have a few male friends who are in their 20s like me but acts like kids sometimes and neither of em are virgins.

 

[Dragon59]

She is sheltered as in - other girls her age are getting it, from Zak, so she is bustling with
anger, anticipation, hope, jealousy that some day, she would mount the knob that raped countless others.



Welcome to the life of anyone not getting any while many others of her peers are.

In case of my project, I expect that the teens will have had some experience in naturist environments, so I expect them to be a little ore advanced about knowledge and risk.

Lol sex does not make you act mature, in high school I knew alot of girls who acted mature af but were still virgins with no sexual experience. the first girl I had sex with was still a virgin but she acted like she had sex with at 20 guys lol so it has nothing to do with "getting any" . I also have a few male friends who are in their 20s like me but acts like kids sometimes and neither of em are virgins.

That reminds me of the tired, old porn trope of a character seeing another naked and they are so aroused they have to start masturbating then and there. It strikes me as rather silly (immature) and unrealistic--especially for someone who has had sexual experience. A person would have to be very badly socialized to act they way many do in porn.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

In case of my project, I expect that the teens will have had some experience in naturist environments, so I expect them to be a little ore advanced about knowledge and risk.

That reminds me of the tired, old porn trope of a character seeing another naked and they are so aroused they have to start masturbating then and there. It strikes me as rather silly (immature) and unrealistic--especially for someone who has had sexual experience. A person would have to be very badly socialized to act they way many do in porn.

Lol right on,it's so stupid, not to mention when The MC gets a boner simply from staring at a girl. Lol Like you must be the most virginiest virgin to get a boner from simply looking at a girl's cleavage or maybe just sex starved idk but in most of these VNs dude be fucking a girl every second and still acts like a kid who've never seen a nipple before. Like where's the logic and realism, if you get that much action surely you should be use to it by now.