It's been quite a long time since I've played a game as genuinely bad as this one. For starters, I had to immediately mute the music because the only sound in this game is randomly chosen and just blasting Hololive shit in your ears with no regard to what scene you're in. The dev didn't bother with making anything like an actual soundtrack, and no matter what song the random selection happens to land on, it's pretty much guaranteed to be unimmersive and just generally intrusive in any scene. Even the volume level is inconsistent.
The model positioning is also awful, with models snapping to barely manipulated default poses many times and remaining awkwardly in poses between scenes, probably to avoid the effort of actually positioning them in a sensible way. There's a cunnilingus scene where the protagonist is actually straightened out on the bed and lying with their face flat against the other's vagina with their arms held at their sides. It genuinely looks like a kid holding up action figures in suggestive poses, and at no point was an attempt to convey motion not incredibly jank. There's also the fact that the first two times you see the protagonist's penis the model completely changes, so they can't even be consistent. Aside from all those obvious flaws, the models are also just of generally low quality, or they're so badly positioned that it makes a decent model look warped. The protagonist in particular is out of proportion with everyone else.
Then there are the random references, which are at best bland and most often actually subtract from the writing quality, which by itself is already pretty bad. Marking them with an asterisk just makes them even more awkward and out of place, which is a feat because the way the writing folds around itself to make as many as possible, no matter how awkwardly placed, already makes them pretty bad. The story is also absolutely nonexistent and I could barely follow whatever the fuck was going on, it never interested me at all. I agree with another review that likened it to a teenage self-insert smut fic, as it's about at or below the average quality that those tend to be.
The only thing I could suggest is completely redoing the entire thing, seeing as how the story and word flow is terrible and how all the characters might as well be mannequins with how random they are and how little they act like who they portray. Again I liken it to a kid with action figures, ramming their way through each awkward adlibbed scene with the power of absolute nonsense and only the vaguest sense of who the characters they're playing with actually are. The writing, coupled with the very poor model use and often very poor models, leads me to feel that this project doesn't have any potential and could only be saved by a complete redo. The only reason someone could like this is if they're just that thirsty for Hololive content and are willing to suffer through anything to get some.
The model positioning is also awful, with models snapping to barely manipulated default poses many times and remaining awkwardly in poses between scenes, probably to avoid the effort of actually positioning them in a sensible way. There's a cunnilingus scene where the protagonist is actually straightened out on the bed and lying with their face flat against the other's vagina with their arms held at their sides. It genuinely looks like a kid holding up action figures in suggestive poses, and at no point was an attempt to convey motion not incredibly jank. There's also the fact that the first two times you see the protagonist's penis the model completely changes, so they can't even be consistent. Aside from all those obvious flaws, the models are also just of generally low quality, or they're so badly positioned that it makes a decent model look warped. The protagonist in particular is out of proportion with everyone else.
Then there are the random references, which are at best bland and most often actually subtract from the writing quality, which by itself is already pretty bad. Marking them with an asterisk just makes them even more awkward and out of place, which is a feat because the way the writing folds around itself to make as many as possible, no matter how awkwardly placed, already makes them pretty bad. The story is also absolutely nonexistent and I could barely follow whatever the fuck was going on, it never interested me at all. I agree with another review that likened it to a teenage self-insert smut fic, as it's about at or below the average quality that those tend to be.
The only thing I could suggest is completely redoing the entire thing, seeing as how the story and word flow is terrible and how all the characters might as well be mannequins with how random they are and how little they act like who they portray. Again I liken it to a kid with action figures, ramming their way through each awkward adlibbed scene with the power of absolute nonsense and only the vaguest sense of who the characters they're playing with actually are. The writing, coupled with the very poor model use and often very poor models, leads me to feel that this project doesn't have any potential and could only be saved by a complete redo. The only reason someone could like this is if they're just that thirsty for Hololive content and are willing to suffer through anything to get some.
