Pros:
- finally an MC who is actually a person of color (and not just another white person with spray on tan)
Cons:
- the Pros section didn't need to be plural
- this is a 2 minute story with no decisions, no plot, and no relationships or character development or anything intriguing save a single sex scene (with no context) suggesting the author has never been in a sauna before
- the dialogue would have been better if nobody said anything
- you've spent longer reading this review than you will playing that kinetic novel
- finally an MC who is actually a person of color (and not just another white person with spray on tan)
Cons:
- the Pros section didn't need to be plural
- this is a 2 minute story with no decisions, no plot, and no relationships or character development or anything intriguing save a single sex scene (with no context) suggesting the author has never been in a sauna before
- the dialogue would have been better if nobody said anything
- you've spent longer reading this review than you will playing that kinetic novel