VN - Ren'Py - Hollywood Saga [v0.5] [Luesdelf]

its actully pretty intresting and something diffrent. good fake protail of real life celebs and a decent story. the potantial is very high for this game . its a standard VR so dont think there will be many gameplay things but for what it is and the potatnial ill give it 4 starts

It's an interesting premise. I'm enjoying the art style and the fakes. The writing needs a few more passes. From what I can tell the MC is a porn producer who was forced out of his own company by his friend who just recently died. He seems to hold extreme disdain for porn and the women who stared in it, even though he was the one creating it. This seems like a strange choice to make in an adult game.

I am interested to see where it goes. I am giving it a higher score just for the art and premise. I truly believe it just needs more content and someone to edit the writing.

TLDR: Good art. Serverly lacking in content. Needs better writing especially in dialogue and making the MC likeable.