After playing through this VN, there are parts I like, and parts that I find frustrating, as it could have been even better than I feel it currently is.
The models/renders are very nice. I've no particular issue with the lack of animations.
This biggest issues I have is with the story and the behaviour/dialogue of the characters. I like the Tinseltown setting with the veteran model who has experienced trauma and abuse, with a naive teenage daughter, and facing harassment from a stalker(s). As others have pointed out, the villains are unrealistic, especially the mogul who isn't bothered to shout out who they want killed. The daughter seems to act like a tween/early teenager rather than someone about to graduate high school. Also, Emma seems to be someone who cries when she thinks a spider is in her hair, but doesn't think they need counselling after being held hostage at knifepoint. Ditto, Kaylah after being molested apparently is fine to want to sleep with MC the next day, and continue with her next photoshoot within a day or so. Also, MC must have Wolverine's healing factor after blocking the knife with his forearm. No hospital visit, and no bandages needed.
The slow burn storyline is fine by me, and I'm interested to see how it all plays out. After what Lucy mentioned of her jealousy, I was reminded of the sister in The Bodyguard but it didn't seem to go that way.
But could someone explain to me as I think I missed it, was the detective a serial killer? I get that he was trying to frame the boy Emma had in the friendzone, but was it meant to be related to the movie producer guy? The pacing seemed all over the place with that scene as well. Was the alley 5 mins down the road from the house? If it wasn't for the tracker, MC would not have found Emma, but how did the detective know if MC would even show up? How long was he waiting? And I get that the police may be corrupt, but it seems like the entire police station is on the take?
I found a couple of scenes amusing. The expression on MC's face when Suzi beat up the bullies was hilarious, and when FBI agent Fox overturned the table, I imagined that if her skin was green, she could have been She-Hulk.
Overall, I have given this a 3/5 as I would like to have been given more choices for situations as it seems the MC (and also the reader) is being carried along without able to affect the story. And the behaviour and dialogue of the characters just doesn't seem realistic, especially the villains.