So with everything said above how should she look and what should be changed?
Nobody can tell you how your in-development character should specifically look, but we can point out off-putting features.
As others have pointed out, she doesn't look good. Quite bad, actually. But please don't take our feedback personally or as an attack in you--creators should know to separate themselves from their art.
As to this character though yes it's bad. She doesn't look natural. Her face is very strange. Her eyes are angled inwards extremely, it's like a "V". Nose and mouth/lips are very large and bulky.
You're honestly probably best served to start with an existing character and make SMALL tweaks as opposed to coming up with a model from the base genesis figure.
But if you look at your character and still don't see what we're talking about, you may not have the eye for it.