Ren'Py - Abandoned - Horny Jail [v0.5.5] [Azazeleuse]

Please update beauty girls next update and l wish change girl sport with beauty girls not black girland lm support game the long the end and munch feature and munch event. l wish next update ever good. Spirit for update

I have 2 main problems with this game, one is rather subjective and the other is objective.

But let me start with the good stuff:
This game makes the most out of the character creation from the HS engine. This means the girls all look very beautiful, original and different.

There are many different kinks and probably more to come in the future, and kinks can be avoided. I personally dislike the Male MC being dominated, so I could avoid that.

The plot progression, story writing, dialogues and scnene layout is done rather well. Nothing feels forced but sometimes things also happen without much warning. For example the MC walking in on masturbating women. I mean, I'm here for exactly that, but maybe there could have been forshadowing, but thats not the end of the world for me, I didnt expect Wheel of Time levels of writing.

For some sex scenes there is sound, like for the repeatable HJ and in the intro shower scene and some others as well, which is very nice and hot and adds alot. I wished all scenes had sound, especially the later ones with May.

Now to the bad stuff:

The objective problem I have with this game is the design. This game is a "Sandbox" .... well it isn't. It is a VN with extra steps and reduced quality of life. What do I mean with that: There is the illusion that you can choose to play the routes of the different characters, but in reality, the progression of all characters stories are linked. This means to progress character A to level 3 you have to first progress character D to level 2. And to progress a characters storyline you have to meet time and place requirements. So in essence, you play a VN but with many unnecessary extra steps and reduced quality of life because of all the pointless traveling and time skipping. With how the "story" is "hidden" now, I'd much rather have the option to chose which story to progress and then get that scene instead of navigating the map and clock to get there.

And then there is the subjective problem I have with the game, that being the writing and structuring of the sex scenes. As an experienced AVN player the addon of animations is very much appreciated but.. they are rather short. The handjob from MAy in the beginning was the best written scene imo because it was the longest one and went into a bit of detail of how May feels and what she wants and likes. Almost all other scenes were rather bland in my opinion. For the most part its: HS Animation preset 1 -> two lines of text -> HS Animation preset 2 -> two lines of text -> HS Animation preset 3 -> two lines of text END. At 25 years of age I played probably a thousand AVNs and watched orders of magnitude more porn. So the sex scenes in this one were barley enough to get me hard, mostly because I anticipated something hot were to happen which helped, but once I got there, the scene was already over. This coupled with the user unfriendly navigation from scene to scene made it so it wasnt even necessaryfor me to remove my pants for this game.

the game just started but the characters are all pretty good but i think it need a lot of more footjob and female domination, pantyhose should be more present. The game overall is clearly not finish but there is already a lots of good point, it just need to add more scene replayable scene. When the gallery will be included it should be ok, so the game has a pretty good story even if its not very logical. I also think that 4GB is a lot idk how you got to that much.

This game looks like it might have some potential, but is too buggy right now, including crashes.

I don't really have more to say at this point, because the game is currently too buggy for me to keep playing.

Good Points
+ Art style and render quality looks pretty good. Especially nipples look pretty high quality.
+ Story itself looks interesting.

Bad Points & Suggestions
- Gallery function needs to fix, currently, it shows we have only 2 gallery entities but the game has more than 2 entities already (sex scene)
- Game's first render is some photo outside of the game render style and it's not a good choice. DEV should replace that with something he draws with game current art style instead of using a photo from our world.
- The translation of our game is very bad and it is very difficult to understand the game due to the semantic shifts. DEV needs to find a good translator ASAP.
- Animation physics and FPS value needs to improve.
- It's a sandbox and that's good enough to annoy players alone but not having some helper buttons makes things more annoying, like not having any button lead your bed, etc. For sleeping, you need at least 3 clicks and that's kind of annoying.
- It's 4GB and this is just the first release... DEV needs to work on his skills and make the game file size smaller.
- Listening same music over and over again is pretty annoying. Adding some non-copyright music could be pretty good.
- UI looks pretty cheap and the arrows look pretty big and odd, they need change.

For The End
Well, what can I say? It feels like something with good potential but the execution of that potential is pretty bad... It's the first version so I'm gonna give it 2 stars and hope DEV would make a better job with the next releases. Especially hiring a good translator is pretty important, without a good translator DEV shouldn't wait for any success from this game.

The new events are really good, the dev's definitly trying its hard, I really like how the novel its looking now, last time I played v0.1, today I tried v0.4, and oh boy, its better, keep up with the good work dev!