VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - How I Got my Friend Pregnant [v0.2] [Zombie Studios]

Firstly, there is litarally no real content. Just some intro banter and like 2 sexy scenes, none of which involve real interaction.

Secondly, the renders are fucking ugly. Change the girls NOW, dont wait until its too late. Basically use proportions of the cousin dana, this is the one that at least somehow looks like a human beeing.

Yes, have one or 2 with those monster tits, but not every bitch and do something to the faces pls.

Also I suggest noone to download this until mayb 0,5 or so, if we get nothing but content now.

loved the game girlz are sezy and all diffeerant
bets of all story was differant than most
I didnt see problem with intro pics like some ppl they were netter than a lot of iray but now in iray so top rsnk
mom is my fav hope she gets preg to
big fan

[Rev @ v0.2]

The old softcores Skinemax would show after 10pm have more effort and believability in plot, dialog, and presentation of the female form.

Art's not great, but not the worst I've seen.

Writing voice IS among the worst I've seen.
Plot is bad.
Characterization is unlikable in the extreme.

Porn tags are all right up my alley, but I never got to any scenes because the intro made me click out.

Not the best renders but the story is uncommonly funny and entertaining and a good change of pace from the usual games. The content was a little lacking otherwise I may have given 5 stars, maybe when in an update or two I'll raise or lower it. I'll be watching this game and hope it does well.

A nice change of pace from the cookie cutter incest set up.
The story is unique interesting and funny and I did not the the normal spelling or Engrish issues despite the dev looking to hire a writer.
The images were not great but a lot better than I expected of 3delight, it didn't have a lot of content but better than expected from a prerelease.

Some rated low due to devs joke about patrons. There are jokes thru out the game and this should not be taken seriouly as stated on his patron site his game is always released to the public for free same day.

This looks like it is going to be a great game and I look forward to more from this dev.

Ask for money like EA with additional content for force us to do it, but before asking money for additional content remove some bug (text not readable etc).

the idea of the story is not bad, but the developer seems to prefer money of quality (some dev ask first idea and help for find the bug, but here, money first !!)

First, during the prologue, the author tells you about a fantastic scene that he won't tell unless he got lot's of money on patreon, but he tell you this while the protagonist is speaking so the author is asking money with the protagonist "voice", it break the forth wall and this early in the story, it gives a really bad opinion of the game.
Then the prologue ends, you see the first screen, with three bad looking Daz 3D girls with huge inflatable boobs and the sentence "this is not looking good". Yeah, spot on, and I don't think I want to continue...