You mean at the beginning dev didn't have proofreader or had a bad one?

I'm not a native as well, so if there are small mistakes I won't even notice. Just hope it's not about sloppiness in writing. Hate that in games and skipped one title with tags I really like, but couldn't stand confusing her/him in every second event having situations like MC is going to fuck a girl and narrator writes: "MC's going to put his dick in him". So thanks for a warning
How can you tell no proofreader from a really bad one? Heh.
As I recall, they attempted to play up the character's Central/South American heritage by mixing in Spanish in a really wierd and jarring way, and they had a massive overuse of symbols like hyphens, dashes, and ellipsis. It was bad enough I fixed some of it for myself and was considering offering to help them, when I got distracted by something else shiny.
But I was curious, so I went and updated my old copy of the game, and it seems they've fixed a lot of it, based on a quick glance through the start of the game where it was worst. I guess I shouldn't be surprised, since they released it on Steam since the last time I played. The formatting on some of it leaves something to be desired, but it's more of a style disagreement now.