I thought I would really enjoy this one. The art is great and it has some hot bitches that get fucked silly. What not to like?
Well, a lot actually. The story is simple, guy bumps into his highschool crush. She is married but the bedroom is dead, so he ends up having an affair with her. So far so good. The sex scenes are also good, he fucks her until she cant take any more. So far so good. But then the problems start happening. The dialogue? Well, it has these annoying ellipses, panting, "hehe"s, "ah"s etc. It makes it read like one runon sentence where everyone is slightly drunk and out of breath.
But it gets worse.
The main girl is cheating on her husband, the MC isnt married, so really, she's the bad person. But she still treats the MC like her property. If he wants to fuck another girl, she has a problem with that. She still wants her loving married life with her husband, and MC's dick is just the thing she needs to keep her lust in check. She knows he loves her, but she doesnt treat him fairly. MC meanwhile is a doormat that bends over backwards to make her happy. He's just a sidepiece, yet he acts like a boy in love and doesnt seem to understand he's being exploited.
I'm not sure how to rate it, I know you arent supposed to put your own personal preferences in a reveiw, but at the same time I think it will poison the story for most people. Youre promised some wifestealing, but the wife is a bitch. The prose is annoying to read, and only the art and some of the scenes are worth it.
Well, a lot actually. The story is simple, guy bumps into his highschool crush. She is married but the bedroom is dead, so he ends up having an affair with her. So far so good. The sex scenes are also good, he fucks her until she cant take any more. So far so good. But then the problems start happening. The dialogue? Well, it has these annoying ellipses, panting, "hehe"s, "ah"s etc. It makes it read like one runon sentence where everyone is slightly drunk and out of breath.
But it gets worse.
The main girl is cheating on her husband, the MC isnt married, so really, she's the bad person. But she still treats the MC like her property. If he wants to fuck another girl, she has a problem with that. She still wants her loving married life with her husband, and MC's dick is just the thing she needs to keep her lust in check. She knows he loves her, but she doesnt treat him fairly. MC meanwhile is a doormat that bends over backwards to make her happy. He's just a sidepiece, yet he acts like a boy in love and doesnt seem to understand he's being exploited.
I'm not sure how to rate it, I know you arent supposed to put your own personal preferences in a reveiw, but at the same time I think it will poison the story for most people. Youre promised some wifestealing, but the wife is a bitch. The prose is annoying to read, and only the art and some of the scenes are worth it.