VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Hotwife Ashley [Ch.6 v1.0 Final] [respirit]

It really goes well! Especially the main character! She is very unique and sexy. As it seems the developer is getting better and the game catches more and more. This game deserve more than that.
Idea 5/5
Text 5/5
Render Quality 4/5

I'll start by saying that this is my favorite genera, so I'm not putting up a negative review because I'm playing the wrong game. There just isn't anything good in this game.

The models look outdated, the dialog is awkward and badly written, the characters are painfully bad... and the sex scenes are horrible. It's like it was written by a teenager who's entire knowledge about sex comes from watching porn scenes.

I was really excited about playing this game, but I couldn't be more disappointed. Skip this one, there's a ton better on this site.

Fantastic NTR VN. It is very much a VN (not really any 'choices' or 'interesting decisions' so much as 'click to play through your fav kink). And the name is a bit missleading as it is more weighted toward the cuck lifestyle then the hotwife one. And they are only similar from the outside, underneath there are Very different. So that's all the 'meh'. With that out of the way though, this game is fantastic at what it is. The art is hot, the writing is great, the situations are exciting and spicy, the language is sexy without being vulgar (I rather like vulgar but it was well-done regardless), the important characters (the girls) are distinct looking (the wife is very teasy and foxy), and it left me wanting to see more. I can't wait to see where this goes!

I like this game, I find that there is a kind of complicity between the characters, I really appreciate the scene about chastity, it was not too heavy, just a little quick in acceptance, but it's just a game after all. Bess is interesting as a mentor and should perhaps advise Ashley to become more dominant and BBC slutty.

The story is as subtle as a brick and reads like it was written in 5 minutes and the translation to English is very poor. The images and sex scenes are also very badly done giving the feel the game is from 5 years ago. Give this a miss unless you are desperate for a poorly done cuckolding/NTR game.

How can I rate a game?

Somehow I'll talk about myself to explain my opinion about this game, I hope that people understand what I wanna say.

In this forum, I see some very objective reviews about design, but I'm not a specialist on that.

Thanks to anonymity I can assume, I'm a real cuck. I wanted to see all girls I ever had, being fucked by other guys in my front. I'm not like a beta, I'm handsome, have average shape, smart, persuasive and confident.

You are thinking: what the hell this guy is talking? So, NTR games, like most pornography about cuckolding don't understand this fetish. This category is polluted with stereotypes that only makes sense in real life IF things goes wrong. But, I can tell you 99% of the profiles in cuckolding and NTR forums are men. Men who want encourage his wife or a model to fuck with other guys. Do these guys wants to feel "violated" or cheated? mostly, no. And when things get to that point... It's bad, not funny

the plot of an average NTR game is like: the guy have a fetish to share his girl, but he don't have courage to tell her or to share her. So, somehow his girl is corrupted or blackmailed by a second guy and cheat her bf\husband behind his back. Other plot so common: Wife starts literally like a socyopath, don't respect his husband and fuck others.

In both options, she don't have husband consent or encouragement. But in real life, this is a couple thing. In real life, cuckold\ntr are a MALE fetish. Most girls don't fantasize with that, because according to evolutionary researches (biology, sociology, psicology), they select "the best guys", and a cuck is, after all, a guy who wants to feel weak. So immediate prompt answer when we talk about this, for the first time, is 'NO', even if they want and find it interesting. They know who they are. But with the correct encouragement she will do that for you.

And there 'born' the second role in cuckolding: the HOTWIFE. A woman who fuck with other guys with his man consent. I assure you that real live is totally different of games or pornography. When the hotwife is full independent, it's called cuckoldry. it's a sub-niche, less common

The third role is a Bull. A guy who fuck the girl better than her male. They're stereotyped as blacked, but no... You only need have a good dick, fuck well, have a average~good shape and average~good stature

I've seen relationships broken exactly equal to porn cliches. The women corrupts (Fast or not) and lose her passion and respect for his partnet. So first take: These contents could be good to endgame, but not for start.

Honestly the real funny is not the drama, but the adventures and the transformation, is see your girl corrupting before your eyes, with your validation. AND the cuck will CUM A LOT too! he needs to enjoy the party too. The cuck is not passive. He can kiss his wife, suck her tits and pussy, take an sloopy seconds, masturbate himself, or maybe he only films the scene and watches after. everything depends who kind of guy we are talking about.

Since I played the first version this game is improving on many points, and becomes one of my favourites. I can say that, today, this is the best cuckolding game on this forum. The dev captured at least most of this essence.

Ashley make sex with other guys to please her husband, but not only. You see she love do that. Ashley is more bossy, she takes the reins and yes there are couples like that. But you can see that MC love that, every sex scene is consented or allowed by him.

Her corrupting don't start by MC, but by her crazy friend. The DEV took care of it and shows that her ever put the relationship before her sexual feelings. Though she looks like a whore, she is faithful.

The only fact that put wife, husband and bull in the same room, kidding with ''size matters'' and introduce a hotwifing-cuckolding relationship as couple thing, with consent, i.e in the correct way, make me give 5 stars. Hotwife ashley is the better game about hotwifing\cuckolding on internet in my opinion.

tips for the future: Ashley looks like a whore. I think it would be more fun if she was a little more sheepish. Second: Give us funny. Parties, introduce us swinging couples with similar desires, not all hotwifing, but one or other different, more oriented to bdsm, or a cuckqueaning (the girl who wanna see her guy fucking other woman). Mix roles, mix people. Pool parties, beach vacation, etc

congratulations for the game. And thanks for attention.

I love the story and it's really hard to find games that are exclusively about NTR. Maybe put more choices to corrupt ashley even more, but it's really a good game, the characters are well designed and the corruption process is neither too fast nor too slow. Thank you and keep up the good work.

First off - cuckolding is not my kink. But pride myself on not kink-shaming, so it's all good on that side.

But this game is just not good. It's visually unpleasant. The sex is not presented well. And the writing is not even close to being on a native English level - to the point where the text sometimes becomes unintelligible. But beyond the mere lack of English skills - the writing is also so bad that I just have to give an example. You have to see it to believe it. What follows will also illustrate perfectly what the dev seems to think passes as "gameplay".

1. CHOICE: A) Go to work. B) Take shower.
2. [I choose B]
3. TEXT: You take shower before you to work. [Surprise!]
4. TEXT: You go to work after your shower. [very important to clarify for all the heptapods in the audience that have a non-linear perception of time]
5. TEXT: You came to work. [Now, I have to point out that at this point we haven't even established where the MC is working or what he's doing. This is literally the only line that refers to his job so far in the game].
6. TEXT: After your shift ends, you are on your way home. [a shift doing what?]

Now let's see what changes we're in for, when we make a different choice.

1. CHOICE: A) Go to work. B) Take shower.
2. [I choose A]
3. TEXT: You came to work. [again: so much stunning detail here, it's as if I was really there]
4. TEXT: You stink, you'd better take a shower. [the plot thickens]
5. TEXT: After your shift ends, you are on your way home.

And the only consequence later in the game is that come the next morning, you get no choice and are forced to choose to take a shower. Oh, I didn't mention? Yeah, this amazing bit of gameplay and writing repeats more than once...

Pretty good, I see the potential on creator of the game. Good renders, creative story, great character improvization. I believe it'll be one of the best games in it's genre in the future. Highly recommended if those fantasies suit you. Must give it a try.

Thoughts on v0.8 -

I'm on the fence between three and four stars. If cuckolding/NTR games are your thing, I think this is a game you'll want to watch. It has the potential to hit a lot of the specific fetishes within this genre.

On a not so bright side, there's some things that could definitely use some ironing out which is why I went with three stars. Previous reviews have pretty much mentioned most of these, but they're worth repeating in hopes the dev will address them at some point.
- a proofreader would greatly enhance the flow of the story. At too many points, I paused to figure out what they were trying to say.
- unnecessary extra clicks damn near drove me to stop playing the game. I would spam the enter button and then scroll back just so I could read the story more fluidly using my scroll wheel. Also, most of the time, going to work provided nothing to the story, yet it'd still show a picture of your empty office. Removing these things and working on providing a bit more depth to the story would greatly enhance this game.
- some of the character models are not good. I know nothing about coding, rendering, etc, so I don't know if it's the lighting, the rendering or what, but Rasheed doesn't look human. It's not as bad as some of the black characters I've seen in some of the Honey Select games, but it's still not good. He seems to be getting a little better later in the game (or maybe I'm just getting used to him looking that way). Also, Ashley... I can't help but picture Jack Nicholson in the Batman movie when I see her face. The rest of her is pretty nice, but something is really off with her mouth, and at certain points, her makeup is just bad (like when she goes to get a piercing). Beth is pretty hot though.

While I do enjoy a slow burn, I'm glad this game isn't one at this point. Perhaps the dev could go back and fill in some scenes later (perhaps too hard to do, I don't know). Too many NTR games that do the slow burn thing from the start, spend a year following the game with no good scenes, then game gets abandoned. At least there's something here already.

But despite my complaints, I do enjoy the game as is, but I think it could be one of the better NTR games on this site if some of the above were addressed.

I liked the story. There were a few bizare parts. She goes too fast and the MC doesn't really play a part. The blonde friend is hotter than Ashley too. Art is not all that bad. The story works, would be better with some tweaking. Slow burns are always better than quick to the punch. Build the story a little more. I mean, she can still be a slut without flying off the handle and getting fucked by anyone who's willing right away.

hotwife ashley is a game just like my dreams. a unique piece for those who love fantasies like ntr and cuck. if it continues like this, it is a candidate to be one of the best games of this genre. i hope it continues like this. excellent.

This game is definitely only going to appeal to NTR/Cuck fans and for all intents and purposes feels more like a female corruption/protag game.

I understand what the dev is trying to do here, and he has some hits and misses with the story that can't seem to decide which co-protag is in the driver's seat.

As others have said, the execution is hit and miss, and if the dev showcases a strength here, it's in pacing the rate of Ashley's descent into hotwifery.

As others have stated, the bulk of the "good" content is hidden behind a paywall, which is an understandable, if regrettable deployment choice as I personally find it difficult to decide if the patron content "juice" is worth the squeeze.

The dev also made a design choice that I personally found frustrating in this last update: Many Ren'Py players have their own preference on scene transitions (dissolve or instant) but Respirit has put a 2-3 second dissolve between individual image files which feels frustratingly long. Whether this was designed to force the player into a perception of increased playtime/content delivered per update, or is just the dev's personal preference I won't speculate on, however I immediately edited the extended dissolves out of the script file so I could play without beating my keyboard to death.

Story : Standard, nothing to set it apart
Art: Average to below-average with some consistency issues
Dialogue: Average (Engrish and some awkward phrasing)
Fapability: Not rated. Fap scenes mostly paywalled
Quality: QC appears minimal, but no errors. Production values are generally below average.
Potential: Decent, if the quality improves with experience.

I'm awarding 3/5 for now, as I hope the dev continues with his project and improves. I'll edit the review up or down every few updates based on the trend I see.

Promising start. I liked the fact that the wife is not some kind of generic model wife IMO. I also like the MC directly witnessing his wife intercourses.

Game version: [Ch.3 v0.8]

There's the core of a decent game here, if you are into NTR/cuckolding, but the execution is incredibly amateurish and detracts from the experience. Render quality varies wildly, most look pretty good but every few renders you get one that's atrocious, with fucked up lighting or people with completely unnatural looking skin colors.

The writing is another aspect that brings it down, the dialogue is pretty Engrish and devoid of much character, the game would benefit from some editing. It's also structured pretty badly when it comes to choices and insists on putting you through useless "you went to work, nothing happened" transitions constantly.

If the dev can make the render quality more consistent and improve the script we could have something pretty good here, but putting in paywalled content is a big yikes, especially when your whole game has like 4 sex scenes and 2 of them are "Patreon exclusives." I'm not a fan of extra in-game content for patrons in the first place, but to do it this early on and with such a mixed quality game is really not a great recipe for growth.

Ch3 .08 Public Review

Decent renders, not much of a story, more of a cuckold simulator than anything else (especially the public version).

Best content, as of this review, is locked behind his patreon version. Out of 3 new scenes the one we get to see is just a bad handjob scene with optional cuck cum kiss ending.

I'd steer clear until someone can upload his patreon content (thats if he has any patreons with this stunt).

The game doesn't have the best graphics, I guess you could say that because of that the main girl is more realistic as she is not a DDD bimbo, even tho I like DDD bimbos I appreciate the change.

Your decisions are mostly if you wanna watch a scene or not, except for those scenes that are only for patreons, I mean, I am no developer and I could be wrong but I think you should first show the good stuff of your product and then look for support and not the other way around.

The game works very good with the kinks that are meant to be in this type of games , good ntr content, but not the best out there.

If NTR and other tags suit you, this is the game for you. I loved it!

Although the introduction is a bit long, the events happen very quickly and really exciting and beautiful events happen to you. The choices in Chapter 3 are so detailed and wonderful, I loved the detail of the choices. I also noticed that the quality of the renders is getting better and better, the renders in Chapter 3 are very nice. Ashley is a very attractive woman. As I wrote in the comment, children who did not look up from the computer criticized Ashley's appearance. Guys, this is what a standard and beautiful woman looks like in real life. Not like barbie like other bimbos. People need to understand that.

Only the communication part could be improved a bit more. That would be my only criticism.

I wonder where it will go and I will continue to follow this game. As I said, if NTR and other tags suit you, this game is for you.

I did like this start on the game but I do have a softspot for this type of game. There could be some enhancements in the communication ( I would love to help the developer expand this) The graphics are good, animations as well. I like the pace of the action as well.

I'm going to cautiously give this a good rating. The game is good, the renders are good. Not a lot of action but I expect more will be added soon. I know how difficult making a game is, so I appreciate the dev working on it in their free time. A tiny improvement I'd like to suggest is the option to hide the text box UI that blocks the image. That's it from me! Hope this game does well!