I'm so glad to hear the story was interesting enough for you to enjoy it even if the themes aren't quite your favorite that makes me happy about my amateur still developing writing skills, I just updated the game with a new chapter, and I'm about to edit the OP to make it up to date.
I think neither of us have any reason to doubt a pretty sure evolution in a good way, then you sound like a pretty talented young man to me.
Remember that in this kind of work, only time and practice can possibly move you forward. (in all senses of the word)
Anyway, obviously your dedication and passion are already there, so you just have to improve according to what you have in your heart. (that's how we get to become stronger/resistant, and endowed with more creativity in this kind of field, especially in the gaming world) - then if there is no passion invested, it shows in all of the content and it is not good at all. Moreover, patience and passion are the greatest assets that influence the most in this kind of professional field.
I leave you a big hug.
Take good care of yourself.
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I almost forgot to tell you ...
Don't always pay attention to what you are told, then sometimes there are malicious people who post negative comments. - speaking differently: not all comments are good to take, often you have to ignore those who go too far in wickedness, and sometimes in psychological manipulation with their simple words. Ignore them completely.
On the other hand, it will help you build your own strength and defense against these types of people.